Ok, I usually don't post something before my story, but this is funny what someone reveiwed, you'll laugh, read it.
Someone posted anonymosly, here is their reveiw:
From: Loppa ()

this is the stupidest story I have ever read. develop the darn plot.

Wasn't that comment funny? I laughed hard when I read that lol.

Here is a message for that "Loppa" from me:

Aw, well I'm sorry you feel that way, well, then here's a piece of advice, don't read it if you think it's stupid. That is common sense, people. It seems that those that have read my story like it, if you saw ANY of the 41 reveiws posted. And, I think is is really pathetic you didn't have the courage to log into your fanfic account and reveiw, if you have one. I wouldn't have done anything any differently if you had, but still.
Well, don't wast your time and mine writeing worthless comments like that. Now run along, little Loppa and give your comments to those who want them, which I think is nobody.

Good-bye :)
- SilverCarnation


"Wow, this is messed up..." Usagi sighed as she layed down on her bed in the temple.
"My family is dead, Mamoru is hospitalized and I haven't been able to figure out where Luna went...Ugh"

"Poor Serenity...I hate to see you like this..." A Queen whispered to the room as she watched Usagi through the mirror in front of her. Usagi was curled up in her bed, crying. Her golden hair spread out behind her.

"My queen, he shall see you now." A young senshi with black hair to her shoulders spoke from the door way.

"I shall be there in a moment." The Queen spoke, not turning from the mirror.
"Very well, my Queen." With that the senshi dissapeared.

"Serenity...I wish there was something I could do..."


"Oh, come ON Yuuchiro!" A female voice broke into Usagi's mind.

"I just took a bath now I need to take another one because you are SO uncorrdinated!"

"Uh, sorry Raye, don't be mad!"

"Mad? How could I be MAD? I'm FURIOUS! THIS IS MY FAVORITE SHIRT, YOU BONE HEAD!"

"RAYE! I'm sorry, so so sorry please forgive me, Raye!"

Usagi opened her eyes and sat up, the moonlight that had fell through the shouji screen last night had gone and now golden sunlight illuminated the room.

"YAYAAYAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! RAYE!" Yuuchiro's voice fell through the shouji screen.

"YAAAAA! HELP MEEEEE!"

Usagi stood up and got dressed, giggleing at the shouts comeing from outside.


"Raye, gee, he said he was sorry." Usagi spoke, wrenching the broom from Raye and throwing it on the ground.

"Now can we eat a peaceful breakfast PLEASE? Oh brother, you two must really stress out your grandfather, Raye!" Usagi said, glanceing at Raye's grandfather who was sweeping the ground and smileing to himself.

Usagi raised an eyebrow at this before she noticed he was wearing earplugs.

A moment later they were seated at the table eating a quiet reakfast, Raye shooting constant glares at Yuuchiro who was looking like a puppy getting scolded.


Motoki sighed as he sat next to Mamoru.
"Any idea of when you are going to be out of here?"

"No-clue...definately not soon, the doctors say it will take a LONG time...ugh..."

Motoki nodded.

"So, what should I tell the school?"

"I don't know...like they'd beleive us...I don't wanna think about it right now..."


"So...what can we do? The past is done, there is no bringing them back, but I want to see them again, hear her voice! I wan t to see her happy, not on a bed crying when knowbody knows!"

"I am sorry, I feel the same way. But I don't think there is anything we can do." Neo King Endymion spoke to the queen.

The queen sat for a moment before her facial features brightened and she spoke, "What about pluto? Mabey there is something she can do?"

Endymion looked like he was questioning the idea before speaking, "Its worth a try."


Well, what did you think? (And if you read this Loppa, don't reveiw I could care less what YOU thought.
Who is the queen? What happened to Raye and Yuuchiro on the way home from the hospital last night?
Well, you'll at least find out the answer to the last question in the next chapter where we go back in time and see what happened to Raye and Yuuchiro! Thanks you all for the reviews, I'm glad you like my story. The reason the last chapter wasn't posted for (Two months?) was because I was too lazy to post it, I was working on several promised art pieces, and I had a hard time comeing up with ideas. Also, I was pre-occupied, being that it was the end of middle school and all that.

Till next time,
-SilverCarnation