vashclub
hey i loved the first part of reaching your limits, just never had time to review it. i also love the second part and i hope that you continue it. its getting really good and i would like to read more.
love always,
vashclub
Aqua: ^_^ Sankyuu for reviewing! *bounces* It's just as great to get reviews from new people as it is from my regular ones. *nod nod* I'm definately going to keep writing this, although I've slowed down quite a bit. No worries on that account!
Ebony
Guess what? I really really really really really want you to write more. Pretty pretty please? Ne? Ne? Aqua-chan? Write for me!!?? O_O
Aqua: LOL ^_^ *pokes ur nose* You finally reviewed online for it! Yay! And, yes, there is going to be more. As I said above, no worries!
Sano
Aaaaaaaaaaahhh!!Another cliffhanger!!just when Hiei is softening.I love these two soooooo much so please,please get them together!!Even brought you this.*opens a box of Kitsune-shaped creampuffs*Post soon okay?Onegai!!!
Aqua: AHHH! Creampuffs!! *wiggles arms and glomps* Sankyuu!!!!!! *munches happily*
Someone
Ooohhhh..... Imagine, the redhead faints from shock.... Why didn't you make him faint? He! He! He!
Anyway, great kob, please post up your next chapters soon. I'll be waiting.
Aqua: Hehehe... That would be an interesting situation. Kurama faints in the middle of the classroom after seeing Hiei smile. How would he explain that one to the teacher? *grin*
me3gogi 2002-05-16 9 Signed
awww. but wait a sec. hiei smiled. hiei SMILED? i think ur one of the only writers that can pull that off convincingly, and not get their guts ripped off for doing it. infact, the on eof the only authors to be able to that and actually be praised.
if u had not guessed, i have taken the praising side.
wow! i loved that, i cant wait till the next chap comes out. and don't boot ff.net! please? otherwise i wont be able to read anymore, and nor will anyone else and that's just plain
mmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaannnnnnnn!
i wanna read the next chapters!
ooh - and u like cats? aren't cats gorgeous! my sis has a white, blue eyed belinese, and we also have an orange fat kinda sausage cat called like brandy. when we first got it my mum compared it to crookshanks as she had just read the books, apart from he isn't flat faced, and most the time he just looks plain cute instead of mean. and he has the largest pupils u have ever seen! their round - literally! and we had a long haired persion before that, white and grey. all our cats are males.
but my grans cat had kittens! and she was a street cat my gran adopted. and it went around with this gorgeous massive pure white cat, we think he gave her kittens. but he stopped coming when topaz (the cat) was adopted by my gran.
now aren't cats just gorgeous? their so lovely and cute and . . . oh i can carry on forever. i love cats and kittens and . . . well, i'll leave u for now and obsese cats on my own.
c u later.
next cahapter come soon, yes?
thanx - luv mel.
Aqua: I couldn't help it. I laughed my head off when I read this, because I've got two para's worth of talking about cats. (Although, I'm not complaining. I love kitty stories! ^_^) I used to have lots of cats, but my step-dad doesn't like them so I can't have one now, until I move out of my house. And, yes, new chapter today! See, see?? *wiggles proudly*
Sandrock
I have just begun to watch Yu Yu Hakusho so I am not very sure of the characters and thier history but your fic is so well written that I have read both parts in just two days it would have been shorter but Star Wars Ep one came out today so that cut into my reading time. Anyway great writing keep updating
Aqua: LOL For this, you don't really have to know about the main series, since it is AU. I've made up most of their history and the like, keeping only the character personality as best as I could. ^^;
Tamayo
I love this story! More more more! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! *Gets down on her knees and begs* Pleeeeaaaasssseee you're such a good writer ^_^ I have to add you as a favorite author... you've written a ton of my favorite stories ^___^. Umm yeah Ill stop worshipping you now I think Ive already been strange enough. Bye Bye ^____^(PS: Write more! Pretty please?)(PPS:My birthday is in nine days! Yay!(Ive been running around telling everybody this. It must be annoying..))
Aqua: Ahh! My b-day is in a few weeks! ^__^ I'm so excited!!! I should put a b-day into the ficcie, just for fun.... *grin* ^_^ I'm glad to know that you've read some of my other stories too! I have to admit that I think some of them are better than Reaching Your Limits. ^^;
Midori-sama
Chibi Psycho Pyro: EEP!!!!!!! Now lemme tell you sumfink, if my ickle Kura-chan faints and hurts his head, a certain ex-Koorime will be having HELL to pay for not catching him. *glares @ Hiei-chan*
Midori-sama: My gawd! Chibi Psycho Pyro you are SOOO overprotective! .
Aqua: LMAO!!! Tho, it is so true!! If he did faint, Hiei should catch him!! It's galant! *nod nod* (Although, we all know Hiei would probably watch him fall, wondering what the hell he was doing. I don't think Hiei's seen someone faint before, for reasons other than exhaustion during battle.)
CinC
You cheated, you cheated, Aqua.
I've waited so *patiently* for this chapter too.
!_!
There's actually more reviews and replies in the page then the fic itself!!!
How about this, you put all the review in and your reply and put an equal length chapter in, making them 50/50 each.
It's going to be fun, especially with those really interesting review
( eg. deathmistress misaou's PPPPPPPPPPPP....LLLLLL... ) ^_~
Aqua: ^_^;; Hai hai, I realized that after I'd put in all the reviews. Mostly, that's because I get some really long reviews, and about ten for each chapter *nod nod* Although, don't get me wrong. I love them! Everyone had better keep reviewing or else! I live for this stuff!! *grin* I'm definately going to try and make the chapters longer, at least longer than the reviews, from now on.
Foxtails
YAY! Hiei smiled! I'm so happy! Lemme see he didn't smile once in the series I don't think, he laughed once, smirked a million times and snorted about a million times. I would faint with shock, but I finally got a hold of the superiors, you don't need them back yet do you? They're my new hobby.
Aqua: The superiors? *thinks* No, don't need them back. Have fun! *grin* And ur right, now that I think about it. He does have 'lips upturn' moments, but usually they're when he's sneering at someone he's about to kill. Not an actual smile... .... *CACKLE*
Yukitsu
Wai!!!!!!! Poor ickle Hiei... Hahahaha!!! I'm enjoying Hiei's torture very much! I dunno why though.... *laughs again* Hmmm.. What does LMAO mean? *bows* gomen for my ignorance! Hahaha!! Make Hiei stay with Kurama... that way, Hiei can always have a sympathetic ear to talk to... (joke). *glomps* you are a GENIUS! I wish I could write like you... Can't even post my damned fics... Can't use Document Manager... Dunno how... Wahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! *sniffles and cuddles to Aqua* Anyway... More please! *flashes her sweetest smile and ends up scaring little brother instead*
Aqua: LOL!! Actually, my boyfriend asked the same thing yesterday. LMAO = laugh my ass off. And, actually, I'm working on a way for Hiei to stay with Kurama... *evil grin* It might even be in this chapter (^^; I haven't written it yet. Only started it.) *cuddle cuddle* I use notepad to write in. It's much easier.
SilentX
its been a lllllllllllllloooooooooooooonnnnnnggggggg time since I reviewed this story. Please cont. soon you've been taking toooooooooooooooooooo dddddddddddddddaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrnnnnnnnnnnnnn llllllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aqua: Hai hai, you haven't reviewed in a while. *checks* Whoooo... ^_^ But that's okay! *grin* Yes, I really need to get started with this story again. One of these nights, when I'm not sick or having company over, I'm going to sit down and write as many chapters as possible. Even when my fingers won't move and I have to punch in the key's with a pen held in my mouth!! *strikes determined pose*
Youko Duet
YAY! I'm all happiful nows! Supercalifragilistic ending! *Big demented-chibi grin* Write fast pleases-I CRAVE more!! *tosses all sorts of sweets at Aqua* *Skips off humming nonesense thingies to herself* ^o^*
Aqua: LMAO!!! *remains here and hums 'Audrey' while munching on those all sorts of sweets Youko Duet left behind*
Ryo0oki
I have a thought.
Aqua: Okay, shoot.
Now that Hiei is technically a human, the only members of the Reikai Tantei are Kurama, Yuusuke, and Kuwabara. Obviously, their current powers are nowhere near Hiei's previous powers. So, what if an extremely powerful demon (say, an S-class... owch) threatens the Reikai. Wouldn't Koenma and co. be in a fix then... keep Hiei warded and have the Reikai be destroyed or release Hiei's wards and be thoroughly humiliated... just a thought. =^_~=
Although I am _totally_ against human!Hiei, I adore this fic. Keep it up! =^_^=
(BTW, would you like a beta? I've noticed a few spelling/grammatical errors floating around... if you're interested contact me or sumthin)
Aqua: Mmm... for the first part, he is still a member of the Rekai Tentai, although he is no longer the leader. Koenma has ordered him to work under Yuusuke (O.o;;). When they are going into battle, Koenma will release Hiei's wards so that he will have his power back in order to fight. After the enemy is defeated, he will be warded down again. He's still a demon, he just has none of his demonic capabilities.
YES!! I need a beta!! I had one, but she died! (Not literally, she just vanished somewhere) The only fics of mine that have ever been proofread are my GW ones!! *wiggles arms* If you want to beta for me, email me privately at aqua95@hotmail.com *bows* It would be much appreciated!!
Black Starr Kitsune
Hiei smiling *faints from shock wakes up and re-reads faints again* Okay that was to wierd so come on more K/H I or maybe some Koenma/Yusuke?? Update soon(^_^)
Aqua: LOL That's about it, when it comes to Hiei's smile. Everyone faints from shock eventually! *grin* ... *cough cough* Actually, K/Y will not be in this fic. However... ^^; I've started writing one on paper that is! Since I only knew that pairing a short while ago, it's kinda scaring me....
kyo
Yay! another chapter! "dances around" great fic, bye!
Aqua: *perks up* Kyo?
Kei: *bonks her on the head* Most likely, not that one.
Aqua: *pout* .. ^_^;; Well, that's okay. *grins* I got complimented! Hehe!!! *bounces proudly*
Nozomi ga Kanau
More. Now. Before I get angry and sic my muse, Kushi, on you!
Kushi:...I'd rather end up like that 'Kei' person...::walks off::
; . ;
Aqua: LMAO!! ^_^;; Kei is now a guy again, thankfully. Yonaka forgot to meantion it in her review, but she told me later *grin* but, it's always smart for alter ego's not to push their luck, ne? Hehe
Yonaka no Inu-Ryuu
KAWAII!! Please say Kurama and Hiei get together soon??! Please! Pretty pretty pretty please???!!! Pretty pretty pretty pretty please with margarita body foam on top??
Aqua: Hai hai!! Although, I've got one question. What's a margarita? *feels she should know, but can't recall*
Reaching Your Limits: Continual Cycle
Episode 9: Genkai's Family. Love Competition.
She'd known it was going to happen eventually. Genkai was a wise woman and she knew that when someone's situation was bad, it could always get worse. It was a basic human philosophy that had been proven many times. The same was true even with a demon.
Yukina was talking animatedly about her class that day as she walked home. Almost loud enough that Genkai could hear her approach before she could sense the girl. It was almost remarkable, the changes which the young girl had gone through. She'd been so quiet and shy before. Now it was like she was a different person, and it was a definiate improvement.
The elderly woman was surprised to feel Kurama with the twins. Since his return yesterday, Hiei had been avoiding everyone. It had taken her almost every threat she could muster just to get him to go to school. Luckily, it had been a direct order from Koenma that he attend. In the end, Hiei had chosen not getting into more trouble over his desire to leave the entire world alone. She hadn't thought that he'd be inviting guests over so soon. Although, considering it was Kurama, she wasn't overly surprised.
Genkai watched as the trio apprached, Yukina happily going on as though she could not see the tension which was obvious between the other two. Neither Kurama or Hiei were talking, both looking thoughtful.
Of course, judging by his expression, Hiei might of simply been attempting to make the sidewalk spontaneously combust.
Genkai sighed to herself. Perhaps she should take pity on the poor boy and warn him. Maybe it would cause the tensions between the two boys to vanish, should Hiei make the obvious decision to stay at Kurama's. That would work out well for everyone.
However, before she could take a step from the window toward the door, a small blur when flying past her and outside. The old woman stopped, blinking a little, then shook her head with a small laugh. Well, it was too late now. There wasn't much she could do at this point. Hiei would just have to deal with the situation on his own.
***
"Hiei!"
Kurama's head snapped up from where he was looking at the cement at the sound of an extremely hyper person yelling Hiei's name. Before he had the chance to register what was going on, the fire demon beside him had been glomped by young girl doing her best impression of a leech.
"Miyu!" Yukina exclaimed, while Hiei turned green and did his best to escape.
The young girl, Miyu, turned her head toward Yukina and gave a wide smile. "Sho and I are visiting Grandma for a few months! I'm so excited, that I get to spend time with you and Hiei," she exclaimed, turning back toward the fire demon to give him eyes that practically sparkled. "I missed you so much."
Kurama tried not to reach forward and put a little distance between the two, and it took all of his willpower to do so. He had no right to be feeling possessive. Still, he did reach forward and put a hand on Hiei's shoulder all the same, giving the young girl a smile that bordered on a growl. "So, you're Genkai's granddaughter?" he questioned.
Miyu blinked up at him for a moment, having seen the hand he placed on Hiei's shoulder, before she smiled brightly. "Yes, I am. Who are you?" she questioned.
Before Kurama could open his mouth, Hiei jerked away from Miyu's arms and grabbed onto Kurama's. "He's my boyfriend, Kurama," he stated, looking as though it were a natrual thing to announce.
Yukina started giggling while Miyu's eyes went wide. "What?" she exclaimed, then grabbed onto Hiei's free arm. "That can't be! We've been dating for a year!"
"We have not!" Hiei growled.
Confused, and more than a little bewildered as to what was going on, Kurama turned to Yukina. She smiled up at him and, taking pity, explained. "Miyu and her brother visit Genkai often. Strangely enough, usually when we are here as well. She has a very large crush on him, and has tricked him into taking her out on past visits. She calls them dates, he calls them torture while putting up with Genkai's offspring. It must be a shock, to find out that Hiei's taken," she said, giggling a little.
Kurama grimaced as his arm was tugged as Miyu tugged on Hiei. Not that he minded being claimed as Hiei's boyfriend, but the situation was just a little too much to be submerged in all at once. Still, he wasn't about to let the young girl have any chance of staking a claim on his fire demon.
"Eh... so now that you've walked Yukina home, how about we head home?" he suggested, hoping that Hiei wouldn't kill him for it.
The Koorime blinked up at him for a moment, looking as though he was going to refuse. However, Miyu happened to take that moment to hug him again, saying, "You were all I thought about when I was in America. You can't be taken."
"It sounds like a good idea to me," he replied.
"Although, you should at least say hello to everyone," a male voice stated.
Kurama looked up to see a spitting image of Miyu, only a bit older and male, walking from the temple toward them. Genkai was with him and, suddenly, he could see the family resemblance. Genkai probably looked very much like Miyu when she was younger.
"Sho, how are you?" Yukina questioned.
The youth grinned. "Pretty good. Although, I have to admit I'm disappointed to hear that you and Hiei aren't staying at Genkai's this time around," he said.
Although Kurama was about to correct him, Yukina spoke up. "Yes, it is too bad. Hiei and I are staying with Kurama," she stated.
The red-head blinked, startled. Okay, Hiei was pushing it. Having Yukina live with him too... Just great.
End Episode 9
hey i loved the first part of reaching your limits, just never had time to review it. i also love the second part and i hope that you continue it. its getting really good and i would like to read more.
love always,
vashclub
Aqua: ^_^ Sankyuu for reviewing! *bounces* It's just as great to get reviews from new people as it is from my regular ones. *nod nod* I'm definately going to keep writing this, although I've slowed down quite a bit. No worries on that account!
Ebony
Guess what? I really really really really really want you to write more. Pretty pretty please? Ne? Ne? Aqua-chan? Write for me!!?? O_O
Aqua: LOL ^_^ *pokes ur nose* You finally reviewed online for it! Yay! And, yes, there is going to be more. As I said above, no worries!
Sano
Aaaaaaaaaaahhh!!Another cliffhanger!!just when Hiei is softening.I love these two soooooo much so please,please get them together!!Even brought you this.*opens a box of Kitsune-shaped creampuffs*Post soon okay?Onegai!!!
Aqua: AHHH! Creampuffs!! *wiggles arms and glomps* Sankyuu!!!!!! *munches happily*
Someone
Ooohhhh..... Imagine, the redhead faints from shock.... Why didn't you make him faint? He! He! He!
Anyway, great kob, please post up your next chapters soon. I'll be waiting.
Aqua: Hehehe... That would be an interesting situation. Kurama faints in the middle of the classroom after seeing Hiei smile. How would he explain that one to the teacher? *grin*
me3gogi 2002-05-16 9 Signed
awww. but wait a sec. hiei smiled. hiei SMILED? i think ur one of the only writers that can pull that off convincingly, and not get their guts ripped off for doing it. infact, the on eof the only authors to be able to that and actually be praised.
if u had not guessed, i have taken the praising side.
wow! i loved that, i cant wait till the next chap comes out. and don't boot ff.net! please? otherwise i wont be able to read anymore, and nor will anyone else and that's just plain
mmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaannnnnnnn!
i wanna read the next chapters!
ooh - and u like cats? aren't cats gorgeous! my sis has a white, blue eyed belinese, and we also have an orange fat kinda sausage cat called like brandy. when we first got it my mum compared it to crookshanks as she had just read the books, apart from he isn't flat faced, and most the time he just looks plain cute instead of mean. and he has the largest pupils u have ever seen! their round - literally! and we had a long haired persion before that, white and grey. all our cats are males.
but my grans cat had kittens! and she was a street cat my gran adopted. and it went around with this gorgeous massive pure white cat, we think he gave her kittens. but he stopped coming when topaz (the cat) was adopted by my gran.
now aren't cats just gorgeous? their so lovely and cute and . . . oh i can carry on forever. i love cats and kittens and . . . well, i'll leave u for now and obsese cats on my own.
c u later.
next cahapter come soon, yes?
thanx - luv mel.
Aqua: I couldn't help it. I laughed my head off when I read this, because I've got two para's worth of talking about cats. (Although, I'm not complaining. I love kitty stories! ^_^) I used to have lots of cats, but my step-dad doesn't like them so I can't have one now, until I move out of my house. And, yes, new chapter today! See, see?? *wiggles proudly*
Sandrock
I have just begun to watch Yu Yu Hakusho so I am not very sure of the characters and thier history but your fic is so well written that I have read both parts in just two days it would have been shorter but Star Wars Ep one came out today so that cut into my reading time. Anyway great writing keep updating
Aqua: LOL For this, you don't really have to know about the main series, since it is AU. I've made up most of their history and the like, keeping only the character personality as best as I could. ^^;
Tamayo
I love this story! More more more! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! *Gets down on her knees and begs* Pleeeeaaaasssseee you're such a good writer ^_^ I have to add you as a favorite author... you've written a ton of my favorite stories ^___^. Umm yeah Ill stop worshipping you now I think Ive already been strange enough. Bye Bye ^____^(PS: Write more! Pretty please?)(PPS:My birthday is in nine days! Yay!(Ive been running around telling everybody this. It must be annoying..))
Aqua: Ahh! My b-day is in a few weeks! ^__^ I'm so excited!!! I should put a b-day into the ficcie, just for fun.... *grin* ^_^ I'm glad to know that you've read some of my other stories too! I have to admit that I think some of them are better than Reaching Your Limits. ^^;
Midori-sama
Chibi Psycho Pyro: EEP!!!!!!! Now lemme tell you sumfink, if my ickle Kura-chan faints and hurts his head, a certain ex-Koorime will be having HELL to pay for not catching him. *glares @ Hiei-chan*
Midori-sama: My gawd! Chibi Psycho Pyro you are SOOO overprotective! .
Aqua: LMAO!!! Tho, it is so true!! If he did faint, Hiei should catch him!! It's galant! *nod nod* (Although, we all know Hiei would probably watch him fall, wondering what the hell he was doing. I don't think Hiei's seen someone faint before, for reasons other than exhaustion during battle.)
CinC
You cheated, you cheated, Aqua.
I've waited so *patiently* for this chapter too.
!_!
There's actually more reviews and replies in the page then the fic itself!!!
How about this, you put all the review in and your reply and put an equal length chapter in, making them 50/50 each.
It's going to be fun, especially with those really interesting review
( eg. deathmistress misaou's PPPPPPPPPPPP....LLLLLL... ) ^_~
Aqua: ^_^;; Hai hai, I realized that after I'd put in all the reviews. Mostly, that's because I get some really long reviews, and about ten for each chapter *nod nod* Although, don't get me wrong. I love them! Everyone had better keep reviewing or else! I live for this stuff!! *grin* I'm definately going to try and make the chapters longer, at least longer than the reviews, from now on.
Foxtails
YAY! Hiei smiled! I'm so happy! Lemme see he didn't smile once in the series I don't think, he laughed once, smirked a million times and snorted about a million times. I would faint with shock, but I finally got a hold of the superiors, you don't need them back yet do you? They're my new hobby.
Aqua: The superiors? *thinks* No, don't need them back. Have fun! *grin* And ur right, now that I think about it. He does have 'lips upturn' moments, but usually they're when he's sneering at someone he's about to kill. Not an actual smile... .... *CACKLE*
Yukitsu
Wai!!!!!!! Poor ickle Hiei... Hahahaha!!! I'm enjoying Hiei's torture very much! I dunno why though.... *laughs again* Hmmm.. What does LMAO mean? *bows* gomen for my ignorance! Hahaha!! Make Hiei stay with Kurama... that way, Hiei can always have a sympathetic ear to talk to... (joke). *glomps* you are a GENIUS! I wish I could write like you... Can't even post my damned fics... Can't use Document Manager... Dunno how... Wahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! *sniffles and cuddles to Aqua* Anyway... More please! *flashes her sweetest smile and ends up scaring little brother instead*
Aqua: LOL!! Actually, my boyfriend asked the same thing yesterday. LMAO = laugh my ass off. And, actually, I'm working on a way for Hiei to stay with Kurama... *evil grin* It might even be in this chapter (^^; I haven't written it yet. Only started it.) *cuddle cuddle* I use notepad to write in. It's much easier.
SilentX
its been a lllllllllllllloooooooooooooonnnnnnggggggg time since I reviewed this story. Please cont. soon you've been taking toooooooooooooooooooo dddddddddddddddaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrnnnnnnnnnnnnn llllllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aqua: Hai hai, you haven't reviewed in a while. *checks* Whoooo... ^_^ But that's okay! *grin* Yes, I really need to get started with this story again. One of these nights, when I'm not sick or having company over, I'm going to sit down and write as many chapters as possible. Even when my fingers won't move and I have to punch in the key's with a pen held in my mouth!! *strikes determined pose*
Youko Duet
YAY! I'm all happiful nows! Supercalifragilistic ending! *Big demented-chibi grin* Write fast pleases-I CRAVE more!! *tosses all sorts of sweets at Aqua* *Skips off humming nonesense thingies to herself* ^o^*
Aqua: LMAO!!! *remains here and hums 'Audrey' while munching on those all sorts of sweets Youko Duet left behind*
Ryo0oki
I have a thought.
Aqua: Okay, shoot.
Now that Hiei is technically a human, the only members of the Reikai Tantei are Kurama, Yuusuke, and Kuwabara. Obviously, their current powers are nowhere near Hiei's previous powers. So, what if an extremely powerful demon (say, an S-class... owch) threatens the Reikai. Wouldn't Koenma and co. be in a fix then... keep Hiei warded and have the Reikai be destroyed or release Hiei's wards and be thoroughly humiliated... just a thought. =^_~=
Although I am _totally_ against human!Hiei, I adore this fic. Keep it up! =^_^=
(BTW, would you like a beta? I've noticed a few spelling/grammatical errors floating around... if you're interested contact me or sumthin)
Aqua: Mmm... for the first part, he is still a member of the Rekai Tentai, although he is no longer the leader. Koenma has ordered him to work under Yuusuke (O.o;;). When they are going into battle, Koenma will release Hiei's wards so that he will have his power back in order to fight. After the enemy is defeated, he will be warded down again. He's still a demon, he just has none of his demonic capabilities.
YES!! I need a beta!! I had one, but she died! (Not literally, she just vanished somewhere) The only fics of mine that have ever been proofread are my GW ones!! *wiggles arms* If you want to beta for me, email me privately at aqua95@hotmail.com *bows* It would be much appreciated!!
Black Starr Kitsune
Hiei smiling *faints from shock wakes up and re-reads faints again* Okay that was to wierd so come on more K/H I or maybe some Koenma/Yusuke?? Update soon(^_^)
Aqua: LOL That's about it, when it comes to Hiei's smile. Everyone faints from shock eventually! *grin* ... *cough cough* Actually, K/Y will not be in this fic. However... ^^; I've started writing one on paper that is! Since I only knew that pairing a short while ago, it's kinda scaring me....
kyo
Yay! another chapter! "dances around" great fic, bye!
Aqua: *perks up* Kyo?
Kei: *bonks her on the head* Most likely, not that one.
Aqua: *pout* .. ^_^;; Well, that's okay. *grins* I got complimented! Hehe!!! *bounces proudly*
Nozomi ga Kanau
More. Now. Before I get angry and sic my muse, Kushi, on you!
Kushi:...I'd rather end up like that 'Kei' person...::walks off::
; . ;
Aqua: LMAO!! ^_^;; Kei is now a guy again, thankfully. Yonaka forgot to meantion it in her review, but she told me later *grin* but, it's always smart for alter ego's not to push their luck, ne? Hehe
Yonaka no Inu-Ryuu
KAWAII!! Please say Kurama and Hiei get together soon??! Please! Pretty pretty pretty please???!!! Pretty pretty pretty pretty please with margarita body foam on top??
Aqua: Hai hai!! Although, I've got one question. What's a margarita? *feels she should know, but can't recall*
Reaching Your Limits: Continual Cycle
Episode 9: Genkai's Family. Love Competition.
She'd known it was going to happen eventually. Genkai was a wise woman and she knew that when someone's situation was bad, it could always get worse. It was a basic human philosophy that had been proven many times. The same was true even with a demon.
Yukina was talking animatedly about her class that day as she walked home. Almost loud enough that Genkai could hear her approach before she could sense the girl. It was almost remarkable, the changes which the young girl had gone through. She'd been so quiet and shy before. Now it was like she was a different person, and it was a definiate improvement.
The elderly woman was surprised to feel Kurama with the twins. Since his return yesterday, Hiei had been avoiding everyone. It had taken her almost every threat she could muster just to get him to go to school. Luckily, it had been a direct order from Koenma that he attend. In the end, Hiei had chosen not getting into more trouble over his desire to leave the entire world alone. She hadn't thought that he'd be inviting guests over so soon. Although, considering it was Kurama, she wasn't overly surprised.
Genkai watched as the trio apprached, Yukina happily going on as though she could not see the tension which was obvious between the other two. Neither Kurama or Hiei were talking, both looking thoughtful.
Of course, judging by his expression, Hiei might of simply been attempting to make the sidewalk spontaneously combust.
Genkai sighed to herself. Perhaps she should take pity on the poor boy and warn him. Maybe it would cause the tensions between the two boys to vanish, should Hiei make the obvious decision to stay at Kurama's. That would work out well for everyone.
However, before she could take a step from the window toward the door, a small blur when flying past her and outside. The old woman stopped, blinking a little, then shook her head with a small laugh. Well, it was too late now. There wasn't much she could do at this point. Hiei would just have to deal with the situation on his own.
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"Hiei!"
Kurama's head snapped up from where he was looking at the cement at the sound of an extremely hyper person yelling Hiei's name. Before he had the chance to register what was going on, the fire demon beside him had been glomped by young girl doing her best impression of a leech.
"Miyu!" Yukina exclaimed, while Hiei turned green and did his best to escape.
The young girl, Miyu, turned her head toward Yukina and gave a wide smile. "Sho and I are visiting Grandma for a few months! I'm so excited, that I get to spend time with you and Hiei," she exclaimed, turning back toward the fire demon to give him eyes that practically sparkled. "I missed you so much."
Kurama tried not to reach forward and put a little distance between the two, and it took all of his willpower to do so. He had no right to be feeling possessive. Still, he did reach forward and put a hand on Hiei's shoulder all the same, giving the young girl a smile that bordered on a growl. "So, you're Genkai's granddaughter?" he questioned.
Miyu blinked up at him for a moment, having seen the hand he placed on Hiei's shoulder, before she smiled brightly. "Yes, I am. Who are you?" she questioned.
Before Kurama could open his mouth, Hiei jerked away from Miyu's arms and grabbed onto Kurama's. "He's my boyfriend, Kurama," he stated, looking as though it were a natrual thing to announce.
Yukina started giggling while Miyu's eyes went wide. "What?" she exclaimed, then grabbed onto Hiei's free arm. "That can't be! We've been dating for a year!"
"We have not!" Hiei growled.
Confused, and more than a little bewildered as to what was going on, Kurama turned to Yukina. She smiled up at him and, taking pity, explained. "Miyu and her brother visit Genkai often. Strangely enough, usually when we are here as well. She has a very large crush on him, and has tricked him into taking her out on past visits. She calls them dates, he calls them torture while putting up with Genkai's offspring. It must be a shock, to find out that Hiei's taken," she said, giggling a little.
Kurama grimaced as his arm was tugged as Miyu tugged on Hiei. Not that he minded being claimed as Hiei's boyfriend, but the situation was just a little too much to be submerged in all at once. Still, he wasn't about to let the young girl have any chance of staking a claim on his fire demon.
"Eh... so now that you've walked Yukina home, how about we head home?" he suggested, hoping that Hiei wouldn't kill him for it.
The Koorime blinked up at him for a moment, looking as though he was going to refuse. However, Miyu happened to take that moment to hug him again, saying, "You were all I thought about when I was in America. You can't be taken."
"It sounds like a good idea to me," he replied.
"Although, you should at least say hello to everyone," a male voice stated.
Kurama looked up to see a spitting image of Miyu, only a bit older and male, walking from the temple toward them. Genkai was with him and, suddenly, he could see the family resemblance. Genkai probably looked very much like Miyu when she was younger.
"Sho, how are you?" Yukina questioned.
The youth grinned. "Pretty good. Although, I have to admit I'm disappointed to hear that you and Hiei aren't staying at Genkai's this time around," he said.
Although Kurama was about to correct him, Yukina spoke up. "Yes, it is too bad. Hiei and I are staying with Kurama," she stated.
The red-head blinked, startled. Okay, Hiei was pushing it. Having Yukina live with him too... Just great.
End Episode 9