Okay this time I got 5 reviews and last time I got 4? Okay either way I got one more than I was aiming to get for the 2 chapters put together. This time I'm aiming to get say up to 12 reviews for the whole story if I can.
Thanks for these people for reviewing the last chapter:
Raven1777- Thank you for reviewing and I'm going to try and update a lot quicker from now on.
Delirium24- you got it right so you get a cookie!
xOsilentdreamsOx- Thanks So much for reviewing lol. I didn't really think I was that good a writer so I need people to tell me where to improve that's why I was aiming to get some reviews.
Raecat- Thanks for reviewing!
WriteR WhO WriteS- Thanks for reviewing and here you go!
Here's the chapter…
Silently wondering what Victor meant by that Richard merely shook his head and wrapped his arm around Kori's waist causing her to lightly hit the back of his head for making her almost spill her soda due to the sudden gesture coming from him.
Laughing at the two's antics Victor glanced back at Raven's table as she gave him a small smile before turning back to Jinx.
"Please don't hurt her Richard!" he silently pleaded the image of her shattered heart still as fresh as ever in his mind.
The bell soon rang signalling the end of lunch, as everyone filed out at his or her own paces. Richard hung back telling Kori he was seeing a friend before giving her a quick kiss.
He held back long enough until Raven and Jinx were about to leave.
"Raven!" he walked up to them.
"Richard? What are you playing at?" she glared annoyed at him for interrupting her conversation with Jinx.
"Well I was hoping you could come by my place after school?" he asked unsure of her answer.
Taking slight pity on him she nodded before dragging off Jinx who had a huge grin on her face.
Richard's POV
"Why do I keep thinking about her? I already have a great girlfriend and Raven's in the year below me so why can't I get her out of my head?" I groaned aloud.
"Hey Richard!" Victor came up to him with a smile on his face.
"Yeah?"
"I saw you talking to Rae and I wanna know if you like her?" Vic asked with a smirk.
"Well yeah as a friend I guess…" I trailed off unsure if that's all I felt for the gothic enchantress.
"Uh huh and I don't believe you why?" Victor teased.
"I dunno I mean I have Kori and Raven's just someone I bumped into so why can't I get her out of my head?" I questioned.
"Because Raven has that effect on you! You'd better be careful Richard or she'll lure you into her trap and you'll follow her around like a lost puppy dog. Raven somehow lured me into caring for her like a big brother should!" Victor stated.
"I'll keep that in mind Vic!" I smirked wondering if Vic had been smoking dope recently.
"And no I'm not on drugs!" Victor stated before heading down the corridor.
I shook my head with one thought entering my mind "I need to find more saner friends!" I smirked.
Raven's POV
I was listening to Jinx talking about that school dance coming up next week. Like I'd ever go to a school dance anyway! Yet she was saying how we should go as friends since neither of us have dates and how we could always chat up the hottest guys. /god I feel like killing her in a minute!
Wait I minute I'm going to Richard Grayson's mansion. THE Richard Grayson! What have I gotten myself into?
Normal POV
"Hey Raven?" Jinx questioned her friend.
"Yeah?"
"Why is Richard Grayson aka the hottest and richest guy in school asking you to come by his mansion later?" Jinx questioned.
"I dunno. Maybe it's going to be a cruel prank being played on me since I'm not that popular." Raven sighed as the thought entered her mind.
"I don't think Richard would do that to you! Besides if he did Victor would most likely kill him. I remember when he did that with Malchior for dumping you like that. I can't believe he did that to you!" Jinx rambled on before noticing the look on her best friend's face of those painful memories being brought back up to the surface.
"Oh my God Raven I am SO sorry for bringing that back up!" Jinx gasped in horror cursing herself knowing how hard it was for Raven.
"It's okay Jinx I forgive you but I'm NOT going to that dance!" Raven smirked.
Arguing soon ensured as the two kept a rhythm of "Are too!" and "Are not!" all the way down the hall attracting numerous stares.
Thankfully the bell soon rung signalling end of the day as everyone piled out of the school.
"Bye Rae and good luck!" Jinx called leaving Raven to glare at her retreating form.
Shaking her head at her friend's antics Raven headed to where Richard would supposedly be waiting for her only to be stopped by Katrina Moth and her group of Richard Grayson fanatics…
Okay I know that's REALLY short and I'm REALLY sorry!
I would have posted this WAY sooner but I've been swamped in coursework and stuff.
I know this is quite rushed but I'm really stressed with schoolwork at the moment but there's a strike today for all the cleaning staff and stuff in our area and we all get the day off school YAY!
I promise to get the next chapter out much sooner and I'll make it a lot longer!
I'm hoping to get 3 reviews for this so I really need your support!
The Amano Dragon xxx
