ok you guys,this is my first ever fic thingy so please tell me what is good and what is not.I know this story is going to be a little weird and OOC for the characters but the story just popped in to my head...and i know some parts sound like a teenager would saying but its not,a four year old is saying it...
oh yeah i don't own any final fantasty characters so don't sue me please!
Ch1: The meet
"Squall, come and eat lunch!" mom called out to me. I pouted and yelled ,"I'm not hungry." in my grouchy 4 and a half year old voice. "come on, squallie. Tommorow's your birthday, you dont need to be in a bad mood." mom said as she dried her hands on a towel. "So? I don't care. My birthdays are boring anyways." I said as I headed out my room door on to the outside.
I walked on to the park where I always go to get away from that mom of mine "I hate when she calls me 'squallie'. she's just so ugh. I hate her." I thought as I say down on a park bench. A sudden breeze hit the side of my face. A short brown strand of hair blew in to my face. I blew it away. Just as i did that, a girl with pigtails that had red ribbons tied around them, which seem to be made to look like cat ears, came up to me. "hi." she said as her pigtails blew in the wind."My name is Aerith. what's your name?" she smiled as she played with the edge of her pink dress.I glared at her, tapping my foot impatiently. "go away." I said frowning up at her.She still stood smiling at me, her ribbon cat ears blowing in the wind. I got up and pushed past her, heading toward the side walk.
I was doing that, I saw a blonde haired kid strolling through the grass, singing, " My name is cloud, I have a sword..." he sung sort of queitly so I only heard those words.He was wearing a red overcoat like thing (in the summer)with black boots and a sword looking thing which was the length of my arm(that's pretty long to me).Three women came up to him and cooed over how cute he was. Then he got a half innocent, half mischievous smile on his face. He pointed the sword thing at one of the lady's thighs and thrust forward. The lady moved her leg before he stabbed her . He was still out stretched with the sword thing inches away from the woman's thigh with a piece of cloth from the woman's pants on it.The women were frozen with fear. At that moment time seen to stop and turn its attention to the boy. It was incredibly quiet. I felt like I was the only one that didn't know what was going on, yet I watched it happen. One of the ladys' actually gathered up the courage to scream and run. Then after that, the whole park was in an uproar. People were running left and right screaming their heads off. A dog was running in circles barking frantically. After awhile it got quiet. I and the blonde kid stood in the place that we were.
He smiled at me as he approached me. As he got closer, I noticed that he was as tall as me.He cocked his head to the side and said, "Why is your mouth open like that? Are you waiting for a kiss or something? I'll kiss you if you want." he said innocently. I closed my mouth and shook my head. " what's your name? my name is cloud. Did you know that there are also clouds in the sky. I wonder how they feel being up there? How did they get up there? How come..." "SHUT UP!" I yelled, shaking him slightly. "Man, for a kid with a lisp, he sure does talk a lot." I thought. I sighed and looked straight at him.He was rocking back and forth whistling the song he was singing earlier. I sighed again. "My name is squall and I'm 5. Well actually 4 and a half but my birthday's tommorow." I boasted. "Cool I'm 4 and my birthday's in april. when's yours? oh wait, it's tommorow!Ooh,ooh, maybe I can come over and party with you. Ooh maybe I should wear a suit. Nah, I don't like suits. They're weird. Why do older guys wear them? maybe they're going to a party too. I wonder if mama's ever been to a party? I've been to..." He was giving me a headache. "maybe I should just run away from him and never look back." I thought. It was either listen to him talk about everything or run. I decided to high tail it because the headache was kicking in. So I slowly backed away as he continued talking. "...and maybe she's got one too? And...hey! Where are you going. I'm not done telling you about my mama!" "aw man", I thought," I should have ran in ther first place." I ran from him. I had my eyes closed so I don't know where I was going. I tripped on something and fell...
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