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Oh and to tell everyone just a quick note first thank you everyone for reviewing me and i'm sorry about my spelling errors i'm not good with spelling i am truly sorry but try to bare it if i stil make mistakes i am trying. oh and if you see Italics that means someones thinking if you didn't know that. (:) waterandsky04

Last Time:

That's not mine that's a girls kimono piece Shang thought as he picked it up this isn't a girls it's a man's but it doesn't belong to me it's green and white I'm wearing brown…wait Mulan was wearing this kind of material. Oh God Mulan

This Time:

"MULAN!" he screamed as he held the material tightly in his hand ripping the material lightly

"MULAN!" He screamed again his heart racing his breathing getting shorter with worry his eyes darting back and forth of the bank making sure he didn't miss anything. oh god what if she didn't survive he thought as he couldfeel himself doubting that she had lived.Shang was met with nothing not one sound came back to him as he tried to calm down his breathing seeing as he couldn't hear anything else. "Mulan" he whispered fearing that she fell too and didn't survive the journey. she...she didn't make it i...i couldn't even protect the one i love...i couldn't protect my father and now Mulan he thought as he felt his heart stop and suddenly stop beating his mind then going blank his eyes staring into space not blinking once and let his legs go weak and made him crash to the mud on his knee's tears almost coming to his eyes when he heard the softest noise ever that could hear ever in his life.

"Shang" he heard it was so light and soft it just sounded like the wind rustling with the bushes and having the wind gang together to play tricks on him making him sink lower than before.

"Sh...Sh…Shang" the female voice called a little but louder but it sounded like it had so much trouble speaking and out of breath and he could hear how hurt it was in it's voice.

"Mulan?" He asked as he rushed to his feet and ran back into the water up to his knees "MULAN!" he yelled determination back in him praying to god thatshehad made it through and was just alive "WHERE ARE YOU?" he asked as he let his eyes dart around the waters area again

"Sh..Shang I'm coming Shang w.wait for me..."a girlsvoice was heardfrom a few big boulders a fewfeet away from him they weren't tall rocks but they looked steep there was blood pouring from oneof the rocks that was much taller than the othersthe others were ragid and sharp looking this one out of the blue was flat at thetop and about 6ft tall. the girl saidas she was still asleep from the ride and shaking.

"MULAN" he yelled again as he looked around desperately with paranoid eyes as they darted from corner to corner searching for his love. "MULAN" he screamed again she had to survive the trip down she had too he thought frantically he then saw something red on a big boulder a few inches away from him.

"What?" He said as he raced to it he looked at the front of the boulder it was covered with blood the top leaking more to the bottom. I'm not bleeding so that must mean oh my god Mulan he thought as he climbed to the top of it, the boulder was huge and tall, god knows howshe would get up there when he reached the top he saw her, her clothes just barely covering her, her once pants were now very short shorts just passing her but showing all of her thigh her long robe top was not threaded into a belly shirt just covering her chest. On her head was a cut from her left temple to her eye brow. There was a deep gash on her stomach and a few more on her legs along with bruises on her arms and he could see blood coming out from her back

"Oh Mulan" he said as he examind her wounds he could see she was shivering from the loss of blood and the cold water. "My love" he said in a whispered tone trying not to let it choke from the pain he felt but just looking at her wounds, he looked down at herwith tears in his eyes seeing from her like this "Love it's time for you to wake up... come on" Shang saidnot being able to hold it anymore in achoked voice afraid that she might of died while he looked upon her. Mulan's eyes scrunched tight and opened weakly her eyes were barely open as she looked up at the face that she loved so much.

"Shang" she said with a smile as she lifted her hand to his cheek to make sure he was really there he's here he waited for me he didn't leave me behind even if i am in so much pain now i'm so happy he didn't leave me behind.

"I'm right here he said as he held onto her hand for death pressing it up to her hand onto his face harder. she made it thank the spirits i don't know what i'd do without her i'd probably join her she didn't leave me behind mulan you have no idea how much i love you at this vert moment

"I'm sorry.. I'm so sorry" Mulan cried

"Shh it's not your fault it was all my fault I jumped to conclusions every second I could I'm the one that's sorry but save your energy right now okay" he said shakingily afraid he may loose her

"Shang you do care about me don't you"

"Mulan I wouldn't of asked you to marry me if I didn't love you"

"That's all I needed to hear" Mulan said as she past out again

rest my love you will be alright just hold onto the life still inside you don't let go of it Shang thought as took off his shredded under shirt and wrapped it around Mulan for some dignity and picked her jumped down from the boulder and started to run away from the area concentration on getting Mulan help as fast as he could.i don't care if my legs are weak and tired and my arms are unstable and weak i will make sure i do everything in my power to help her i swear it

Back with the Princesses and their loves

"What do we do now Yao?" Yao's love asked. Yao just looked up at her and then at Ling and Chien po they held devastated faces and only stared back at them

"Do we complete the mission? Or do we do what Mulan's last wish was?" Ling asked

"We must honor Mulan's last wish" Chien po said

"The emperors will be very angry" Yao said

"Let them be! we must honor Fa Mulan's last wish" the eldest princess said

"So what do we do now?" the youngest princess asked

"Ling write a letter to our father tell him what has become on Far Mulan and Captain Lee Shang also tell him that we did not survive as well" the eldest princess said again

"Are you sure about this you'd be throwing away your lives" Yao asked

"It will show that Fa Mulan and Captain Shang did not die in vein their deaths will be honored greatly and you three will tell Far Mulan's family showing great respect tell our father that it was our last wish to make sure Far Mulan's and Caption Li Shang's death were of the highest honor" the eldest spoke again.

"And we could start new lives as commoners with the ones we love" the youngest princess said

"I guess we could do that can't we fella's" Yao said with a smile as he looked at his buddies around him

"yes we can and will make sure it is done but for now we must show were they died and show it honor" Chien Po said as he walked over to the broken bridge where Mulan had dropped her sword and held it in his hands as he unsealed it from it's sheaf and then plunged it into the ground and started to pray. The rest of the group sat behind him and bowed to the ground as they all prayed for the loss souls.

thank you Fa Mulan you helped me and my sisters learn that our duty is to our hearts not just to those we serve i thank you and will always honor you and come here and pray for you often this i can promise the sisters all mentally prayed not knowing that they were all praying the same thing

With Shang and Mulan

Mulan was wrapped in the robe held tightly in Shang's arm's she was loosing blood and becoming paler by the minute her body was becoming more limp and it was getting light as a feather in his arms.

"Mulan" he whispered "stay with me" he said to her the cut on her head was bleeding all over his arm and pants. Shang ran faster as he saw that she was becoming as pale as a ghost. Shang looked up at the sky the sun was starting to set soon it be pitch black and him without a sword to protect them from bandits or anything he had to hurry time was not on his side.

Oh and i forgot to say that the chinese wore Kimonos different types of Kimonos i have one upstairs in my closet they may be called something else that i don't know to my knowledge so i'm sorry till someone tells me what they are really called i'm keeping the word Kimono and who said i couldn't get a little creative if i am wrong? lol please review if you all hated it i will get ride of it but if you thought it was okay and it needs improvment tell me and i'll fix them in the next chapters

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