Virgin Lily
Chapter 4: The Three R's: Rejected, Rules, Revise.
Hangs head in shame i would like to say a big sorry for my spelling, and grammar. I have never been any good and now i promise i will get it edited before posting. Looks up and smiles Oh My so many reviews and so many nice one and a few not so nice but hey i got nice ones!! Ok here are some replies:
SumeR's Girl: thank you sweetie, oh yeah full moon looks at planner ohhh i better lock my doors in case. Keep on R&R
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Shortgirl424: Thank you sweetie, Between Darren and Lily oh no i got a little idea for Darren. But James will get jealous! Keep on R&R
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Ttfn: Thanks sweetie, 1) Lily is not stupid. 2) Who said she had accepted James? 3) I thank you for your honest opinion but you will find out how Lily hasn't accepted James just yet.
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Thanks you for believing my story had potential!!! This chapter is longer and also i think there are some ideas in here you might like, i hope.
I know i hate those stories that drag the story along and in the end you can't be bother to read any more, my future fan fictions will certainly not be like that if i can help it! Your right i should ask for more reviews!!! I am going to!!!!! You cannot offer me more than your honest opinion and your constructive criticism, remember always be honest i am hoping you will be a constant reviewer. Keep R&R
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But that's why we love her. Keep on R&R and thanks!
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Ok that's over and done with! Nah only joking i love responding to my reviewers, it's so fun! If I forgot you I am soo sorry but reviews have taken up more than 2 pages!!
You all know what happened last time, if not go back a chapter and read the last thing so you can get into it! Ok next chapter
Continued
In The 6th Year Boys Dormitory
James was busy lying in his bed with his hands behind his head, when Sirius and Remus walked in holding a large chest. James still didn't remove himself from the bed when Sirius and Remus dumped the trunk next to his bed.
"Oi Prongs!" Sirius shouted right next to James ear
"What no need to shout!" James shouted back
"Oh yeah no need to shout", Remus muttered
James looked at the trunk that had been put next to his bed and he recognized it straight away.
"Padfoot, Mooney what are you doing with this trunk?" James asked suspiciously
"Well since you are doing your little game on Virgin Lily we decided you need all the rules," Padfoot announced, "So we dug, literally, up this trunk we buried in second year"
Sirius sat down on the floor next to the trunk and flipped it open. Inside was papers with all the times any of them Maunders used the 'Plan To Get Laid' it was mostly James or Sirius who used it.
Sirius started to look through it looking for a piece of paper, finaly he found it he gave it too James
"Oh no not this" James exclaimed, the paper James was holding was the rules:
The Rules:
1. Can't be used for over 3 months
2. No more than 3 rejections
3. Always have a alibi
4. Never leave Evidence around
5. When kissing keep eyes open
6. And Most Important- NEVER FALLING IN LOVE!
"Remind me who came up with these rules?" James asked
"Oh that would be Mooney always the worrier" Sirius replied patting Remus on the head as if he was a dog,
Remus looked at Sirius and walked out the room muttering about flee invested dogs
"You know Prongie I think you should look over those rules and the rest because by the way you were staring at Evans it seems that you are breaking number 6" Sirius said as he walked out of the room
James was alone in the room thinking about what Sirius had just said he wasn't going to fall for Evans no matter what.
Darren Camps wasn't your normal 16-year-old boy for one his one and only friend was a girl, he didn't like the company of boys at all.
He was best friends will Lily Evans, no one really knew much about him other than his name was Darren and he was supposedly gay? Where anyone had gotten that idea from he never knew, just because he didn't have a girlfriend didn't mean he was GAY. In all respects he was straight and completely in love with…his best friend Lily Evans. In no way big or small was he going to allow Lily and James to be together and he had an idea this idea was "Carly Johnson"
"What do you want camps?" Carly asked as she applied her second layer or makeup
"Help" Darren answered simply and sat next to Carly
"With what Camps!" Carly asked once more this time a bit more irritated
"Two words for you: James Potter" Darren whispered into Carly's ear.
Carly turned around and looked at Darren, "Well, How may I help you?"
Carly patted her bed as in to tell Darren to sit down and that night they ahd a long chat.
Lily Evans was once again in the Hogwarts Library studying for a test in DADA that the teacher had set, Lily suspected she was the only one actually revising for it, she was just getting into studying when someone sat down next to her and started to stare.
"Can I help you James?" Lily asked without looking away from her book
"Well…wait how did you know it was me?" James asked
"You have been staring at me for the last 5 years I know when its you James" Lily muttered as she turned the next page
"Hmm Yes well…. as I was saying what are you doing this weekend?" James asked shifting up to sit nearer to Lily
"Nothing why?" Lily set down the book and saw James had moved from his original seat, what is he up to?
"As I am doing nothing and you are doing nothing, we should go on a date" James said as if it was the simple answer, Lily looked and James and couldn't help but well laugh
"Oh please –she laughed- don't tell me the only reason you are trying to be my friend is too go out with me?" Lily asked as a joke then she caught on, "You did didn't you?- she slammed down the book- I cannot believe you James just when I though you had deflated your head" Lily raised her hand and it made contact with James's cheek.
As Lily stormed out of the library James just watched her go and said silently to him self that's one rejection. James picked up his books and went to revise his plan.
Meanwhile behind a bookshelf three boys were planning trouble big trouble that would affect James and Lily.
"Looks like Prongs is in trouble" Padfoot whispered
"Shhhh you saw how they looked at each other now remember the plan?" Mooney asked
"Yes I do god you told me it what seven times" Padfoot replied then yawned
"I don't know what to do" Wormtail piped up
"Oh god Wormtail all you have to do is open the room we gave you the simplest Job so your small mind could understand" Padfoot stressed
"Oh" That was all Wormtail said
"Look at the minger!!!" Sirius shouted pointing at one of his cousins
"Why Sirius?" Remus asked
"Less questions more running!" Sirius shouted as he ran from the Library with Remus following and a blackhead girl running after them waving her wand.
Ohhh its good to be a Maunders both boys though
DONE!!! Ok important ANWanted
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Kate-Lily & Ollie