Disclamier: i don't own anyone but Kaede and Miro.

Sorry for the wait i was making another story and posting it on Fictionpress if you want to read it me and my friend Alyssa made it. Everyone has loved it that read it so My name there is LonleyViolinPlayer.

Last time:

"you are a very strong man to be able to live after all of that. You have my utter most respect." Shang said as he stood and bowed to him formally.

"don't I don't deserve it" Miro said as waved a hand to make him stop. "come lets go inside I think you have done enough praying and besides you should eat something. Come I brought something home with me and I will not listen to a no now come" Miro said with a smile and got up

I think that was it from last time? right? anyway this time:

Shang followed Miro out of the templeandinto the mashion. They walked back into Miro's mansion and after being in the house for only a minute, Kaede walked down the hall her arms folded in front of her as she walked slow and tall, Shangsworeshe lookedlikean older woman than he had seen before, Shang knew this was going to deside Mulan's future. Kaede stopped infront of Shang and looked him straight in the eye pasuing before saying her news.

"General I have done all I can do to your fiancé! it's all up to herown will to live now. You might want to go into her roomand help her make her decisionsince she hasbeen calling our your name every second! She is waiting for you. She thinks you died General and she's waiting for death to take her to you no she's pleading for death to take her to you. She cares deeply for you General"

"She thinks I …..the river…" Without another word Shang ran down the hall towards the healing room where he had placed Mulan earlier. He skidded right almost hitting the wall when he turned but he just missed it and kept running he pulled the door open too fast making it nearly popped out of it's hinge.

"Mulan!" he said worried as he looked down at her she seemed better looking than before she didn't have all the color restored back to her cheeks but she wasn't deathly pale anymore. Shang walked into the room and closed the door behind him slowly and sat down right next to her he grabbed onto her hand she was still deathly cold. Shang stared down at her she was dressed in a pale white kimono that clung to her body, Shang looked at her face it was so relaxed yet still so pained her bright red lips against her white skin was opened a crack for her main supply of air her eyes weren't scruntched but laid so lazily tired on her eye lids, Her chest rose and fell heavily from lack of rest and no energy to keep her chest moving.

"Mulan" he said softly "I'm here my love I'm right here. Please Don't Leave Me! Please Mulan! you're the only thing that makes me want to get up every morning please don't leave me my love! i know your tired but you have to hang on okay please my LOVE!" Shang said as tears came to him eyesbut held them inn ashe held her hand to his lips as he kissed her palm lightly over and over again ; trying to give her more warmth.

Hours Later

Shang had fallen asleep next to Mulan still holding her hand near his mouth as he laid on the floor he had collapsed in his sleep his head just missing her stomach. The Sun had already set hours ago and the house was quiet as a mouse. Suddenly without warning Shang awoke his eyes jumped open as if he knew something was up. Shang sat up and rubbed his eyes to get the sleep dust out with one hand his other still holding onto Mulan. As Shang yawned getting life back into his tired body he noticed that Mulan's chest was rising and falling like it was before. She laid there still as a bored no movement and a relaxed expression on her face.

"M…Mulan?" he said hoping he made a mistake

"……" there was no response from her stillform

"Mulan" he said quietly as he reached his hand over to her slowly his free hand touched her chest lightly ;where her heart would beat ;he felt nothing. Shangs face was unreadable it was filled with pain and sorrow and also anger that he couldn't protect her. He pushed harder on her heart out of frustration without even realizing and in a second he felt her heart beat slowly and weakly but it was there.

"Thank Buddha" Shang said relieved but then remembered that she wasn't breathing and she would die if didn't get into her. I have to get her help! I have to leave her though.

"Mulan I'll be right back okay? Hold on! Hold on for me please Mulan I will be right back with help!" Shang said as he kissed her but instead of sealing a promise he pushed air into her lungs so that she could breathe and stay in this world longer. Her chest heaved up with all the air he had inn himinto her by the time she let out all the air he had pushed into her he was already down the hall looking for Kaede.

Mulan's Mind

Mulan sat in the darkness of her mind she was stillwet,cold and in her shredded clothing from the river. Mulan sat in a fetal position on the rock she had landed on when Shang found her.

"Shang……. Did you leave me behind?...I'm trying to join you but something here keeps puling me back to this world I want to be with you…..why'd you leave me behind? Why'd you leave me all alone?" Mulan said in her voice as silent tears fell from her eyes as she sat in the darkness of her mind.

In the real World

Kaede was attending to Mulan once again it was now four o'clock in the morning. Shang was once again in the Temple praying for Mulan assoft silent tears came down his cheeks as he tried to stay strong and not let his fears take over him ;Miro beside him praying for Mulan too. That night was the longest night for everyone in the house hold. By morning Mulan was once again stable and this time Kaede guaranteed that she wouldn't stop breathing in the middle of the night like she done last night.

"Thank you Kaede we have caused you both such stress if you want us to leave we will'

"None sense we like taking care of people stay as long as you like" Kaede and Miro said at once with smiles on their faces

"Thank you for your kindness and once Mulan is better and we can go back to our travels we will make sure the emporer knows of you " Shang said as he got up from his bowing stance.

"Thank you but we don't do it for the honor or respect. We like taking care of young people." Miro said with a smile

" None the less now if you will excuse me I want to stay by Mulans side as much as possible" Shang said as he turned and walked into the healing room where Mulan was once again sleeping.

She'll sleep forever…..she'll leave me here all alone…..no she didn't leave yet….my love if you must dream then dream good dreams without me He thought as he kissed her forehead.

So what did you think? i was trying to make a chapter very quickly i wrote this in 20 minutes because i flet bad i hadn' updated. But tell me if you don't like it i will re do it into something more detailed and better or something name it and i'll do it to the story. lolzz

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