As I sit here working on the next chapter of Memory of a Pharaoh, I thought I would do a review of the last few chapters. This review will start where the last review left off.
Chapter 13&14- Same Chapter just two different views. I really didn't expect any one to take chapter 13 the way they did. Anyway a bit of Yami's past is revealed and then eagle runs off with Yami following behind.
Tidbit- yeah, I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote these chapters
Chapter 15-Yami catches up with Eagle. Eagle takes him to see priest Seto then they return to a garden where Eagle reveals more of his past.
Tidbit- hmm… second chances at a chapter are nice. I really didn't like the first chapter 15 anyway, and this one turned out better
Chapter 16-they return home to Pegasus's duelist kingdom island, where someone is waiting for them, and Eagle prepares to reveal her own secret.
Tidbit-I was doing well after the revamped chapter 15 this one just happened. It turned out well so what can I say.
Chapter 17- Eagle reveals that she isn't really the Vessels true owner, and that she is a third spirit (wheel). The gang splits up to look for the real owner only to find a new bump in the fic.
Tidbit- Umm… I announced the winner of my contest in this chapter.
Chapter 18- Marik reveals himself and a new battle begins. He reveals his dueling weapon, which just happens to be the vessels light. Eagle gets injured in a duel and comes back for more
Tidbit- feeling bad about changing POV so quickly and suddenly. However, must not be a problem since no one complained
Chapter 19-in the midst of a duel with Marik, Eagle is saved by Yami. Eagle awakens to Yugi watching over her. Only to realize that Marik and Heila are not around. Ends with Eagle screaming in pain.
Tidbit- I was bored and decided to take it out on my character. That being said next chapter
Chapter 20- Eagle's connection with Heila is strong enough she can tell when she's in pain. The gang goes in search of the lost hikari. Chapter ends with Eagle going into a room to duel Marik
Tidbit- Short but not as short as others, Can't really tell you much on this chapter except that it was the last of the ones I had already written. The story is now caught up and waits for me to write the next chapter
Chapter 21- a two-part chapter, this part involves a duel and it continues through the whole chapter. Marik reveals that once he defeats Eagle, her hikari and she will be sucked into the shadow realm, releasing strong monsters onto an unsuspecting world.
Tidbit-after this chapter I gave up on trying to play with the real cards and decided on my own cards.
Chapter 21 b- Eagle defeats Marik and sends Yami Marik to the shadow realm. Eagle reveals more to the whole three's spirit company. Then reveals she doesn't know how she ended up in Heila in the first place. As she leaves Yami to think, Eagle has a meeting with Ra. Who promises to return her to earth after she returns the body to Heila.
Tidbit- I was taking forever to figure out what to do with this new development. Since I really didn't reveal much on Yami's past I decided to continue the fic. Thus, chapter 22 came about.
Chapter 22- starts with Yami. He watches as eagle disappears into the shadow realm and Heila return with out her. A few days later Heila sends him a package, telling him to come to Egypt. Things happen and Yami, Bakura, and Seto head to Egypt with their own reasons.
Tidbit- by the time I had this chapter written it was long, really long. So rather than split it like chapter 21 I decided to make two separate chapters. Next chapter would be 23 and picks up on the start of a duel between Seto and Joey.