Virgin Lily
Chapter 11: Sirius And Remus Chapter
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James and Lily hadn't talked to each other in over a week, maybe more not that alot of people noticed after all Lily and James normally ignored each other. But the people who did notice were one Sirius Black and one Remus Lupin.
"Come on Mooney!" Sirius begged Remus as the walked down the corridors of Hogwarts.
"No Sirius I am not going to lock them in a room together," Remus stated, " wait isn't your side of the bet that James won't get laid?"
"Well yeah but it's too easy and besides James is annoying when he is down, so I am going to ask again," Sirius looked at Remus with puppy dog eyes he coughed and shouted "PLEASE"
"And I a going to say the same thing NO!" Remus shouted at Sirius.
"Fine I will do it on my own" Sirius mumbled to himself, of course Sirius on his own trying to get two people together is the worse thing anyone could do.
James, Sirius, and Remus were all sitting in Potions with Peter in front of them. Remus kept looking over at Sirius for the main reason that he had a smile on his face and he kept looking at Lily. It was simple, he was up to something.
"Pssssttt" Sirius said very loudly to Lily.
"Black go away, and do your work" Lily replied back without even turning around.
"But I have something for you" Sirius is in a singsong voice.
"Last time you said that you put that potion on my head that made my hair disappear" Lily replied back this time turning around.
"No but this time it's a letter," Sirius gave Lily the letter that he had wrote earlier.
"Who is it from, you?" Lily asked suspiciously.
"Nope from James" Sirius turned back to his work, with a smile on his face. He looked over at Remus to find him scowling. Remus whispered something to James, and he moved. Remus took James sit and turned around to look at Sirius.
"What. Did. You. Do?" Remus said simply to Sirius.
"Who me?" Sirius said sweetly to Remus.
"Yes you you mutt, I know you did something. And whatever it is it isn't going to work" Remus said in a matter of fact tone.
"Oh yeah well I am not telling you anything" Sirius said with a smug smile in his face.
"Either tell me or that girl Sam is going to fine out how you feel about her." Remus said in an undertone.
"Ok ok well you see I gave Lily a letter from James well it isn't from James its from me but it has James at the bottom so it is kind of from James, and I gave James a letter from Lily at breakfast," Sirius said in one go.
"I give up, this is not my fault so don't even try getting me involved when James asks who sent the letter" Remus said turning his back on Sirius.
Meanwhile in the bench in front Lily opened the letter from James it said:
Dear Lily,
Whatever happened between us I want you to forget it and meet me in the tallest tower on the east side at midnight please come I need to talk to you.
Your James
Lily looked around at James to find him staring at her, she smiled slightly. He turned away and looked at Remus and continued to talk to him.
On the backbench James was holding a letter in his pocket, he couldn't believe when he got it, the letter had said:
Dear James,
I need to talk to you, please meet me in the tallest tower on the east side at midnight, please come we need to talk
Love Lily.
That night Sirius Black had dragged, literally, Remus along to the tallest town on the east side, to watch his 'brilliant' plan.
"You realise this isn't going to work" Remus whispered, both himself and Sirius were hiding outside the door waiting for the couple to arrive.
"Your so negative, think happy thoughts, like raindrops on roses and whiskers on kit." Sirius started but was stopped as Remus saw Lily Evans walked towards the tower.
"See I told you this was going to work!" Sirius whispered to Remus.
"Yeah yeah, whatever you say you mutt" Remus mumbled to himself.
Within a few seconds James Potter magically appeared from thin air, obviously using the invisibility cloak, he looked at the map in his hand and walked into the tower.
Lily regretted ever thinking about coming to the east tower it was five past twelve and he had arrived, maybe he decided against it at the last minute? Or maybe this was just some joke! Oh yeah that's what he would do he would play a prank on her! He was here.
James Potter walked into the tower to find Lily looking out the towers window, he coughed loudly so she would turn around as she did, his breathe caught in his throat she looked outstanding, her hair looked brighter in the moonlight. But he wasn't going to tell her that, well yet anyway.
"See look they are talking! Look Remmy Look!" Sirius said excitedly pointing thought the gap of the door.
"Well if you moved your over-large head I could see, dearest paddy" Remus said sweetly.
"You're being really mean to me, I going to cry." Cue the fake tears and sobs.
"Shush listen, they are fighting" Remus said in a quick whisper.
"WHAT! God all my careful planning," Sirius started
"All ten minutes of it" Remus added.
"All my thinking put into those letters," Sirius wailed
"Yeah those two brain cells must really hurt" Remus finished for Sirius.
"Oh lookiie! Remmy! Look!" Sirius said excitedly again.
"What now?" Sirius asked.
"…" Sirius had his mouth wide open and look as if he had seen a ghost.
"…" Remus had seen the same thing, "Their, their…"
"KISSING!" Sirius finished for him.
(A.n- I was going to leave it here but…I though I might as well tell you all why the ended up kissing right?)
"Hello Potter" Lily said in a cold voice.
"Evans" James replied just as cold.
There was an awkward silence between the couple, James looked at the wall beside Lily while Lily looked at the floor, what was they suppose to say to each other?
"So, why did you want to see me you made it clear you don't remotely like me" James said to Lily without even looking at her.
"You wanted me to come here not the other way around, and I know you don't care for me either all the nasty looks you been giving me, and the snide comments" Lily answered back.
"What you can't talk, miss-I'm-too-perfect. Last charms lesson you keep taking digs at me, back to your old bitchy self, right Evans!" James said a little bit louder.
"Only because you did the same to me, every lesson you been calling me everything except, Mud blood. I don't even know why I came here tonight!" Lily looked at James straight in the eye and said coldly, "Your nothing more than a little boy, stuck in a mans body, I though you had grown up but you haven't you are still the egotistic arsehole."
"How dare you, I have been thought more than you ever have or will, so don't you call me a child" James said coldly to Lily.
"I hate you" Lily whispered harshly.
"So do I" he replied, he walked closer to Lily, she stepped backwards to find she couldn't go no further, she was backed up against a wall.
James leaned forwards and claimed Lily's lips with his own. That was the last thing that Lily was expecting of James, she was expecting him to say something spiteful to her not kiss her.
He didn't know why he kissed her maybe it was the way she looked in the moonlight, the way her hair was down for once and how it looked so soft and gentle, then her complex looked brighter thanks to the moonlight and her eyes…oh her eyes were the best James could get lost in them all day. Or maybe it was because he had a bet to win? Whatever the reason was both Lily and James were grateful that it happened.
"See I told you it would work Mooney" Sirius said smugly as they both sat in the common room.
"Yes, yes for once you were right" Remus muttered.
"I am always right, this is me we are talking about after all" Sirius ego was getting bigger and bigger and didn't he know it.
"So remind me why are we waiting in the common room?" Remus enquired.
"Well number one I want to see what James does when he comes back and I also want to see Lily's reaction" Sirius replied.
"Oh I see, well I am going to bed see you later Sirius" Remus said with a yawn.
"What, don't you want to stay?" Sirius asked innocently.
"Honestly…No" Remus said shortly.
Remus walked up to the dorm leaving one bored Sirius, all of a sudden Lily and James came walking through the common room quietly with James holding her hand.
"Tut Tut, Prefect Evans out of bed" Sirius said very loudly.
"Black! You scared me" Lily said then let go of James hand.
"Yes well I have that effect on woman, but they normally shout my name louder and they are normally in a bed," Sirius said sweetly.
"You are disgusting I don't want to know about your sex-life" Lily walked away with her head up high.
Sirius turned to James and smiled, James sat next to him and put his feet up.
"So…" Sirius started.
"I though you weren't going to interfere with this bet?" James asked.
"Why would I interfere when I am betting against you?" Sirius enquired sweetly.
"Because I know your handwriting, I know how you write fake love letters Paddy, but I suppose I should thank you after all, I am going to win now." James said he stood and smiled and took off towards the dorm.
"What you only kissed her, I kissed loads of girls and not all of them fall into my bed" Sirius stated.
"Yeah but this is me we are talking about, I have 1 and a half months to get her. And I will Sirius and you will be announcing your love for some stalker, Goodnight Paddy" James walked off with a smug look on his face, while Sirius was laughing.
Later On
Lily was in her bed dreaming of her kiss with James, he really was a good kisser.
Darren was in his bed thinking of his revenge.
Sirius was dreaming of food.
Remus was dreaming of the next full moon.
James was dreaming of sex with Lily, and all the reactions he would have.
But what none of these people knew was that there was someone against all of them, and he was sleeping in the same room as the boys, Peter Pettigrew.
Cliffhanger! Dun Dun Dun, all will be explained next time, so tell me did you like it, hate it, love it?
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Lots Of Friendly Love
Lily
XOXOX