Thanks to the following people for reviewing: -
Ravenrogue19- Sorry I was…actually it's been so long since I updated this I can't remember why I said I couldn't write a thing lol. I'm hopeless when it comes to updating and remembering things. Thanks for reviewing!
Raven1777- Glad you liked it and thanks for letting me use your OC.
Bust-A-Groover- Okay two things. 1. Your story is awesome plus I love RaeRedx pairing and 2. Thanks for reviewing!
Delirium24- Thanks SO much for letting me use your OC's.
Reeltreble1031- 'smashed with a giant hammer' hmmm maybe I could to that to my brother next time he annoys me. (Jots idea down in book titled 'How To Get Revenge On Your little Brother Or Sister!' Thanks for the idea! I'm just gonna go look for my brother now…
YoukaiTenshi- Okay here you go!
Dark girl- Heya. Thanks for the OC! You'll be getting a special dedication!
Snipe-Master-Hex- Thanks for reviewing!
Monchhichi- Okay I realise now that I'm not a writer that cannot write a thing. I'm a writer that CAN write…really bad stories!
Tecna- Glad you decided not to kill me…again…seriously though are you an escaped lunatic for the mental institution? If so plz go back to your cell and sorry it was so short.
Pinkprincess- Bring It On is a GREAT movie! You'll find out who it is as soon as I can think of who it's gonna be!
Le Papillon- FINALLY you have an account! I've missed talking well kinda talking to you. Thanks for reviewing!
The golden wolf- Whoa long review! Thanks for letting me use your OC's.
Teen Titans Obsessor- Glad you like and thanks for reviewing!
The golden wolf- I'd love your email and Beyblade, X-men Evolution, Code Lyoko and Danny Phantom plus TT are like my fave shows EVER! That's just weird but then so am I lol.
CuTtEr.WiTh.A.cause- Thanks for letting me use you wow that sounds wrong…anyway thanks for reviewing!
Phew glad that's over! Okay I know I haven't updated in AGES but I had major writer's block for this story!
I just got an email today from about this site where a lot of people could become author's which REALLY freaked me out cos I'm like only 14 plus I still don't get why I would get this email? I mean I'm not a very talented writer or anything.
Sorry but it really freaked me out getting an email from this place.
Anyway here is the OC's cos I'm really lazy: -
Name: amber
age: 15
clothes: black spaghetti strap and pants with holes in them (like the abercombrie and Fitch pants)
weight: really skinny
height: 5'5"
eyes: brown
hair: black
personality: gullible, thinks like a blonde and acts like one too. But sometimes I could be mean and sarcastic but that's only if I'm mad or stressed out. I have a very bad relationship with my family. Two brothers and a mom and dad.
Jesse
age: 17
eyes: blue pools of light
hair: shaggy blue (dyed of coarse)
likes: puzzles anything of the sort although has a strong athletic build and likes anything athletic. (When he's up to it) likes to be around his brother mostly and is currently single. (Not a gay guy nor is his brother)
dislikes: violence anything like it (but does protect his brother not that he needs it and the only violent thing he ever did was hit a kid for picking on someone, oh and this dose not include video games and movies he is not a stiff) such as picking on kids for fun but still enjoys things like football, hockey, basketball and anything else.
Jesse is rather shy and and quieter than his brother but is talented and patient. Likes to wear mostly blue jeans and white shirts or blue (light blue) (him little bright drop of sunshine ain't he)
Jerry
age: 17 (Jesse's twin)
eyes: reddish brown almost pure red
hair: dyed red but has brown at the roots (hence the hair that grew) is kinda spiky (I think it would look cool that way don't you)
likes: fast things such as cars is also athletics but not so much as his bro (even though he isn't that active either) and as well likes to hang around his big bro (of course since their twins big bro and little is important because Jesse was born 1st and he uses that to his advantage in the few arguments they have) he as well loves video games and considers himself champion of the gaming world (which he sort of is but that don't stop him from gloating)
dislikes: snotty preps (he had a bad experience one time the reason he is single)and sitting in a chair waiting or just plain sitting(another thing the brothers and so different but so much more alike)doing nothing and snotty know-it-alls grr those no it alls that know it more that him (not that he knows what a posh attitude is this is just the part he mimics a posh or British attitude he thinks their all polite)
Jerry wears black jeans or any black and baggy pants he can hang chains and Goth stuff on (he's not like down and sad or anything quit the contrary he just likes the Goth look without the eye shadow and stuff he just like black)and ripped or torn black T-shits with a black spiked neck collar (he and Jesse both wear them kinda like a brotherly bond to each other if they are away for one another but Jesse's is white with the same silver spikes)
Name-Okena Mashocki
age-14 1/2
hair-red (died it)
hight-4ft 11in
clothes- various types of black shirts, dark-wash jeans, vans, red belts, choker necklace with onyx stone
bio-born in Boston, skipped a grade, lves and is awesome at cheerleading.
Name Jason Kabochie
age 15
hair bleach blonde (not died)
hight-5ft11in
clothes different football jersey every day any pants Nikes
bio-loves foot ball, average student
position: linebacker
Name: Raiden
description:
eyes: blue
hair: black
height: 5'5
she is in every way like raven but she hates raven. She thinks she's a slut cos raven is hanging out with robin. Raiden likes robin, Raiden and raven get into a catfight because even though raven and robin aren't together they like each other and Raiden was trying to rub up on robin and seduce him etc.
Well there you go and a big thanks to everyone who let me use their OC's.
Well here's the chapter…
The two took their seat near the back whilst Kori sat next to Richard who was staring at Raven who was talking or more precisely arguing with Garth about something.
They soon got to the school and Garth went off with Kori and joined by Raven was Richard.
"This will be an interesting day" the figure hidden in shadows mused…
"Hey Raven!" Richard smiled at her causing her to do nothing but smile back at him if just for a moment.
"Hey Richard!" they headed off to the building and to there lockers.
They soon met up with Kori, Gar and Vic. Meanwhile Kat and her groupies were admiring Garth and of course being the big head that he is basked in the attention.
"Hey guys!" Richard grinned at them whilst Raven and Kori started to discuss the display Raven was going to give them.
Meanwhile…
"That's the girl!" a deep voice confirmed as the figure looked at the image of Raven on the screen.
"That is your next assignment!" he told the young man near him.
Nodding the young man left the room.
"Raven…you're mine!"
At the school…
"Hey Raven we've got IT now come on!" Victor led her away as they waved bye to the others.
They both walked down to the computer labs making light conversation.
"Raven do you like Richard?" he asked her noticing the faint blush that came across her cheeks.
"Course I do he's my friend!" she stammered out avoiding his eyes.
"That's not what I meant now spill it!" he smirked as she gave him a death glare before sighing in defeat.
"Fine I may possibly have a small liking to the Boy Wonder and if you tell anyone you will suffer an agonising death!" she threatened as he shook his head smiling as he gave his word he wouldn't tell anyone.
Satisfied she opened the door for them letting him lead her to the back of the class out of the teacher's prying gaze.
Logging onto the computer's Vic automatically went onto a games site where he just sat playing computer games all lesson whilst Raven who had a bit more sense went to chat with some friends on AIM.
DeMoNgIrL101- Hey any1 here?
BOyWoNdErOfDaRkNeSs- didn't know you had Aim Rae!
DeMoNgIrL101-Anyone sane here? Plz?
BoyWoNdErOfDaRkNeSs- Guess you're stuck with me Rae LOL
BeAsTdUdE- Hey every1!
BoyWoNdErOfDaRkNeSs- Piss off Gar me and Rae are talking ALONE!
DeMoNgIrL101- oh no we ain't Gar STAY!
BoyWoNdErOfDaRkNeSs-No!
DeMoNgIrL101- yes!
BeAsTdUdE-ookkaayy u guys are freakin me out l8r
DeMoNgIrL101-bastard!
BoyWoNdErOfDaRkNeSs- but you love me really Rae!
DeMoNgIrL101-yeah in your dreams!
BoyWoNdErOfDaRkNeSs-ok I gtg cya sweetheart!
BoyWoNdErOfDaRkNeSs has signed off…
"Well that's that done with I guess" she muttered at the screen only just realising Vic doubled up in his chair.
Turned out he had seen their little conversation and was crapping himself from laughing so hard.
"H-h-he called YOU sweetheart!" he laughed wiping tears from his eyes.
"Sorry but he never calls anyone sweetheart he must really have a thing for you Rae!" leaving her to think about what he said the bell suddenly rang signalling the end of class and also the beginning.
"C'mon Rae before they run out of pizza!" he coaxed her out of the door.
Unknowingly a young man stood watching them walk off to the cafeteria…
"Target in sight!" he whispered into the device.
"Excellent" the voice replied…
Well there you go!
Hope it satisfied you and I'll update before the holidays I promise!
Remember my motto!
It's a Fanfiction Crime to read and not review!
Ciao
Phoenix x