I read over chapter one and i realized that it sucked. alot.

that sucks.

I didn't have any ideas for this, so sorry if you want to poke your eyes out after reading this.

Kagome remained motionless as she stared at Bankotsu's body wearily. Many thoughts raced through her mind, wondering why he was lying dormant in the Bone Eaters Well, of all places.

Was he hurt?

Her eyes scanned thoroughly over his limp body, but she failed to find anything out of the ordinary.

She realized that problems were to arise as long as he was in there, for from what she knew, there was no way she could get home as long as he was occupying the well.

She sighed and cast her gaze toward the woods, where Inuyasha was probably out searching for her. He's going to come for me she thought.

The last thing she wanted to do was encounter the hanyou, especially after what happened. But she knew she couldn't hide from him forever. He would search no matter how far she ventured, and if she went home he would bring her back. She had no chance of escaping him, she realized. No matter what the circumstances were. She was a helpless mortal, whilst he was an unyielding demon.

How can I get Bankotsu out of the well? Kagome thought. It would most definetly be a difficult task, risking the chance that he may wake up and kill her, or be too heavy for her to pull out.

She thought of her options for a moment, before moving closer to the well and setting her hands on it's sides.

She sighed lightly and gripped the vines that were tanged at the side of the well, carefully pulling herself down and in to it. Once she reached the bottom, she lightly grabbed onto Bankotsu's hands and pulled him up so he was leaned up against the walls. She froze when he stirred slightly, groaning and kicking his feet. She backed up against the wall opposite to him and stood still until his movement died down, and his body lay limp again.

A sigh of relief escaped her lips and she moved toward him once more. She latched her hands around his hips and pulled him up so he stood. Her hands slipped further up so they rested against his underarms, supporting his debilitated frame. She moved toward the vines, and using one hand she gripped them and pulled herself up.

She struggled drastically, trying to support the extra weight of the mercenary. Bankotsu was definetly unwieldily, atleast to her. Her body began to feel weak as she neared the top of the well, sweat dripping down her pale face. Just as her hands gripped the wood of the well, her world went black, and she fell the agonizing drop to the bottom of the well, landing with a thump.

Kagome opened her eyes wearily, her head pounding. She blinked a couple of times to clear her blurred vision.

She sat up painfully and examined her surroundings, clueless as to what happened. But then it came to her.

BANKOTSU

She glanced around her, only to see the mercenary lying unconciously next to her, she sighed.

It was hard to see anything around her, which confused her. She had discovered the mercenary in the morning hours. It shouldn't have been dark yet, should it?

She tilted her head up, expecting to see the sky, light or dark.

She froze. At that moment, her heart stopped. Above her head was not a sky, but a ceiling. A wooden ceiling. The ceiling of the well house.

And Bankotsu was with her.

THIS WASN'T SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN!

okay, so you probably think it sucked, right? it did. o.o;;;

but er... review please n.n

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