Ok I believe in giving advice on stories. And even commenting them whether its bad or good. But if your going to complain about the situation they're in. (Like lost in the woods) And you think its stupid.
Why the hell are you reading this then? Sorry but some of you are rude in commenting and sometimes it pisses me off. (clears throat)
Anyway. Don't misunderstand me. I can take a bad comment. Err anyway.. Thanks for the Review blah blah blah. Oh and I don't own Naruto.
AND I know on the part where Naruto is falling. He could've summoned the frog jutsu or whatever the hell its pronounced . I just didn't want him to do that.
It would just ruin the whole purpose on my idea on how its going to end.
ITS ABOUT CREATIVITY GOT IT PUNKS! If you don't like it. Stop reading. (calms down) Anyway.
Yeah.
Here's the next stupid chapter.
Hinata flinched back in shock, really nervous and scared.
Naruto looked away, blush spreading across his cheeks, "I-I'm sorry. I didn't mean to I just-"
"Um." She placed her hand on her mouth, Na-Naruto-kun kissed me!
He cleared his throat, trying to find the right words to say. "Y-you see.. Um.. A long time I.. um.. I.. heh heh." He let go and nervously grabbed onto a leaf, "Look a green leaf!"
Hinata gave him a funny look then tightened her grip on her mouth, giggling to herself.
Naruto watched her laugh, relieved she wasn't mad, If I tried doing that to Sakura. She would've never forgiven me, he looked away now a little sad, If I'm annoying as Sakura says. Maybe that's why no one likes me. He looked at Hinata again, his face lightening. Wow her smile is beautiful.
Hinata noticed he was staring, she blushed and pressed her index fingers together. Staying silent.
Naruto smiled, "Well, should we get going?"
She nodded, looking away. She let her hand cling to her jacket. Hm? Oh yeah. It wasn't her jacket. It was Naruto's jacket. She smiled, I wish this could last forever.
Later that day- nighttime
Naruto threw in another stick, flames rising, yawning loudly to himself, "WHEW!"
Hinata stayed curled up, her knees comfortably close to her stomach, her head on top of her knees. A shiver crawled down her back. Why do I have a feeling someone is watching us?
"Hey Hinata?"
She looked up startled, snapping out her thoughts "Uh-um yes Naruto-kun?"
He grinned, "Hungry?"
Hinata opened her mouth first making a slight, "Huh?" Then she realized what he said then nodded, a bit embarrassed that he was talking to her. (Who else can he talk to? What a dolt! Kidding.)
She blushed as he slipped off his shirt, then his pants. (HE WEARS BOXERS U SICKO!) He breathed out, shook off a cold shiver and dived into the large deep river nearby.
Hinata looked at the disturbed water, leaning over a bit to see if he was alright. Flickers of flame danced around, the water sparkling up at her. I-Is he ok? "Na-Naruto-kun?" She stayed in that position for 2 minutes then leaned to the side.
"ROAR!" Naruto suddenly flipped in the air, making her scream, with a huge fish in his death hug.
She had already backed up when he starting wrestling with the fish on the ground.
"Um." She looked around, grabbing a stick nearby. Does he need help? (What the hell is a stick going to do Hinata?)
Naruto suddenly heaved in the air, then opened his mouth and bit the fish.
It flipped about 20 more times then came to a dead halt. (AH! POOR FISHY! They're nasty tasting to me.)
Naruto halted remembering he wasn't just fishing for fun, cause he was just playing around with the fish, but that it was for Hinata and him. He flopped off the fish and sat next to it, rubbing the back of his head. Real embarrassed, "Oh. Heh. Sorry."
Hinata stared blankly at him then busted out laughing.
He blinked confused, "Huh?" How did I make her laugh?
She held her stomach, "I-I'm sorry Naruto-kun. But that was really funny." She rapidly stopped, How rude of me! "Oh."
Naruto stood up, still a confused look, "Hey.. Why did you stop?"
"Huh?"
"You look cute when you laugh."
She blushed, poking her index fingers together. (What a habit!) "Oh.. Um."
He grabbed the fish. (it's a real big fish just to let you know. Like.. Um.. Dog size. YAY!)
10 minutes later- Hinata and him ate half and half. Naruto gulping it down right as Hinata finished cooking it.
She giggled, "Naruto-kun."
He stopped for second, his mouth full with half the fish's body, "MUrgh!" (Translation: Excuse my manners)
Hinata giggled even more.
After they finished ,he leaned back, his hands holding him up from behind. "Ah!" He looked up, "What a night huh?"
Hinata nodded, it felt weird sitting right next to him. Especially with his shirt still off.
It was like they were…. A couple… She blushed, trying to shake off the thought. I mustn't insult Naruto-kun. Even if its just thinking. He would never like me.
"Right Hinata?"
"Huh?" She looked toward him, accidentally bumping noses.
He tensed.
She blushed and looked away, "I'm sorry."
Silence.
She glanced toward him, Oh no did I make him mad?
Hinata gasped as she felt unexpected lips on hers. N-Naruto-kun? She was about to pull away again till she felt his hand softly on her cheek. She relaxed. Her fingers curled up in the dirt, trying to keep her nervousness under control.
Seconds later he pulled away, his forehead on her.
Hinata kept her eyes closed. Feeling the cold metal from his headband. She didn't care though. This moment was heaven for her.
He stared at her, seeing how nervous she was. Like I'm not. "Hinata-chan?" He said a bit too lowly, it sounded more of a whisper.
Hinata didn't open her eyes.
He smiled, his eyes softening, and wrapped his arms around her.
He cuddled the side of her face. Oh how he longed to do that for months. Just one cuddle from her. Before we go back.
Hinata tensed up a bit but calmed soon after. She kept her arm pinned to the side.
Naruto frowned, I guess she doesn't like me.
She heard him sigh. …Naruto-kun.. She cuddled him back before he pulled away.
Ok. End. TAA-DAA! Liked it? I added a bit of more romance since we LOVE them together. Oh and next chapter you'll see how it makes more since on why they're supposedly 'lost.'
EVER THINK THAT THEY DO KNOW WHERE THEY ARE?
HUH?
MAYBE THEY'RE JUST PRETENDING TO BE LOST SO THEY COULD SPEND MORE TIME! PUNKS!
THINK ABOUT IT!
HIGH CLASS NINJAS AND THEY'RE LOST?
ARGH! YOU KIDDING ME?
Oh and review please. (smile!)