Wow I just read my own story and it is bad. No wonder no one reviews lol but because I love to torture people I will finish it plus I only have like a few chapters left. The bad part is that the last time I made it everyone said it was so goodsad. Oh shit that concert made my neck hurt. I cant take it do you think that if I cut off my neck it will fell better.

Ren turned around, "Ren," yoh said in a concerned voice. Rens eyes were crimson red and he had fangs coming out of his mouth. He looked like he was about to kill.

"Young master," said Bason putting his hand on his shoulder but Ren shook it off.

"That's the son that I always wanted" Tao laughed a big booming laugh and Ren charged the surprised boy. Tao walked out the door, "That's the end of them and my boy," he chuckled again.

"REN," screamed Yoh as he put up his sword to block the attack from the demon boy. He instantly turned and took a swing at Horo-Horo who ducked.

"Yoh, we have to get Elie and leave," said Amidamaru.

"No, I won't leave Ren," Yoh put up his sword and blocked another attack, "Separate," he yelled to everyone seeing how close they were. Horo-Horo jumped to the back making Ren chase him and Lyserg went to find Elie in the cells.

"What are we going to do? We cant attack him, he doesn't have Bason," Horo-Horo was trying his best to avoid the endless assault on him but to no avail. Ren nailed him in the side making his face cringe and his movements slow down. He got hit a few more times making him fall to the ground. Yoh jumped in front of him and kicked Ren to the ground.

Lyserg head popped out from behind one of the cells," found her," Yoh picked up some knifes and pined Ren to the ground. He tried to shake free.

"Lyserg, can you do something and get that thing out of his head," said Yoh over his shoulder as he stood over Ren. Out of no were Ren shook free and when Yoh turned and notice he had already took a slashed at Yohs ankles hitting almost to the bone and barely cutting the other making him scream and fall. Ren took another slash at his neck but only nipped it.

"Yoh," said Amidamaru from the sword

"I'm fine," he said wobbling up to avoid the other attacks.

"Uh," Lyserg thought, "Hold on I think I know something. You have to pin him again though," Yoh shook his head and let Ren came inches to him before kicking him to the ground again but this time it failed, he fell then vanished. Horo-Horos eyes got big as Ren appeared behind him. Lyserg sent Cleos wire and yanked Rens sword out of his hands just in time then made it go around Ren torso pulling him to the ground, "Va Itnishik Da Vo," a blue light slithered down the wire and around Ren making his whole body glow. His eyes were wide open as they tuned back to the normal color and his fangs disappeared. The orb slowly came out of his forehead as he screamed. The blue light came back up the wire and Lyserg unwrapped it from Ren.

"Help Horo-Horo Lyserg and I'll get Elie," Yoh ran to the cell that Elie was in as Ren stood up looking around.

He looked back and forth, "What happened," Yoh ran passed him.

"I'll tell you later," Ren threw his hands in the air and followed them out the big hole. They ran up to point were Morty was. When he saw the shape that everyone was in he freaked but soon got over it and helped carry some stuff so that Ren and Lyserg could carry Horo-Horo and Yoh could carry Elie.

Rens eyes were big as he was told what he had done. He put his head high in the air, "If I was normal and had Bason with me I would of killed you. Hmm lucky you," Everyone laughed, "What," he wined.

"I'm just glad you are ok master," Bason appeared next to Ren and smiled.

Horo-Horo was able to walk on his own now but they still were walking slowly because of Yohs cut up ankles. Elie opened her eyes and looked up at Yoh. She had no idea were she was and instantly thought that it was something bad. She jumped out of Yohs arms and weakly put up her arms ready to fight. Yoh took a step towards her, she froze, "Yoh?" she closed her eyes and Lyserg ran up and caught her as she fell forward. She opened her eyes again and noticed that Yoh was limping badly and now was being help to walk by Ren, "Does it hurt?" everyone looked at her, "Your ankle," Yoh looked at it then at her.

"A little but it'll get better. I'm worried about you," she noticed for the first time all the blood that she had shed. Yoh put the coat he was wearing over her, "Get some rest we will be home soon,"

She looked at him surprised then closed her eyes "I saw Joshy," she smiled then went back to sleep in Lysergs arms.

"Who is Joshy," said Morty.

"Isn't that her brother?" said Ren looking at the others. When they finally reached the house Anna welcomed them with a big smack on the head.

Then she hugged Yoh, "I was so worried," Lyserg took Elie into her room and helped Tamao wrap the numerous injuries. Anna had wrapped up Yohs ankles before she tended to Horo-Horos split side.

Horo-Horo stood up without saying anything and walked into Elies room. In the morning Yoh was limping his way to the kitchen he passed Elies room and saw Horo-Horo sitting against the wall with his board in his hands, "Guess I never notice how protective he is over her," Yoh thought as he continued for the kitchen, "Probably because of the death of his sister,"

When Yoh got into the kitchen everyone was up and having breakfast but there was some one there he had never seen before. He was about 13 and wore a white shirt with a ying yang sign on it and a pair of blue jeans. His hair was pulled back into a small ponytail and he had blue eyes, "Yoh this is Joshua," said Anna, "Can I talk to you for a minute Yoh,"

"Uh, yeah," they walked into the living room, "When did he come,"

"This morning, he claims that Elie helped him and other people in the dungeon out about 10 minutes before you guys came and he wanted to thank her for saving his life," she looked at him with intense eyes.

"So. Your training helped, it's something she would do," said Yoh with his hands on his hips.

"Don't you get it? She said she saw her brother in their and his name was Josh and this boys name is Josh. I think this is Elies brother." She pointed threw the wall were he would be sitting

"You say that like it's a bad thing," Yoh laughed as he looked in on the others noticing all the good food.

"He doesn't seem to remember and I think that when she finds out it will crush her," Yoh walked into the kitchen leaving Anna standing alone in the hall with her hands on her hips.

Yoh walked in and sat down a cross from Josh, "Hi I'm Yoh," Josh smiled, "So were you from," Horo-Horo walked in and sat down to listen the rest of the conversation that he had missed

He looked down, "I…don't know. The last thing I remember was being thrown into that dungeon,"

"You don't remember anything in your past. Not even bits or pieces," said Lyserg.

He shook his head, "I remember my mom and dad and every so often a little girl. I think… she might be my sister," he looked up," I'm not sure though. Oh, is Elie here, I brought her a gift to thank her,"

There was a boom that came from the hall, "Who leaves milk cartons in the middle of the hall," Yelled Elie as Horo-Horo ran out of the room and helped her to the table.

Rens eyes got big as he ran to the ice box and opened it, "I'M GOING TO KILL YOU," yelled Ren as he noticed that all 3 cartons were gone. He turned to Horo-Horo with those red eyes again.

"Uh Ren," said Horo-Horo scared.

"Not now basterds," yelled Anna hitting them both on the head.

Elie looked up and noticed the strange boy sitting on the other side of the table. Kilala and a wolf were circling each other on the ground. "Uh, here…for saving Aion," he held out a small stuffed bear,"

Joshua," she whispered as she stared at him in disbelief, "Joshy," she cried as she partially jumped on him and hugged him.

"Uh," Josh was taken back by the sudden embrace, "Elie? That hurts" he looked back up at everyone before he pushed her off of him holding her shoulders. He looked at her in surprise then his face turned soft, "You…you are the girl I always see in my dreams with mom and dad," he started to cry as all his memories came back to him. He pulled Elie back into the hug, "I was so worried about you…little sis,"

"I'm confused," said Morty because if you remember he came with them just didn't go in with them

"Elie, when did you save Aion?" Asked Lyserg

Elie back off of Joshua and wiped away her tears. She looked down at Kilala and Aion who were now playing tug-of-war with a sock, "If you remember nature spirits can physical touch things," she looked up at Lyserg, "I had her run and look were they were holding him by sniffing for the mana. Then all she had to do was find a way to release them," she looked back down at the fox who made a cute little squeak at her, "Did you know that foxes are one of the cleverest animal?" She looked back up at Josh now in her own seat, "Where is Mom and Dad." Josh looked at her in surprise then to the side avoiding her gaze.

"T-their dead Elie,"

Hahaha I killed Horo-Horo sister hahahahaha I hate her so much. You know how she died, she fell into a hole of fire and spikes and snakes that live in fire and and everything else. You know what I just realized I forgot to put in one of my chapters. I know I described Josh three times but he looked different each time and he was being introduced 3 different times into the story.