Ok... I don't have a whole lot of comments yet (witch i hope will change hint hint) but the one i have is good so i wrote this to.
Disclaimer: i don't own Rurouni Kenshin
A Shadow of a Shadow
Even when you smile,
The light in your eyes is blocked,
Dimmed by the Shadow of your past,
That past witch haunts your dreams.
Shadows can be ignored...
But your's torments you, even today,
After all those lonesome years.
The X on your face
Leaves you marked, scared, for eternity.
A mark from the past
A Shadow of a Shadow
I hope you liked it. It was a bit darker than my first but oh well.