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It has been a couple of weeks after graduation and inuyasha and kagome had just gotten married summer was ending so they decided to go to the community collage and have an apartment across the street.

Ow inuyasha said as he turned over onto his sore back ever since he and kagome had mated he had been sleeping on the couch more because they had decided that kagome should finished getting her education before starting a family and since every other month kagome got her period and since inuyasha could not stand the smell of her in heat he slept on the couch.

After school

Inuyasha was waiting at the car for Kagome School was over and since they took different subjects they decided to wait by the car for each other.

Hey baby kagome said as she walked up and gave inuyasha a very passionate kiss

Inuyasha looked at her dose this mean yeap I had my period kagome finished

At home

Inuyasha and kagome started kissing like mad then inuyasha took of kagomes cloth and she took of his inuyasha trusted himself into her I-n-u-y-a-s-h-a kagome said faster harder she said ohh she monad yes yes YES YES OH GOD YES .

Now kagome was on top of inuyasha mmm kagome inuyasha moned Kaagggoommee mmm Kaaggooommeee KAAGGGOOOMMMEE inuyasha yelled

They collapsed next to each other that was amazing kagome said mhhm was all inuyasha said

Well that it for this chapter give me ideas and I can make the next chapter even better