Christianity, the Love and Hate of the World
A poem of someone viewing the world today. Improved version
Girls singing, O so sweet a sound,
Men clapping, joy in each face
Women dancing, stamping the ground
Boys laughing, happy in this place.
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Girls and boys swing around,
Singing of joy in their heart.
Men and women dance around,
Nothing will set them apart.
ooooo
The World rejects all of Hell,
And sends out all its love.
People sing as they ring the bells,
Praising the One above.
ooooo
Girls singing, O so sweet a sound,
Men clapping, joy in each face
Women dancing, stamping the ground
Boys laughing, happy in this place.
Brother's a druggie, heroin user,
Sister's a magic witch.
Father's alcoholic, a drunk abuser,
Mother's one hell of a bitch.
ooooo
Girls and boys slash with knives,
Howling misery from their hearts.
Men and women end their lives,
Despair of their sins sets them apart.
ooooo
The World displays its terrible acts,
People scream for other's love.
Children cry as they die from neglect,
And despise the One above.
ooooo
Brother's a druggie, heroin user,
Sister's a magic witch.
Father's alcoholic, a drunk abuser,
Mother's one hell of a bitch.
What do you think? Better?Tell me! Please.