just a quick message: i revised this first chapter. with a friendly flame from someone, ive changed some things around. but it is not messed up. im using the characters and thier attitudes from inuyasha into my own little fun story. its actually pretty good, it was based on a school project i wrote in grade 6.

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My Feudal Fairy Tale

Chapter 1:

A Crashed Wedding

Kagome Higurashi was excited. She was going to be wed today to Prince Kouga. He seemed to like her and the princess returned the feeling. This was so wonderful!

"Kagome!" began Nazuna, Kagome's best friend as well as advisor. (A/N: Spider Head episode.)"Your dress looks so lovely!" 'Tis was true. It was white (like all wedding dresses) and very laced. There was a ring of flowers on her head attached to a veil. It was very wide and puffy on the bottom. The top was attached like a muscle shirt. She wore white silk gloves. Kouga had not yet seen it yet. At the practice they had just been wearing their regular clothes. What a shock he would receive!

"Thank-you Nazuna. The castle tailors have been working for weeks preparing it. They will receive a handsome reward." Kagome replied, posing in front of the mirror. Her lips were painted red, with lipstick they called it. It was a full red colour and tasted awful. It was an artificial colouring.

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"Hojo, how does my suit look?" Prince Kouga asked his best friend who was also an advisor. "I want it to be perfect for the wedding ceremony. Kagome is so beautiful... She truly deserves the best."

"Yes, I agree," Hojo replied, as he always did. Kouga loved to talk about his darling Kagome. "Oh, her lips, such a full red," or "Ahh, Mrs. Kagome Kouga..." Hojo sighed and shook his head. Kouga was so full of himself. After all, he was supposed to marry Aayme, but Kagome didn't know that.

"I can't wait to see her. I didn't see her gown at the practice, but I'm sure that it will look dazzling." Kouga said mindlessly. He was drowned in the thoughts of Kagome.

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"So, they're having a party? And they didn't invite me? For shame! I guess they'll regret it!"

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It was the night of the wedding. Kagome and Kouga had not seen each other yet.

'I really hope Kouga will like my wedding dress,' Kagome thought to herself nervously. 'Imagine him firing the tailors! They'd have his hide for this!'

'Kagome probably looks so beautiful, I hope she will like what I wear.' Kouga thought to himself. 'I've heard the tailors worked like mad for her gown. It will probably look wonderful!'

Music came through the organ. Everyone sitting now stood up and turned their heads. Kouga twiddled with his fingers nervously. Any minute now Kagome was going to enter through the church doors and say, "I do." What was this feeling? Happiness? Fear? Was he ready for this? Was Kouga ready to be set in holy matrimony?

"And now announcing the arrival of Princess Kagome, hereafter, Queen Kagome!" said Hojo. Everyone stared in awe. No one could see her face, but her dress was dazzling! As Kouga stared in awe he forgot all of his second thoughts about his wedding. All he could remember was Kagome. Beautiful, perfect Kagome.

"Hello Kouga," Kagome said from behind her veil. The floor was littered with flower petals. Mayu, the flower girl, had been sprinkling them before the arrival of Kagome. How cute she looked with her two pigtails tied up! She wore a white dress that had short sleeves. She wore a ring of flowers on her head as well. She seemed so happy.

"H-Hello K-Kagome," Kouga stuttered, appalled by her beauty. Although he couldn't see her face he could see all the work the tailors put into that dress. It was gorgeous!

"All right," began an old priest, around 50 years of age. "We are gathered here today to bring these two people in holy matrimony." He talked about things in their marriage and children. Finally he asked Kouga, "Do you, Prince Kouga, promise to love and to care for this woman, through sickness and age?"

"I do." Kouga answered, only waiting half a second.

"Now, do you Princess Kagome accept his hand in marriage?"

"I-" Kagome began, but was cut off. There was black smoke and when it cleared an old woman was standing in the middle of it.

"I, Tsubaki, heard that there was a marriage taking place," started Tsubaki. (A/N: From the episode "The Red and White Priestess." Haha, I love the episode. What? You thought I'd diss Kaede? Besides, she already has the part of witch down.) "And I wasn't invited! You shall pay!" She waved her stick around and a fire started. Everyone screamed and tried to run, but could not. All of the entrances were blocked. It was if it was a barrier.

"Come with me!" ordered Tsubaki, grabbing Kagome's dress by the shoulder. Kagome tried to escape her grip, but it was firm. Tsubaki and Princess Kagome arose into the air and vanished in a puff of smoke.

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Nowadays, many people have moved away from that castle of Tokyo. They either died or moved to Shikon Town. (a/n: ive known that it mean four souls, but lets just say that there was something about a priestess there and a sacred jewel, ok? This isn't messed up, im using the characters and their personalities for my own story I created.) It was a developing and a neighbour to Tokyo. Luckily, it was very far away.

For some strange reason, the castle did not burn to the ground. It was mostly burnt, but still standing. No one dared near it. Perhaps 50 years later, someone will.

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Plz R&R!!! I know it's a big cliffy, srry!

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