I know that my story could be better and honestly when I wrote this story, I don't know what happened as I wrote it. Perhaps it was a sleepy haze that I wrote in or I just kind of lost what I was writing. I've been dealing with a lot of stuff as of late and I think some of my writing has suffered from it. And I do apologize for it. I know that the stuff I have been going through shouldn't have effected my story and shouldn't be an excuse I know. Which I feel terrible for.
So... with my mini rant out of the way. I know that a lot of you my readers didn't like the fact that I wrote it as a Jack/Oc/Norrington story. But now I've come to a crossroads. I want to make this story so much better. My question to you my loyal readers. Should I do a rewrite of this whole thing and make Rose a bit of a stronger character. Who knows there might be more chapters than what I had written. What do you guys think? Should I do a rewrite and rename the story? Please let me know so I can resolve this matter. Granted Jaded will remain up as a reminder of that I can fail, but the new story if I do make it will be so much better. I promise.
Now the question is should I rewrite it or no?