I would like a few suggestions for this. I need to know whether I should keep the announcer throughout the story and if you think I should list the trainer's Pokemon before the battle starts. Just send your suggestions in the form of review so I know what I should do for the next chapter. Thanks for the help.
The Pokemon League
Ch 2
Nevada VS Cassidy
NevadaCassidy
1.Dragonite1.Alakasam
2.Arcanine2.Pelipper
3.Espeon3.Shedinja
4.Aggron4.Jolteon
5.Flygon5.Torkoal
6.Gardevoir6.Golem
There was a huge roar rolled threw the stadium as the next two contestants stepped into their booths. After the cheering had quieted down a voice came over the intercom. "Good evening everyone. I hope all you are as excited to be here as I am."
Another loud roar filled the air
"Today we start with a guaranteed spectacular bout." he continued "Nevada in the blue corner, some of you may remember him from last years battle of the Dragonites in last years championship match against our current champion Ares. I hope to see some more of that from him this year. And against him is trainer Cassidy who after losing in the early rounds last year returns with some new friends from the Hoen and a newly evolved Golem. I believe she definitely has the Pokemon power and ability to overthrow the runner-up from last year. Well there is the ref's wave I believe we are ready for a battle."
"Three Pokemon each and you may switch Pokemon at anytime" the ref said "Nevada you lost the toss you will choose first."
"Well," Nevada said "if I'm to choose first I might as well start with something powerful. Aggron Go." He threw the Pokeball into the air and released the sturdy Pokemon.
"To win we will have to use type so I choose Pelipper!" Cassidy shouted releasing her bird Pokemon into the sky. "Start it with a water gun."
"Aggron takedown"
Pelipper sent a burst of water speeding toward the charging Aggron. The water splashed onto Aggron not effecting the huge Pokemon. Aggron lowered his head and smashed into the low flying Pokemon. Pelipper looked as if it would fall to the cold hard ground but with a couple of good flaps of its wings it managed to stay airborne.
"Oh and Pelipper is hit hard, but Cassidy's Pokemon is no quitter and it stays in the battle." Said the announcer over the loud speaker.
"The water it had no affect. How?" Cassidy said to herself as she thought about her next move.
Nevada laughed. "With my Aggron's defense you will have to do something better that little spurt."
"Try this Pelipper he's no match for your speed give it an agility." Cassidyshouted.
"Aggron wait and use roar." Nevada said
Pelipper began darting around the arena ate a very fast pace. So fast Aggron could barley keep up with it. But as soon as the Pelipper got close enough to him he let out a mighty deep roar, freezing Pelipper where it was.
"Now!" Nevada shouted
Aggron reached out and grabbed the Pelipper by one wing and then flung onto the ground.
"Pelipper is unable to battle." the ref announced waving the flag to show Aggron's victory.
Cassidy withdrew her Pokemon and reached for a new Pokeball. "So you want to play the strength game do you. Golem Go!" she shouted releasing her large rock Pokemon onto the field.
"Aggron show them your true strength." Nevada commanded
"You too Golem." Cassidy said.
The two heavy Pokemon clashed into each other in center ring pushing each other back and forth.
"Come Golem" Cassidy yelled, "you know you are stronger than he is."
" Prove'em wrong Aggron" came from the Nevada in the blue corner.
The struggle went one for a while draining needed energy from both Pokemon. Finally after almost three minutes of struggling Cassidy's Golem began to lift Nevada's Aggron off the ground.
"That's it Golem now slam." Cassidy yelled
Golem picked Aggron up over its head and held it there for a second before it slammed the massive Pokemon to the ground. Aggron remained on the ground unable to move after draining all of its energy wrestling the Golem.
"Golem is unable to battle." The ref. announced waving the flag showing Golem's victory.
"And after a long fight, the battle is finally over with the victory going to Cassidy's Golem." Came from the voice through the loud speaker.
"Fine," Nevada said withdrawing Aggron, "There is no way you have anything powerful enough to stop this." He threw another pokeball into the air releasing another massive form.
"And Nevada has brought out his strongest Pokemon Dragonite," said the announcer "Cassidy is going to have a hard time with this one."
"Hydro Pump" Nevada said
"Coun-" Cassidy tried to speak but was cut short as a mighty blast of water was shot from Dragonite's mouth. The blast of water exploded onto Golem knocking it back in to a wall.
"Golem is unable to battle." The ref announced waving the flag in Dragonite's victory.
"And Dragonite makes quick work of Golem." Came the voice from the loudspeaker. "Cassidy better come up with something soon or her trip to the Pokemon league will very short lived.
Cassidy withdrew her Golem and placed the ball back on her belt and reached for another one.
"Go Jolteon!" She shouted releasing her final Pokemon of the match. "Slow it down with a thunderwave."
Jolteon jumped onto the field and began to release a large amount of electricity.
"Use fly to dodge." Nevada commanded.
Dragonite flew into the sky completely dodging the electric attack.
"Knock it out of the sky with a thunder attack Jolteon." Cassidy said commanding her Pokemon.
"Dragonite Double team and then body slam." Nevada said.
Dragonite began to multiply itself as Jolteon sent a large blast of electricity into the air. The thunder attack missed plowing through one of Dragonite's copies and disappearing into the sky.
"Counter the body slam with a tackle Jolteon"
Dragonite's copies disappeared and the real one began to soar down towards the Jolteon who had now jumped into the air towards the oncoming dragon Pokemon. Both Pokemon collided midair and came crashing to the ground. Dragonite and Jolteon both rose to their feet ready for more action.
"Neither one chooses to give up, it looks like we have a battle ladies and gentlemen." Said the announcer over the loudspeaker.
"Jolteon lets show them we are no wimps, give it a pin needle." Cassidy
"Dragonite lets end this with a seismic toss." Nevada commanded.
Dragonite shot towards Jolteon grabbing it and tried to take into the air with it. But Jolteon wasn't ready to quit and let free hundred of needles from its fur in to Dragonite's body. Dragonite immediately let go of Jolteon and began to try and shake loose all of the needles that were now imbedded inside its body.
"Now thunder!" Cassidy yelled.
Jolteon let loose a massive thunder bolt connecting directly with the distracted dragon. Dragonite fell to the ground with electricity flowing around its body.
The ref began to raise the flag in Jolteon victory, but right before he declared Jolteon the winner Dragonite soared back in to the air.
"My God I'm amazed," said the announcer "How Dragonite can take a thunder attack head on just like that and still manage to get up, is beyond me. That is powerful Dragonite folks".
The only person in the entire stadium that didn't seem surprised was Nevada. "Hmph" Nevada muttered "did you all really thing that was all it was going to take to stop my Dragonite. I have been training him for seven years, there is no way he will go down that easily." Nevada pointed toward Jolteon. "Dragonite quickly Iron tail."
Cassidy's shock kept from calling an attack.
Dragonite's tail began to glow silver. It flew towards Jolteon, and sent his tail smashing down onto Jolteon from above. Crushing the electric Pokemon into the ground.
"Jolteon is unable to battle," the ref said waving the flag. "Nevada is the winner of the battle."
"There it is folks," said the announcer "an ending to one of the most amazing first round battles I have ever seen."
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