Virgin Lily

Chapter 8: Detention in the Forest

Authors Note:

Hello

I had some lovely reviews as always! I don't think I had any bad ones; if I did I ignored them. :D Anyways Sorry I haven't updated in a while, sort of got busy. (Kitty dancing in background), I suppose I should explain, well she got a boyfriend! And guess who it is? MY BROTHER! I'll spare you the details! Oh and at the end there is a note from Kitty

Anyways thank you too all the reviewers good or bad on whatever anyways on with the story. WOW 30 reviews for one chapter! KOOL!

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Detention with Hagrid was never that bad, actually it was just like a normal visit to Hagrid, well for James and Sirius but however this time they had Lily Evans and she was completely and utterly frighten of the forest, in comes the jealous Darren Camps with a little plan up his sleave.

Lily Evans was in shocked she had never before gotten detention, but because of James and that stupid boy Sirius she had detention and worse it was detention in that damn forest!

The night of the detention Lily was waiting downstairs in the common room, for none other than James Potter. The only reason she was wanting for him was because she didn't want to go down to Hagrid's home on her own. As she waited she kept looking at the clock, James was already 10 minutes late, and she was going to kill him. As the clock struck 7:00pm James Potter came running down the stairs, with Sirius following closely behind him.

"About time" Lily mumbled to herself.

"Sorry we had to sort out a few things" Sirius replied with a sly smile on his face.

"What kind of 'things'?" Lily asked worried about what those two were up to.

"It doesn't matter, Evans" Sirius said as he walked out of the room.

As James and Lily walked behind Sirius, they struck up a conversation well actually, James struck up a conversation.

"Sorry, Lily" James whispered.

"About what? Getting me detention because of your retarded friend" Lily whispered furously.

"That's why I am saying sorry for Sirius being well Sirius, how else can I prove that I a sorry?" James asked back just as annoyed.

"You can promise me that you will never get me detention again?" Lily whispered back.

"Fine, I promise never to get you detention"

James smiled at Lily and set his eyes ahead of him, as they walked through the halls of hogwarts they came to the entrance to the outdoors.

It was a clear night and you were able to see the stars above you, of course none of the three teenages really cared all they cared about was getting over with the detention and gettting back into there comfortable and war beds. Well that's how Lily was feeling.

Meanwhile at the edge of the forest there two teenagers, one boy by the name of Darren, one girl by the name of Carly.

"Did you bring what I told you?" Carly asked Darren.

"Yes I got the Boggart from the DADA room" Darren pulled out a small box that had been shrunk.

"And you are sure that her fear is still the same?" Carly asked.

"Yes, and when it comes out I will go in and save her, right?" Darren asked unsurely.

"For the last time. YES!" Carly shouted at Darren.

"Come on then lets find a place where we can see but not be seen" Darren said while moving into the forest.

"Yes, Yes" Carly whispered following Darren into the forest, with a wicked smile on her face.

Lily, James and Sirius all arrived at Hagrid's cottage just in time for the detention. When they knocked on the door, there was a loud bark and a voice shouting "Alrigh', Alrigh', I'm comin'"

When the door was open Hagrid came out with Fang, when he saw James and Sirius he smiled broadly at them, (A.N-I can't use the speech that JK uses for Hagrid so I am using normal language.).

"Hello James, Sirius and….i am afriad I don't know your name" Hagrid smiled shyly.

James answered "Hagrid this is Lily Evans".

"Oh, I see well them boys, and girl, we have to get into partners. James you and go with this little lady, and Sirius your with me and fang, if anything is wrong just shot up red sparks" Hagrid started to walk into the forest the three teenagers followed.

"Now we are looking for a certain plant for professor sprout, it's called the blood mushroom, just collected the up and head back here when you're finished shoot up green sparks." Hagrid turned around and handed Lily a basket for the mushrooms, he took off with Sirius.

"Come on Lily you're lagging behind!" James shouted out behind him.

"Well I am sorry but I don't go running through forests daily!" Lily shouted back.

James looked back and saw Lily was climbing over a tree log that had fallen, she looked funny she was holding on to the basket with the blood mushroom inside them. As Lily caught up with James she looked at him and said "Let's get going then".

James started to walk behind Lily as he did he looked at her hips they were swaying side to side, sort of hypnotic. As he walked through the forest he couldn't help but feel he was being watched.

Carly and Darrren had found James and Lily walking through the forest together; Carly was holding the box at arms length as if it had a dieseaes, which was catching.

As Lily and James came to an opening, James fell down on a log and put hid feet up while Lily was looking around fro Blood Mushrooms.

Darren and Carly set the box on the floor and un-shrunk it, as they did they unlocked the box and out came something or someone?

Lily felt like she was being watched, but when she looked up, she saw something that made her scream! As she did James ran over to her and saw what she was looking at, it was two bodies of a women and a man, when James saw it he pulled Lily away and hid her face into his shoulder. However when James looked at it, it changed and this time it changed into his worst fear. It was a boggart! James quickly whipped out his wand and said "riddikulus" instead of being James's worst fear it was flowers, James quickly transfigured a stone into a box which he bannished the boggart into.

James looked at Lily she had her arms around James's torso and was crying on her shoulder, she was muttering "I don't want to see it again". James didn't ask any question he just held Lily for a little while.

Darren was fuming, it wasn't supposed to happen like that, and he was supposed to save Lily not that stupid arse Potter! He was really mad he wanted to punch something! He wanted to hurt someone! Lily was his! Not Potter's and he was going to get her one way or another!

James sent up red sparks within a few minutes Hagrid came through the clearing and found James Potter hugging a crying Lily Evans. One look on James face was obivious to anyone not to ask any questions just get them out of there.

Well…..What do you think? Was it good? Was it bad? Was it average? Should I continue? Should I forget it? Well any comments are welcomed. Please leave a review.

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Kitty's Note

Well as you know I posted by firest fan-fiction all I wanted to say was THANKS TO EVERYOEN WHO REVIEWD! THANK YOU!

Bye!