Well I was bored so I thought why not work on my story? I have to do a few Mathcounts things soon so don't expect an update withen a day like today. I just realized that to some my title might not make sence. When I say Expand I'm talking about Expanding into the other races that they will come across. Also the race the Wolfhearts I will sometimes spell with a space. I may also just call them WH. The WH are basically my tweaked versions of werewolves. The Erklore are my version of a mix between LOtR Easterlings and elves and Harry Potter Erklings. The giants are just giants. I would've made them linked to a race different from the dwarves but the dwarves were the only ones after I came up with a basic story line that didn't link to a race. The smithians were originally the Artisans but I changed it because A) There really are Artisans and B) I named them after my Favourite Teacher Mr. Smith. His name just happened to get worked with the fact that there are blacksmiths. I was thinking of putting in a few dragon eggs but as of right now I have decided against it. Like the first chapter Please comment. Oh and yes I know the third book is called Empire but it didn't really fit my story. If you noticed I changed the way my settings and stuff are seperated.
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Eragon woke up to the sounds of people moving about outside. Saphira was still asleep. Eragon walked over to her and woke her by thinking the word "HI!" loudly. Saphira woke with a start but soon got over it and said," That wasn't necessary you know"
Eragon smiled and said," I know."
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Saphira sood up and the two left the tent. Nasuada and Arya had woken long before them. Roran was already asleep. The rest of Carvahall had already left to go to Dauth. Nasuada had been the first to wake as she had used the least amount of energy besides Roran, who was only still asleep because he was tired from his long trip. Nasuada had already spoken to King Orrin about their plans to leave for the other races. King Orrin agreed that it was the best even though they would be deprived of the strongest people in the Varden. King Orrin then agreed to make sure nothing falls into turmoil and that he would make sure that the people were fed. Nasuada didn't truely believe Orrin would do an excellant job, but he was obviously the best choice since Arya, Orik, Eragon, and she would be gone.
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Arya later woke and had told Orik of their plans. Orik wasn't as sure as Orrin had been. Orik put up things about who would be controling the Varden and dwarves while they were gone. Orik also suggested that they bring Garzhvog. They needed a represenitive of every race fighting against Galbatorix to show how much they tried and yet failed to overthrow Galbatorix. Arya then replied noting that Saphira couldn't hold three people littleless five. Orik then responded by saying that wether they bring four or five it won't change that Saphira cannot carry them. Orik continued saying that even on Saphira they couldn't carry the supplies they needed. Arya respongded saying they would get some people who knew how to drive the Dragon Wing to teach others who wish to help. With the Dragon Wing they would contact the giants and the Smithians. Saphira, Eragon, and Nasuada would most likely beable to handle the WHs while she, Orik, and Garzvog stayed in Surda helping with the Varden and waiting for them to return. Once they did she, Eragon, Saphira, and possibly Garzvog. Orik then said that the Erklore might hold a grudge against her and possibly Eragon because he looked like an elf. Arya then told Orik the entire section of the Erklore and how they didn't get angry with the last elf who walked on their land. Orik then and only then complied. Arya then left to tell Nasuada of the new plans.
Eragon stretched his arms and he walked towards Nasuada's tent. When he reached there he realized he had interupted ARya and Nasuada's talk. He then said," Sorry to interupt, but I have just awaken and I need to know who has been told and if we have any plans."
Arya quickly filled Eragon in about the plans Orik and she had come up with. Eragon almost objected when she said that Garzvog would be coming with them. Eragon then realized though he still looked down on urgals, Garzvog was brighter then he and was a good represenitive of a race that had been hurt by Galbatorix. Eragon quickly complied with the plans and said," I shall tell Nar Garzvog. However we might want to make sure that the urgals do not attack the humans and the humans to the urgals while we are away." Nasuada put that into account and she and Arya started working to fix that hole in their plan.
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Roran yawned as he woke. It had been so long since he last slept so well. He knew he was to treasure it as he was going to help with allying them with the other races. He represented the people Galbatorix had hurt, Arya represented the Elves, Eragon and Saphira represented the Dragons and riders, an Orik who apparently was coming with them was representing the dwaves. Roran had not heard the nexs of what they were going to do at the moment so didn't account for Garzvog. Roran quickly put on some new clothes the Varden had provided. To Joed's word he, and the rest of Carvahall were treated finely. Word had reached him that Carvahall had made it back safetly and were treated as heroes. Roran left the tent and he caught Eragon a Saphira walking towards the Urgal camp a short distance away. Calling to Eragon, Roran yelled," Eragon where are you going?"
Eragon saw Roran and motioned for him to come. Roran ran andd easily reached Eragon. Roran then repeated his question," Where are you going?"
" Saphira and I are heading to tell Garzvog, the leader of the urgals who joined us, that he will be traveling with us."
" What? You actually are bringing an Urgal with us. I thought that Nasuada was somewhat crazy for just allying ourselves with them. How can I travel in comfort knowing that we have an eight foot monster with us!" Eragon had expected such a responce from Roran. It was more then less the way he had reacted. Eragon knew he couldn't get Roran to like Garzvog so he settled for just trying to get him to trust him. " Garzvog is trustable. I probed his mind. I know his life. He only has killed humans under Durza's control and over food or land. You do not hate over something animals do all the time."
Roran wasn't aware of the magic terms but could tell Eragon had somehow sort of read this Urgal's mind.Roran then said," How can you be sure he wasn't hiding something?"
" He was very open. He wanted to convince me that he and the other Urgals were not evil. Even if he hadn't been open I could've pried open his mind. Though he is brighter then I, I am stronger in mind and magic. Roran, brother, I am not asking you to love Garzvog or even like him, just trust him." Roran seemed to be having a hard tome deciding before finally saying," I value your imput and I suppose you are most likly right. You are a rider after all."
"Thank you Roran. I know it must be hard for you to agree. It was hard for me as well until I had probed his mind."
" It is not a problem. Just because I will stay on the same ship and camp as him though, doesn't mean I won't watch him like a hawk."
" Orik had almost the same opinion."
Eragon enter the Urgal camp and Garzvog approached them and said," Firesword, Flame tongue, and whoever you are, why have you come to our camp?"
Eragon," We merely must tell you about a scroll I found and about your part in it."
Eragon showed Garzvog the scroll and explained everything he had learned so far. Garzvog was syprised about the otehr races and when Eragon started speaking of the giants he said," I do not feel comfortable with people so large. Are you sure we can convince them without offending them or angering them?"
Eragon said," No we are not. However we need all the help we can get. Your mere hundred Urgals helped us plenty in the last battle. Imagine what these giants could do." Garzvog thought for a moment and said," Like your alliance with us it is for the best." Eragon continued the rest of the scroll. When he finished he told Garzvog," You will not be hurt by any of our warriors. Nasuada, Arya, Saphira, and I are very sure of you. Orik and Roran trust you. Do not do anything suspisious though for they are watching you."
Garzvog," I am honored the relative to such a mighty warrior and a fierce dwarf trust me."
Roran," Just be careful about wht you do. When bad things happen my hammer sometimes slips."
" You have my word. Is this all the plans Firesword?"
"Yes."
" Ahgrat ukmar," it is done, " then I will inform my people of what they must do in my absence. I will ready myself for the trip when everything is complete."
Eragon nodded and he, Saphira, and Roran turned and left the Urgals.
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What do you think? I personally only thought it was ok. I feel like I am getting ooc. since I want to take up more space I will put up one of my favourite jokes. " A butcher in England put a sign in his shop saying " The queen buys her meat here." A rival butcher across the street then put up a sign reading," God bless the queen."" Ok I'm done. :D Feel free to ask questions. I am happy to answer.