Aftermath 2: This is Not Honor

by Deliverer

REVAMPED: When Monkey Fist infiltrates Yamanouchi in an attempt to seize the Lotus Blade, Yori is stunned. Alive? Impossible! She had watched him die. She can't deny what's in front of her though, and when Sensei declares the man must be captured and killed in order to save them all, she finds herself torn between honor and duty. Which one is the choice she won't regret?

8. Revamp Changelog

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Revamp Changelog

I am currently in the process of revamping this series. Bones are good, execution not so much. Whether that means doing a complete reboot or just a revamp is still up in the air. Given the bones are still okay, I'm leaning towards a revamp, but that depends on how it goes for other stories in the series as well. Some may have their chapters consolidated, some may have chapters added, some may lose complete sections or have sections added in. If there starts to be too many changes, I'll switch from revamp to reboot. Otherwise, for now, keep an eye on any future changes I may make.

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Changelogs

1 Monkey Fist Strikes - Sentence structure, grammar corrections, flow of dialogue and inner dialogue.

2 The Tiger And The Monkey - Sentence structure, grammar, story flow, dialogue, significant changes and additions to inner dialogue.

3 Grave Proclamation - Grammar, sentence structure, story flow, dialogue, inner dialogue. Possibly a portion of the next chapter moved to this one.

4 The Element Of Surprise - Grammar, sentence structure, story flow, dialogue, inner dialogue, some significant additions mostly in inner dialogue and character backstory. A portion of the next chapter was added to this one.

5 Pursuit - Grammar, sentence structure, story flow, dialogue. Notable change in the dynamic between Hirotaka and Sensei. Significant sections added and lore changes made.

6 Honor and Power - Major structural and story changes. Incorporated two separate chapters into this one chapter. Grammar, dialogue, structure, flow, inner dialogue, some notable scene changes.

7 Redeemable? - Grammar, sentence structure, story flow, dialogue, notable inner dialogue additions, somewhat notable dialogue changes here and there.