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Tecna- Glad you didn't decide to take me off your bad list lol. Sorry I haven't updated but I've literally been swamped in homework! I had like about 3 pieces of coursework to do in one-day lol.
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FiliaOfMortis- Glad you like this so far and I'll be looking forward to hear from you again.
Niol- suspenseful is a word…I think. Lol, anyway glad you liked it!
Monchhichi- I'll stop saying I write bad stories then. There's only two stories that I actually like that I've written and that's A Bird's Suffering and Dying Freedom probably cos I'm torturing Raven lol even though she's my fave character.
Bust-A-Groover- Poor you! I have you decide to write more stories in the near future and if you want I'll kill any flamers that hurt you lol. I drank water today so naturally I'm hyper.
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Raerob4ever- you'll soon find out what's happening but only if you're reading the story!
Trinity101411- A couple of month is updating quickly? Wonder what it's like if I was updating slowly then? Every couple of year's maybe lol. Thanks for your review!
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Pinkprincess- just be patient and you'll find out who the men in the shadows are! You're almost as bad as me lol.
Mimi- the stunts and moves the girls in Bring It On are awesome lol. Hope this chapter is to your liking!
RavenEmpressOfAzarath- wow you're almost as impatient as me but no one is more impatient than me at certain times especially when I've drank bottled water and become REALLY hyper like I am now lol.
Raven'smylife- Thanks for letting me use your OC. Hope you'll like this chapter! Plus I hope that book you're writing becomes a best seller's hit!
Okay, sorry if I sound strange but I drank bottled water with a twist of strawberry and I'm seriously hyper. It's always in the bottle never a cup…strange.
Well here's the story…
Unaware of what was about to happen Raven followed Victor to the table where some of their friends were. Sitting at their table was Garth, Richard, Garfield, Kori and a few others such as Amber, Okena and to Raven's disgust Raiden.
Glaring at Raiden she sat down in between Amber and Garth with Richard sitting opposite her and Raiden and Garfield on both of his sides.
Even though Raven had barely been coming to the school for more than a week her and Raiden were powerful enemies due to the basic fact Raiden was a slut in the presence of Richard. The girl was obsessed by him and she and Raven having a lot of things in common could have been good friends except for the fact that Raven was closer to Richard's heart than Raiden could ever hope to get.
Desperate to break the obvious tension between the two Okena started to talk about the cheerleading tournament with Star and forcing Raven to participate who kept switching back to Amber and Garth.
"Raven can you meet us as soon as the bell rings in the gym to show us some of your moves?" Okena asked politely.
Agreeing Raven and Amber got up knowing they had their next class on what seemed like the other side of the universe especially when coming from their lockers.
"Bye guys!" they called as they set off to due their dreaded gym class! AN Sorry but Gym is really annoying for me even though it isn't hard I just hate having to do it lol unless it's basketball.
Normally they wouldn't mind Gym but due to the fact both Raiden and Kitten were both in their class they were dreading it.
They hurried through the corridors so they wouldn't be late for class and managed after much effort to get on time allowing them to get some decent room.
Quickly snagging two spots for themselves they both got changed into the standard uniform that consisted of black shorts and a red t-shirt with the school logo on the front with white sneakers.
Just as they'd finished getting changed their teacher came in telling them they were doing track again. Groans echoed throughout the room as nearly everyone hated track.
"You'll all be running with a partner to keep each other motivated!" their teacher knowingly smiled since basically motivating each other would be talking to each other all lesson.
Grinning to each other, Raven and Amber headed onto the track unaware of someone spying on Raven.
"That's right Raven don't suspect a thing! You'll soon belong to us!" he smirked before starting to check out the other girls.
Kitten and Raiden came up to them, a smirk on their faces.
"So Raven we heard you were going to be showing the cheerleaders some new moves!" Kitten smirked.
"Yeah so?"
"Well now we know why Richard likes you! It's because you're going to be a cheerleader and he just loves cheerleaders!" Raiden smirked.
"Yeah he loves thinking perverted thoughts about them not to mention he had the biggest crush on Kori just before you moved here actually!" Kitten mused smirking at Raven's expression.
Tears pricked at Raven's eyes as she listened to them.
"Raven they're just saying stuff to wind you up, don't listen to them!" Amber told her.
"Did he used to have a crush on Kori before I came?" she asked slowly.
"Well yeah but he found out she already had a boyfriend so he gave up trying to get her to notice him and then you came along and he fell for you hard!" Amber tried to cheer Raven up.
"I guess you're right" Raven smiled realising they were in last place before they rushed to the front beating Raiden and Kitten easily.
As soon as class was over they hurriedly got changed and ran to their lockers before heading to their final class before school ended.
The day went over surprisingly fast and Raven, true to her word, headed to the gym where she was meeting Kori.
Problem was, there was no one else around on the yard and Raven was staring to get the strange feeling she was being watched.
Suddenly she felt a searing pain in her side realising she'd been injected with a needle before she collapsed into the agent's arms.
"We've got the girl!" he spoke into his communicator before disappearing into the shadows…
I'm evil for stopping there aren't I? Oh well lol.
Anyway I hope this provided adequate entertainment for everyone and I hope to get lets say 10 reviews before I update this again?
Plz tell me what you think and if you have any ways in which I can improve the story don't hesitate to let me know!
Ciao
Phoenix x