An: I am writing this real quick, so it probably sucks. Heck, I know it sucks!!!
Disclaimer: don't own the Outsiders, so don't sue!
Summary: What if Johnny hadn't been carrying a blade.
Johnny's POV
I was walking home from the movies with my best buddy, Pony. It wasn't to late. Not even midnight yet. Pony didn't have to go home for a little while, so we sat in the vacant lot and talked for a little.
I was listening Pony ramble on about something or another, when I just fell asleep. I woke Pony up a little later.
He got up and left in a hurry. I decided to stay there in the lot for the night.
It wasn't that much later when Pony came running back.
He told me Darry hit him. I couldn't believe it. Darry just doesn't seem like the type to hit his kid brother.
We walked to the park. We weren't there long when a blue Mustang pulled up. Five drunk socs got out. I recognized them. They were the ones who jumped me before.
I was too nervous to catch any of what the socs were saying. I was too nervous.
Before I knew it, I was pinned to the ground. I tried to find my blade, but I guess it fell out of my pocket.
They were punching me, and punching me. I was smarting and aching all over. I could Pony being drowned in the background.
Before I knew it, a peaceful darkness drifted over me.
When I came to, I was still at the park. I was bleeding some, and I had a black eye.
I sat up and looked around. I saw Pony lying there, about twenty feet away, still as could be.
I walked over and touched his hand. It was stone cold.
I went into panic mode. I didn't know what to do. For my best friend was dead.
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