Phantom Fan 21: Alright, there has been a small change of plans. This is still going to be a Danny/Judgment chapter, but they won't be doing the picnic. Instead, I'm going to do a gym chapter. The picnic idea is still happening but with a different girl. Before I start, however, there are a few things I need to get out of the way.
Apocrypha, remember you skim over most of the chapters. Some of your questions are already answered in the previous chapters. You need to go back and read them. It might clear some things up. And yes, it might bring up more questions, but you need to read the whole story. Not all at once, but in your own time.
mgasmsms, I have sent you a PM of why I can't really use a Discord. But I'm still not going to do all ten girls for the picnic chapter.
Artorias, you are looking at one side of the coin. You are using the show in your pointers, forgetting one important thing. Valerie's suit is designed to fight GHOSTS! Not DEMONS! Like how you mention back in my Monster Heroes story. Stating that Danny's powers protect him from the things that would really hurt him. Again, you are overlooking something. Danny has only ever fought GHOSTS! Not other monsters. So, if something is made to fight one thing and not the other, how is the character supposed to overcome an object that they've never dealt with before? I'm not trying to be mean, but your reviews are coming off as looking at one side but ignoring the other.
And that's all I'll say from the reviews. Now, on to the Gym chapter!
The weekend rolls around, and Danny found him being drag out of his house by Judgement. He was surprised to see her at the door when he answers it. She told him to finish up whatever he was doing and grabs his arm. Danny blinks as Judgement pulls Danny down the street. She was wearing a t-shirt and shorts and had her bag. He has never seen Judgement this forward before.
"Um, Judgement? Where are we going?" Danny asked.
"To the gym. I have been thinking about this for some time, and I really to carry it out." She said.
"And that is?" Danny asked again.
"I have noticed you have been using your powers for your fights. But that won't always work. There will be a time you are unable to use your powers and you will be defenceless. We don't what that to happen. So, I'm taking you to the gym to train your human form." Judgement said.
"But I didn't grab my gym clothes," Danny said.
"I got a pair for you." Judgement said.
"Huh? You did?" Danny asked.
"Yeah, It wasn't hard, since most boys wear tank tops and shorts." She said.
"Okay?" Danny said, confused.
Now that he thought about it, he has been used to fighting in his ghost form. He limits how much he would use it in his human form, but he didn't want to hurt anyone or misuse his powers again. Maybe he should learn how to fight in his human form, without his powers.
It didn't take them long to reach the gym and Judgement handed him his gym clothes.
"Wait, Judgement, how did you get my size?" Danny asked.
"Lucifer had them. How else did she get your size for your suit?" She said, walking to the changing room.
Danny blinks before sighing. He walks into the men's changing room and changes into his gym clothes. He steps out and saw Judgement waiting for him. She brought him over to a punching punch before warping sports tape on her hands.
"Okay, first, I need to see how well you can take a hit. Hold the bag." She said.
Danny got behind it and held on to it. Judgement got ready and before looking around.
"And don't use your powers." She told him, once it was clear.
"Okay," Danny said and ready himself.
Judgement knew Danny was human, and he wouldn't be able to take a full power hit from her. She punches the bag, and heard Danny grunt. She looks behind the bag and saw him on the ground.
"Sorry!" She said.
"I'm fine." He said, getting back up.
Judgement let up on punches a bit more, and Danny was able to stay on his feet.
"Okay, time to switch." Judgement said.
"Um, sure," Danny said before he got in front of the bag.
Judgement held on to the bag, and Danny started punching it, without using his powers. Judgement was a bit surprised. She knew Danny wasn't that strong in his human form without his powers, but she was hardly flinching from his strikes. However, she knew that Danny was used to using his powers. She then stops him.
"Danny, I think we better do something else. From what I can tell, without your powers, you're not very strong. I'm not feeling anything from your punches." She said.
Danny sighs and nods. They walk over to some weights, and Judgement sent some up. She gave some to Danny and had him follow her movements.
'You know, this isn't so bad. I mean, Judgment is making sure I can keep up.' Danny thought.
They kept up their small workout for a few minutes before Judgement excuse herself. Danny kept lifting the weights, knowing it might take him some time before he's strong enough in his human form. For a High Prosecutor of Hell, she really knows her stuff.
"Well, well, well, I didn't think you'll be here."
Danny turns and saw Dash. He has mostly recovered from the Girls Hell Punishment, but he still didn't leave him alone.
"Give it up, Dash. I'm done being your punching bag." Danny said.
"Oh, really?" Dash said.
"Yeah, I'm going to work out here for some time. So you won't be picking on me anytime soon." Danny said.
Dash narrows his eyes before spotting something.
"Hey, Fenton, think fast!"
Danny turns to see a ball hit him in the chest, knocking him to the ground. Dash laughs and steps up.
"Ha! You're still my punching bag." He said.
"And you're still an idiot."
Dash was shocked by that voice and found himself warp up in chains. Judgement walks up and helps Danny to his feet. She then turns back to Dash and pulls him close.
"I see that you have recovered from our Hell Punishment. But if you think for a second that you can go back to picking on Danny, you're wrong!" Judgment said, her eyes glowing.
Dash was too scared to talk back. He still remembers the pain he went through when he was in Judgement's part of Hell. The chains, his sins, even hearing the loud and sadistic voice. Judgement then gave a smirk he didn't like.
"You know, maybe I can take you back to Hell. I'm sure me and others would love to teach you another lesson." She said.
Dash pale at that. Judgement then turns to Danny.
"With your permission, of course." She added.
Danny really didn't like Hell Punishment. Plus, Dash has gone through it all already.
"I'm going to have to say no this time. I understand it's what you do, being Hell's High Prosecutor and all. But Dash doesn't need to go through that again." He said.
"Very well." Judgement said, letting him go.
Danny then walks up to Dash and looks at him.
"The only reason I'm not letting you go through that again is because I'm fully aware of what will happen if you go into the higher levels. Trust me, Dash. The girls told me, and you will return as a broken person when they are done with you." Danny said.
"What?" Dash asked.
"All the pain and suffering you went through last time? That's was their way of Child Playtime. Their highest level will leave anyone broken, and they will never recover from it. That's is the main reason I don't like Hell Punishment." Danny said.
"Now, if you don't mind, we have some exercising to do!" Judgement said, grabbing Danny's hand.
They both walk away from Dash and went back to their workout.
Sorry, everyone. I ran out of ideas. Now, this isn't going under a rewrite like another chapter. This came out all right. I just couldn't think of any more for this. I don't have a gym around my town, as far as I know, so I can't really put up all the things they did together. I did want this to be longer, but after having Dash show up again, I kept coming up blank. Every time I try to think of something else, I end up not liking it and removed it. I want to be longer, but I ran dry on what else to do.
Anyways, I wish to inform you about Demon Musme. Danny's and Malina's Lemon is still going to be rewritten, but I'm a little focused on my other stories. As for Danny's and Zrdada's lemon, that's going to be a bit longer to write. I do have an idea of what to do, but I need more time to plan it out.
I have also noticed that I'm the only person to do Danny Phantom/Hellataker Crossovers. Take a look at the crossover section on both Danny Phantom and Helltaker. I'm the only one there with three of my stories! That's the second time this has happened. What was the first? My MLP and Luigi's Mansion Crossover, which started to get more people, and please don't ask me when I'm going to update Fluttershy's Mansion 3. I don't when I'm going back to it because I lost all interest in Luigi's Mansion.
As for the next chapter...not sure. I'm still saving the picnic chapter for later, but I'm a little blank on what to do next. Ideas are welcome. And just one girl! This ten girl harem is hard enough as it is.
