Please, this is my first poem on and I would really like to know what you think. All reviews will be posted.
Running
Running, running, ever faster,
Can't slow down,
Can't stop,
Running, running, faster yet,
Gotta keep moving,
Gotta keep going,
Running, running, speed of sound,
Don't look back,
Don't fall down,
Running, running, too fast to see,
Must be fast,
Must make the pass,
Running, running, not meant to be,
My feet are gone,
My pain is strong,
Running, running, no destination,
Should I stop?
Should I drop?
Running, running, no reason at all,
Why isn't this fun?
Why do I run?
Running, running, slowing down,
Take a deep breath.
Take a look around.
Angel: I totally agree, though it's kinda hard not to grow up quickly when your whole family is killed
Tangled-Web-Of-Lies: Thanks
Gothik Prinsess: Would you really? That is so sweet of you! Thanks so much and FYI you review format rocks!
This is my first poem on Fan Fiction . Net . This poem is from Sango's view. She's always so worried about everything and I think that she shouuld slow down the pave a little so that she can let herself fall in love and enjoy her youth.
Ja Ne,
Loser-Girl
Down..
Further...
Further..
There!
Now press the purple button.
You know you want to.