Ok guys, maybe this story isn't over. I have received tons of reviews (thanks to everyone who reviewed!) and have decided, thanks to a marvelous idea by Kelsea Scarlett (thanks so much for reviewing, and don't mind me if I actually do use your idea), to hold a contest. This contest will be to see who can write the best chapter(s) using the storyline I have developed. The storyline goes as follows:
1. Of course, Maria and Georg have their honeymoon in Paris
2. They eventually have to go home
3. Perhaps: everyone remember Stefan, the butler Maria was flirting with? Well he works at Baroness van Damme's villa. So the Baroness is having a ball, and Maria and Georg attend. They are out on the terrace making out when Stefan walks out there and sees them. He of course gets jealous and kisses Maria when Georg is talking to some people, but then Georg gets mad and punches him and they all live happily ever after.
4. Maria gets pregnant with a boy named Joseph (at least that's what they name him after he's born)
5. Gretl is jealous because Joseph is getting more attention than her
6. Liesl and Rolf (who isn't a Nazi, because in this story there is no Anchluss) are in the gazebo talking and Maria and Georg go out for some 'alone time' and catch them
7. That's basically all I had thought of….
So the contest will go as follows. You can write a chapter for each of the above, or a combination of a few, or anything really, e-mail it to me at and I'll post the best ones. Does that sound fun?
If you're interested in the contest, start writing!
Thank you all for reading and reviewing!
The Marauder1