Here's another chapter. Sorry, the last one was so short. I also did a bit of research about Lost and found out A LOT. I will put a website at the end for you to take a look at. I just love the power of the internet! PLEASE REVIEW! It is not hard to do, but please, I'm begging. REVIEW? PLEASE? Also, you finally find out who this woman is and what significance she has.
Chapter 2
Flames all around…Confusion and terror…a boy screams "Dad", and a familiar face searches for the others from his raft, hitting a black man, trying to wake him, after pulling him onto the remains of his raft…What is happening?...Who were those people on the boat?...Where are they taking the boy?...What is their fate?...Again, the familiar looking person hits the black man, making him breath…Why does this man look so familiar?...Who is he?...What does he mean to me?...More importantly, what do I mean to him, and how can I see him?...The black man calls for his son again, choking. The familiar face snaps at him, and the black man snaps back, still calling his son…They wait on the piece of wreckage, calling for another person on their raft…They argue with each other as something moves under them…Then startles them, making the familiar face grab his gun, looking under him and the two stop arguing…Why am I seeing this?...The water stops moving, something rubs against the wreckage…Is it a shark?...Is it?...Still they snap…The familiar looking man moves away from the black man, on to another part of the wreckage…"I was trying to save your damn kid." He sputters…The moon shines brightly over head…The familiar man picks at his wound as he and the black man exchange snapping…finally he pulls a bullet out of his bloody shoulder…Both men still sit on separate pieces of wreckage, again arguing, then the familiar man starts to sink…No, I want to know who you are first…The black man pulls him on his wreckage…"You have no idea what it is like to care for someone."…The wreckage just floats there and the familiar man starts paddling…The black man yells at him…And the thing from the water approaches him…The black man watches, but then grabs the gun and calls for the other man after shooting at the 'shark' and seeing blood in the water. "Sawyer! Sawyer!"…Sawyer? I don't know a Sawyer…The familiar face appears on the rest of the wreckage…Is he okay?...Why do I care?...Do I know him?...The sun soon rises, and the black man is crying…Poor guy..."I'm going to get back my son…"…They look to the island, soon getting there and a Chinese (maybe Korean) screams in another language…he is bloody bruised and bond…"Others, others."… Men approach them looking like some sort of savages with clubs…Who are they and what do they want with the men?
"It's a statue of the Virgin Mary." Charlie grabbed the little statue of heroin from Claire, as she took the baby. "You never know. It might come in handy."
It was then when Charlie noticed the black haired girl, hidden in the shadows, moaning as she squirmed. She wasn't really awake, more like unconsciously dreaming. Charlie stared in her direction. Claire, looked but couldn't see anything because of the darkness. "Charlie, what are you staring at?"
"The women. The one we found. She's moving." Charlie tucked the heroin filled statue away, and headed over to the tree where she was handcuffed. She thrashed and squirmed in her unconscious state. Charlie watched, her eyes still closed, and sweat pouring down her forehead.
"Sayid! Sayid! Come quick!" Charlie moved down to her side, and tried to calm her body. He grabbed her legs trying to hold her still. "Sayid!"
Sayid rushed through the people crowded around, trying to find out what was going on. Sayid took a water bottle that was lying by the fire. Shannon followed behind him, taking off her sweater, and handing it to him. This was probably the first time she did something for someone other than herself.
"Charlie, hold her still. Shannon, get more water. The rest of you, stay out of the way or give us something to help." Sayid put his hand on her forehead. She was burning up. Sayid wrapped the sweater around the woman, and tried to pour water down her throat. Charlie sat on top of her legs, trying to keep her still, but still she thrashed.
"Shannon, where is that water?" Sayid used his fingers and his thumb to hold her mouth open as he poured water down her throat. Charlie still sat on her, and she started to stop thrashing and breathing more normally. Shannon handed Sayid more water. Sayid put the nozzle of the bottle in the woman's mouth and put more water down her throat. Sweat poured down her forehead, making the dried blood become liquid again. Charlie grabbed a shirt from someone to wipe the woman's head. Slowly, she had stopped thrashing and was breathing more slowly. "Hopefully, she'll be awake soon." Charlie nodded, looking over at Sayid who was putting more water in her mouth.
Claire watched from afar, holding a sleeping Aaron at her chest. Why hadn't she heard about this mysterious woman who appeared just about 6 hours earlier? Claire hummed softly to Aaron, and watched but as she went to look back at Aaron, she noticed something shiny sitting in the sand. She balanced Aaron in her lap, as she leaned over to pick up the shiny object. A silver identification bracelet! It had something engraved on it which she could barely make out, but managed to read To Ellie, my shining star, your James.
Oh, I wonder who Ellie is…hmm, like I don't know. Also, I wonder how this woman was seeing what was going on…still, I know. I also wonder about the strange twist that I'm going to give, besides the one Lost is actually going to give, but mine is much more torture… You have to just see, but review forgodsake! I can read stats just like anyone else! I know I'm getting hits, so review! I know you guys are out there! REVIEW!
And since you are all so patient, here is the episode guide for some of the second season. It gets updated every week, so keep checking back. Oh, and one thing, can anyone tell me how many episodes there were last season?
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