A/N: Thanks for the reviews. Sorry I haven't updated sooner but I'm working on six other stories and am stuck on all of them. So as you can tell my writting has been a litle slow but I think it's picking up becuase I've got the next two or three chapters ready tp post. I hope you like them. enjoy.
Fortune Zyne: I thank you for all your help with this story. I've taken part of your idea for Rebecca and am using it in this chapter but I don't know if I'm going to use your chapter that you gave me. Again I thank you for all your help.
Rebecca came through the gate on Teal'c's planet and at first didn't see anything but trees, all around the gate but as she began walking she found a path that lead to the top of a hill where that held a city. She walked into the city and began asking people if they'd seen a warrior named Teal'c. She passed mny people but no one cared to ackowledge the fact that she was there, yet alone tell here where Teal'c was. Feeling alone a feeling she had grown used to since her real mom and dad didn't ever care about her. Once for her seventh birthday, she spent the entire day trying to get loose the cops cause they had caught her dealing drugs that she had to get for her mom, or her dad would beat her. As Rebecca tried to shake the bad memory, she sat down by a rock on the edge of the city. She'd been walking for at least an hour and wasn't any closer to than when she started.
A little while later, Rebecca saw an old man aproch her. He had a metal staff in his right hand, a silver cap on his head and a gold symbol of some sort on his forehead.
"People say that you are looking for Teal'c."
"They would be right. I need his help, do you know where I can find him?" Rebecca asked a she stood to her feet as she ran her right hand through her hair.
"Yes What is your name little one?"
"Rebecca, Rebecca O'Neill and I don't like being called little one. I'm almost an adult on my planet." Rebecca said trying not o be rude or sarcastic but didn't succede.
"Oneill, you say?" The man asked,
"Yes. Who are you?"
"Bratack. Come, I will take you to Teal'c." Bratack said as he walked down the path, leaving the city and Rebecca followed quickly behind.
Rebecca and Bratack ame to a beautiful home that was about thirty minutes awy fro the city and Rebecca had figured that she had waited this long to find Teal'c, half an hour more wouldn't hurt. Bratack knocked on the door and a boy about Rebecca's age opened it.
"Bratack." The boy exclaimed
"Ryack, is your father in?"
"Yes, come." Ryack said walking further into the house and Bratack and Rebecca followed him up the stairs , where Ryack and Bratack went into a room. Rebecca did not follow becaus Bratack had told her to stay out in the hall but he had left the door open so she could hear everything.
"Father."
"Yes, Ryack." Teal'c said sounding slightly iritated.
"Bratack is here to see you." Ryack said and then walked out of the room and went back downstairs.
"Hello, Teal'c." Bratack said
"Old friend. What brings you here?"
"I've found a young girl who is looking for you."
"For me? Why?
"I know not but her name is O'Neill." Bratack said and assuming it was allright for her to go into the room, Rebecca walked in and saw lit candels everywhere and Teal'c and Bratack standing in the middleof the room. Teal'c bowed to Rebecca was she walked in the room and nor knowing what else to do she did the same.
"You are the daughter of Colonel O'Neill of the Tari?" Teal'c asked.
"Tari?" Rebecca asked looking from Teal'c to Bratack and back to Teal'c
"Around here," Bratack began, "people from your planet are called Tari."
"I see. Yes, Teal'c, Jack is my dad, not my real dad but I didn't come here to talk about my past. Teal'c I need your help." Rebecca said as she procceded to tell Teal'c and Bratack what had happened to the original members of SG-1 as well as some other people.
"So will you help me?" Rebecca finally asked.
Teal'c and Bratack looked at each other, Teal'c bowed his head to Bratack and then spoke to Rebecca.
"I will assist you RebeccaO'Neill. Your father is a great friend of mine and I once fought along side him in battle. It would please me greatly to fight along his daughter's side as well."
"Great! Thank you Teal'c" Rebeca said as she gave the big black man a huge and then Bratack said,
"I shall come as well. If SG-1 is captured as you say they are, you will need more power than a singel jaffa and a woman can give."
A/N: Hope you liked it. Sorry if you think its short but I promise it will pick up. That's really all I have to say. Please review.
