well, this is the first chapter of my first fanfiction, please read and write a review...oh, and sorry for grammar mistakes...my english isn't so good
(phone rings, Piper picks it up)
PIPER:Hello? Oh hi Joanna!
JOANNA(over phone): Hi Piper, long time since we've heard from each other, last time I saw you was on your sisters funeral.
PIPER: Yeah, I know, me and my sisters have been really buisy in the past years, you know.
JOANNA: Your sisters? I thought Phoebe was the only sister left beside you?
PIPER: Yeah, well, she was, until it turned out that we have a halfsister.
JOANNA: Oh, cool, I always wished I'd have some sisters, lucky you. So what's she like, your sister?
PIPER: Well, she's cool, her name is Paige, she has the same mother as we have, she's the youngest from us...(silence) Joanna, why did you call?
JOANNA: Well, I realized I haven't seen you in such a long time and wanted to ask you, if we should start hanging out together again. You know, just like we did in highschool.
PIPER: Sure, I would love that, when do you have time?
JOANNA: Well...this Saturday. My husbands daughter from his first marriage is moving in with us on Friday. You could come over to my place and bring your sisters, we could all hang out together, I could get to know your new sister, you could get to know, my family.
PIPER: Sounds great.
JOANNA: Oh Piper, this is so great, we really need some time to talk.
PIPER: Yeah, it'll be nice, after all, we used to be best friends in highschool.
JOANNA: Yeah. Well, I gotta go now, so see you on Saturday?
PIPER: Yes, sure, bye.
(hangs up the phone)
Later that day, Phoebe, Piper, Leo and PAige having dinner together
PIPER: Uhm, Paige,Phoebe, you have plans for Saturday?
Paige: No, why?
PIPER: Well, anyone remember my old friend Joanna from highschool?
PHOEBE: Yes, of course, how could I forgot her? You two were always hanging out together. So what's up with her?
PIPER: She invited us three to visit her this Saturday and I already said yes.
PAIGE: Hey cool, then I can finally meet one of your old friends you had, before I knew you.
PIPER: Yes, and she gets to know you.
PHOEBE: Do you think she still wears that pigtail everyday?
PIPER: I think she's grown up by now.
It's Saturday, Paige orbed them all into a small street very close to the house Joanna lives in, they brought baby Chris
PIPER: All right, time to go in.
(they go to the house and ring the bell. A woman answers the door. She looks as old as Piper and has dark hair and dark eyes)
JOANNA:(happy)Piper!
(they hug)
Piper: Nice to see you again Joanna.
JOANNA: Yea, it has been a long time since we met last. (turning to Paige) And you must be Paige, very nice to finally meet you.
(they shake hands)
PAIGE: Yea, i've heard so many things about you, pleased to meet you.
JOANNA:(turning back to Piper and noticing her son) Oh, your baby are so cute! I remember when Perdita was a baby...it seems like yesterday.
PIPER: How old is she now?
JOANNA: 11, already.
PIPER: Wow, already 11? I still remember the day she was born.
JOANNA: Yeah, I don't thing I'll ever forget that day...So come in now
(they all enter and go to the living room. In there are a man(Joannas husband, his name is Mike), and two girls. One of them is obviously 11-year-old Perdita, the other one is about 15 or 16 years old, she got dark eyes and black hair, you can see that it is not her natural haircolor. She obviously doesn't wanna be here, she looks very bored)
PIPER: Hello everyone!
MIKE: Piper! Nice to see you again! First and last time was on that highschool-reunion, remember?
PIPER:(embarrased, because maybe ya remember, she was possessed this day and ended up dancing on that table) How could I forget that night?
PERDITA: Hi Ms. Halliwell.
PIPER: Oh, you can call me Piper, remember? Wow you look so grown up.
PERDITA: (proud) Well, I am.
PIPER: Do you already know my sisters?
MIKE: Well, only Phoebe, (to Phoebe) I read your column every day.
PHOEBE: Wow, I'm impressed.
MIKE:(to Paige) So you must be Paige, Joanna told about you after she phoned with Piper the last time. Nice to meet you, I'm Mike.
PAIGE: Ditto.
(Joanna enters the room, carrying a tray with some cookies and coffee on it)
JOANNA: So everyone introduced to everyone?
PIPER: Well, not really, I didn't had a chance to introduce you all to my beautiful sons Chris.
PERDITA: Oh, he is so cute!
PHOEBE: Yea, he is. (turning to the 16-year-old girl) And who are you?
GIRL:(not turning to them, and speaking very quiet and uninterested) Melina.
PAIGE: That's a pretty name.
MELINA:Thanks.
PIPER: (whispering to Joanna) She doesn't like to talk a lot, does she?
JOANNA:(whispers back) Yeah, I think that maybe she's a little bit shy. You know, everything around here is new for her.
(Joanna puts the tray down on the table)
JOANNA: So anyone want something to drink or some cookies?
(they start to eat the cookies and talk, everyone except Melina)
(some time has passed, we can see that because there aren't many cookies anymore)
MELINA: Can I go to my room now? I have to do some homework.
JOANNA: Sure. Nice that you joined us tonight.
MELINA: No problem, would love to do that again (she doesn't sound like she really means it)
(She leaves the room)
(later, Joanna, Perdita and Mike bring the Halliwells to the door, they wanna leave now too, because it's late)
JOANNA: Well, that was really nice. We should do that again.
PIPER: Yeah, I think so too, do you have time tomorrow)
JOANNA: Well, sure.
PIPER: Oh good, we could all meet in my club in the afternoon, and I could also bring my husband and my other son.
JOANNA: Yea, let's do that! So goodbye now, see you tomorrow.
EVERYONE: Goodbye!
(they walk back to that little street where they orbed to last time and orb back to the Halliwell-Manor)
(Leo is sitting there, watching TV)
LEO: (getting up) Well, how was it? Do you all had fun?
PIPER: Yea, and we'll meet again tomorrow, you can come as well.
LEO: Great. (to Phoebe and Paige) And did you guys like it?
PHOEBE: Yea, it was really cool, but there's something strange about that girl Melina.
PAIGE: Yea, I noticed it too, she didn't talk to us at all, she was just sitting there doing nothing the whole time.
PHOEBE: No, that's not what I meant. You know how I can feel other peoples feeling?
PIPER: How could we forget that?
PHOEBE: Well, I felt the feelings of Joanna, Perdita and Mike, but not of Melina.
PAIGE: Hm, you don't feel our feelings as well, and you didn't felt the feelings of Chris too, remember? Maybe it just doesn't work on everyone.
PHOEBE: No, that with you guys was different, you drank this stuff so I couldn't feel your feelings anymore at all. I felt something from her, but I don't know what it was, it was as if she was trying blocking me out of them.
PAIGE: You think she's a witch?
PHOEBE: Well, I'm not sure what she is, but definitely something magic. I think she also tried to read my mind.
PAIGE: How could you know about that?
PHOEBE: I don't know, I think maybe it's because I am an empath. It felt like somebody was searching some piece of information in my head, and while that happened I felt a little bit more from Melinas feelings, it was like she couldn't controll both at a time, she can only block her own feelings or read someone elses mind.
PIPER: Are you sure?
PHOEBE: Pretty sure, we should definitely keep an eye on her.
(later, it's dark outside now, Melinas room. She'd about to do some ritual, there are some candles lit in her room and she is holding an athame)
MELINA: Well, Cole Turner, it's time to bring you back to life!
well, that was chapter one, chapter two coming soon...but only if enough people wanna read it