children of the primarchs: a story of the lost

by Cador the 2nd

What if the Emperor of mankind had given his sons the ability to sire children? To act as a counter balance to their worst excesses, what if being farthers could make them better people? Well that was the plan until the Horus heresy had kicked off and 8 of these children were each left on a isolated death world called remnant one by one...

14. a change of plans and question

Ok this has been a difficult few months for me IRL and writing for me. but looking at what i have uploaded here and how i have improved on my writing since the Original version of this started on my Archive account, i out ran my abilities and the story for me tanked at the volume three mark, i think i can do so much better so i ask you guys and gals this.

should i finish the volume one of this story as is and then reboot or just reboot it now?

any feedback is more than welcome and thank you for supporting me so far and hope youve been enjoying reading!