A work in Progress

Chapter 14

POV: Haldir

By: PiXiE

No one had seeked me out to break off the engagement, there had been no warning, no dark looks, Aglarebwen had acted her normal self: totally ignoring my presence.


Since horse riding I had gone through a myriad of emotions and at one point I almost wished that the engagement were called off. Was I actually ready to marry? Was I committed enough? And could I cope with Aglarebwen for an eternity? Elven weddings were final once they had been culminated there was no going back, you were together forever.


I was sitting at the top most branch of an oak tree, staring down at Imladris, and I was wondering if Aglarebwen could make the transition between her home and Lothlorien.


Despite what many think, Lorien is not just a wood full of proud elves, who spend all their years trying to gain wisdom from tombs of books. There was in fact a rather large population of sylvan elves, shameless sylvan elves who were complete flirts and absolutely corrupt. In fact Orophin, my brother, took after them quite a lot, not surprising, as all of his friends were sylvan. As far as I am concerned the only thing sylvans are good for is singing.


My musings were cut short when I heard someone climbing up a tree. I looked down to see a familiar face, twice. "I told you he would hear us!" one of the twins pointed out.


"Well, he could have been dreaming," was the reply. "He was staring ahead unblinkingly."


"No matter what we think of him he is not foolish enough to slumber on the highest branch of a tree."


"You do it all the time," the other shot back.


"I haven't done such a thing since I was an elfling, and even then it was because you dared me! He, however, is stoic and ever the stickler for the rules. He-"


"He has a name," I interrupted looking at the two bemused.


"So do we," one grinned.


"So which of us is which?" the other questioned.


They knew that I couldn't always tell the difference between the two, especially when they were interacting together, without others. They tended to pick up on each other's slight quirks that one usually didn't notice.


"Elladan and Elrohir, otherwise known as the stars, so I'm told." I knew mentioning this would distract them.


They both formed the identical non-plussed looks before scowling identically, with impeccable timing.


"Who told you that?" I smirked at the irked tone.


"That's for me to know." I replied. "It might be useful at a later date."


The two looked at each other pointedly before their faces broke out into identical grins. "I fear we were wrong." One started.


"Aye. I cannot believe that we did not perceive this before."


I glanced at them questioningly. "You are more like Laingalad than we thought!" they announced simultaneously.


Was I? Certainly, most definitely, not.


"But there is a reason for our being here."


"Aye, for we grace the presence of only those we wish to speak to."


"Or annoy," I added.


"That too," a twin agreed.


"But we are challenging you to a contest!"


I quirked an eyebrow at this, "You wish to loose again. Is this how you pursue elleths? Pester them into flirting with you?"


"No, my dear Haldir, they pursue us!" he sighed dramatically.


"But it has been quite some time since our last contest, we have improved since then."


"You can now hit the target?" I grinned lazily.


One elf, who I realised to be Elladan narrowed his eyes. "You try aiming correctly when you have a rabid elleth pinching you everywhere." He unconsciously rubbed his ear.


Elrohir chortled. "But when shall we compete?"


"Tomorrow, at midday." I decided. "I have a tedious meeting with Erestor to go to-"


"We feel for you!" Elrohir did not sound in the least bit comforting.


"And at midday most will be dining, so we can spare you both the embarrassment." I smirked at their glares of contempt, before falling easily from the tree.

*

My talk with Erestor had been arduous to say the least, constantly going over miniscule details that mattered not to me.


Eventually it was decided that our, that is Aglarebwen and myself, belongings would go ahead of us, and my brothers would sort it all out and put it away. How I was persuaded to give them such a task I know not.


When I made to leave, Erestor made a flippant comment about my leggings and my elfhood, causing me to hurry to my room and investigate further.

*

The next morning at around eleven, Erestor managed to find me, my ploy of avoidance obviously not working. He eventually finished his lengthy monologue about dust; apparently someone had told him my room needed dusting, how they would know was a mystery to me, for none but myself had been in there. I suspected Cerina. I could just imagine her stealing one of my tunics to 'help her sleep' or some other such nonsense.


After I managed to decline the offer of having my rooms dusted (I didn't want people snooping) and hurried to pick up my weapons before heading to the archery range.


When I arrived I found Elladan and Elrohir snickering, partnered with an elated Aglarebwen, looking as if New Year had come early.


"Ahh! Haldir!" a twin started.


"We thought you had backed down. Not being able to compete at our level."


"An elfling could beat you Elladan." Aglarebwen commented dryly. "You have only just learnt to hold your bow the right way around."


"That is my brother you're insulting!"


"I know," Aglarebwen pursed her lips. "I decided not to comment on your…ah…abilities, as I did not want to mortify you in front of the esteemed March warden."


"Soon to be March warden," Elladan corrected. "He hasn't done the deeds yet!" I noticed a slight pinkish tint colouring Aglarebwen's cheeks.


"What?" Elladan questioned when Elrohir elbowed him in the side. A pointed glare immediately jogged his memory, causing him to blush slightly.


Elrohir cleared his throat. "Shall we now approach the targets?"


Not waiting for an answer he strode off towards a target while I took a chance to look around the range.


It was bereft of any elves other than our group, Lord Glorfindel and a lone elfling at the end, who was haphazardly attempting to hit the target. Even from where I was standing I could see his grip was wrong causing his arrows to glance to the left.
Elrohir stopped by Lord Glorfindel and conversed with him briefly before standing in front of the target, adjacent to his.


"You can go first." I motioned to Elladan, "to give yourself enough time to fetch your arrow from that tree yonder." I waved my hand in a northerly direction.

 
Elrohir and Aglarebwen laughed, while Elladan rolled his eyes, good naturedly, before taking aim and firing, hitting a bull's eye, but not in the centre. Glorfindel beside us was firing a barrage of arrows making a star shape on his target.


"You next!" Elrohir announced grinning at me. I nodded in compliance, noticing Lord Glorfindel striding up to his own target, removing his arrows.


I took an arrow out of my quiver and took aim, pulling my bowstring back until, it was taught, causing the wood of the bow to ripple as it was put under strain.


Taking target, I released the arrow, waiting expectantly for it to hit the target as it normally did. Unfortunately, this was not the case. My arrow reared off in a surprising arc, missing my target completely, instead hitting another embedding itself in the hall, taking some golden hair with it. I gaped in horror as Lord Glorfindel turned, wincing as the arrow tugged his hair.

This did not bode well.

A/n the are a variety of reasons for this chapter not being put up and I would like to comment that I actually finished writing it about 3 weeks ago.  Francesca then accidentally took it home, but said she would type it up, which she did but then her computer went A-wall and it's only just been fixed.

She told Mo that she would give her a floppy disk of this chapter rather then Mo having to type it up again.  I believe Mo got that some time during the week (I've been absent the last 3 days) and so I received the chapter today.

So…to reviews!

Elvenprincess19:  Am I the only one that doesn't think Haldir would randomly go to his room and strip and then stare at himself?  Yeah he's conceited, but not that much! 

Haldir's heart and soul:  Well technically he's not cheating on Laingalad as he doesn't like any of his pursuers and is actually trying to get rid of them, my poor lil elf!

Dakota:  Hello my dear ranger, what ever you are now ;)  Lol, you love naked Haldir!  I know you do!  Rather scary all these Haldir fans around me at school *shudders*  but at least I have Legolas for myself!  (at least in my mind)

chibi:  Aha!  Someone else that thinks it's disturbing!  I knew I wasn't alone in this world!  I personallt don't think he would do it, I told Fran to get him to change or something, but No!  she never listens to me!  *sighs dramatically*

Kylin:  Thanks!  It's not a marriage, well I suppose in a marriage you do order people around, but yeah we have in depth discussions, well we did but time is spread a bit thin at school so I will take this opportunity to tell mo to WRITE chapter FIFETEEN *coughs*  okay now that I've got that out of my system, perseverance is a good thing when you're trying to mesh ideas, we've been doing it for over a year now so it's easier, if you want to look at our early attempts see all hell breaks loose, another one of our stories, completely ridiculour but that was more for humours sake than an actual story…

me:  Hi Nicole.  I love Cerina, esp. as Cerina is Mo's nickname *waves*  oh how that annoys her!  Moley!  *coughs* 

everdawn:  well we'll just keep you hanging!

Will WILL  be updating next Sunday *glares at Mo*  she will have written the chapter and not spent time writing other things or drawing etc.

PiXiE