Hey, I got this story when I was reading another person's story. And that person was a highly recommended author named Sanzo Lover.
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Vision
As the girl ran, she heard a scream. It was not a "Oh my gosh, you got me a necklace!" kind of scream. No. It was the kind of scream that said, "Help me! I am dying!" She turned back for a second and a hand clamped over her mouth. She struggled and fought against the ropes that were being wound around her, but nothing helped. Then, everything went black.
End vision.
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Kira woke up from the vision with a look of blank terror on her face. She looked at her three companies and closest friends: Sasuke, Sakura, and Naruto.
"Kira? What is it?" Sakura asked in a concerned tone.
"It's…It's nothing," the seven year old squeaked, her voice faltering.
Sasuke looked at her with his onyx eyes and knew at once she was covering something up.
Kira yawned and suddenly Kakashi was behind her.
"It is late, and you need to sleep," he said. Kira nodded, rubbing her eyes. His eyes softened and he picked her up.
"Goodnight Sakura. Goodnight Naruto. Goodnight Sasuk…" her voice trailed off as her purple eyes glazed over black.
Vision.
She saw a girl and a boy. They were running…from an enemy…they were fighting…and then…black.
End vision.
Kira gasped and felt very faint. Kakashi looked at her and saw that she was very pale. He put her down onto the floor next to Sakura.
"Sakura, Naruto…you…"she said her voice trailing off, yet again.
She tried again. "I had a vision. You and Naruto were running, and then fighting and then…black."
Her entire body shuddered and then she fainted. Sakura picked up the poor seven-year-old.
She gave the child to Kakashi who carried her on his back. He walked down the hall to what was the infirmary.
He laid her down and then went back to the room where the other three were. They looked at him like he had some serious explaining to do.
Kira was never a normal girl. For instance, instead of most babies crying when they were born, she was dead silent. And instead of her eyes being a light blue like most baby's eyes tend to be, hers were a light purple that deepened over the years.
When she was about five, her parents abandoned her for they had found out she could see the future. Now, most parents would be thrilled their daughter was so special, but her parents were absolutely terrified. They left her at the gates of the Village Hidden In The Leaves. She was nearly killed multiple times by passing carriages. (?)
Finally, she was rescued by a young jounin, Hatake Kakashi. Instead of her purple eyes and special gifts frightening him, he thought her as special and always treated her like that.
Kira had had many tragedies, but now she was happy as she was training to become a ninja. Nothing could ruin her life.
Or so she thought….
There's the first chapter. I think it sucks arse, but you are welcome to review and tell me it doesn't: )
-ZukoKrazy.
Guess the BAND and the TITLE of this song, and you will win a prize!
She says she's no good
with words but I'm worse
Barely stuttered out
"A joke of a
romantic" or stuck to my tongue
Weighed down with words too
over-dramatic
Tonight it's "it can't get much worse"
Vs. "no one should ever feel like.."
I'm two
quarters and a heart down
And I don't want to forget how your
voice sounds
These words are all I have so I'll write them
So
you need them just to get by
Dance, Dance
We're falling
apart to half time
Dance, Dance
And these are the lives you'd
love to lead
Dance, this is the way they'd love
If they knew
how misery loved me
You always fold just before you're found
out
Drink up its last call
Last resort
But only the first
mistake and I...
I'm two quarters and a heart down
And I
don't want to forget how your voice sounds
These words are all I
have so I'll write them
So you need them just to get by
Why
don't you show me the little bit of spine
You've been saving for
his mattress, love
Dance, Dance
We're falling apart to half
time
Dance, Dance
And these are the lives you'd love to
lead
Dance, this is the way they'd love
If they knew how misery
loved me
Why don't you show me the little bit of spine
You've
been saving for his mattress (mattress, mattress)
I only want
sympathy in the form of you crawling into bed with me
Dance,
Dance
We're falling apart to half time
Dance, Dance
And
these are the lives you'd love to lead
Dance this is the way
they'd love (way they'd love)
Dance this is the way they'd love
(way they'd love)
Dance this is the way they'd love
If they
knew how misery loved me
Dance, Dance
Dance, Dance
Dance,
Dance
Dance, Dance
Pretty easy. You should be able to get it. Review! And NO flames!