Hey guys and gals! Sorry if I don't update often...either I'm too lazy or it's a weekday. Enjoy this redone chapter!


Percy's POV

One month later…

The girl and I were lashing out at each other in a fight, sword v.s. scythe. The sword and scythe clashed in a fury of sparks before the blades pulled away. We were in the zone and neither of us were gaining the upper hand until she made the mistake of stabbing towards my stomach. I dodged, stepped behind her and held my sword to her neck.

"Yield." I said. Her eyebrows turned to a frown as she tried to think of a way out of it. "Yield!" I said more forcefully.

She sighed before saying, "Fine I yield. But you need to calm down Percy."

Percy smiled before lowering his sword. "Shut up Achilles." He said still smiling.

She raised her hands. "Sorry for telling the truth..." she muttered.

Percy smacked her in the back of the head. "I thought I told you to shut up!"

Achilles smiled before walking back to the cabin. I went to the dining room and told an invisible servant to get me some food before long I started to find myself staring at Achilles who followed me in from outside.

I stared for a while. I can never get enough of those golden eyes. Shining like a star. Like diamonds. I thought. Suddenly my food was served. I took my eyes off Achilles and started to eat my dinner. Achilles did the same.

Sighing, I stood up and went to his bathroom and washed my hands before walking into my room. I flopped onto my bed and turned on the T.V. Soon Achilles walked in, and layed down next to me. "Watch ya watching?" She asked.

"The commercial channel. The only channel dedicated to commercials."

She starts to laugh. "That's...so...stupid!" She said in between laughs.

I frowned before hitting her in the head with a pillow. "Don't make fun of commercials! They are USEFUL!"

Achilles throws a pillow back at me before we start to watch the commercials. Achilles makes fun of most of them causing me to smile. Achilles would shove me lightly when I laughed but she smiled too.

I laughed at a comment Achilles made about Oxi Clean (A/N- Oh snap Oxi Clean you just got SPONSORED!) and Achilles shoved me too hard. I started to fall off the bed but grabbed onto Achilles who fell on top of me.

We were both blushing but before I knew it I had kissed Achilles.

She looked shocked. I pulled away and was about to say sorry when she kissed me back. Now I was the one shocked. But I started to kiss back and soon we were making out on the floor.

We pulled away from each other, breathing heavily. "Wow...that was...amazing." Achilles muttered. I nodded and got up. I helped Achilles up and she looked at the floor.

I was about to say something when Achilles muttered, "Well...um...uh...see you tomorrow!" before dashing out of the room. I stood there looking at the door before hearing the slam of hers.

I laid down in my bed and dreamt of a voice.

"Well Percy, looks like you're in love...sadly we don't think she'll leave voluntarily so we'll be picking her up soon. Goodbye!"

I was then woken by a blood curdling scream from down the hall.


I hope you guys liked my redone chapter! If not...well that sucks 'cause the old one is gone. Anyways, please review, and don't forget to follow and favorite. Se you later!

~bringthemoney