Disclaimer: Beyblade is not mine, Just some of my charters and events in the story as it goes along is mine.
Well this is my first fan fiction Yay
Well any how just because this is my first, I would appreciate comments to how I can improve.
(Because I'm not the worlds best at grammar and things.) Also I would like to know your opinion
on what you think...
To short?
Do I need to re-think some more or write the next one so its easy to tell?
Ether way I'm happy for all comments! I like to improvement in myself.
Well I hope you enjoy this and I look forward to hearing from you all.
Just What Am I?
Skyline woke up with a painful burst of a shudder in a cold damp ditch. Where? Who knows.
Skyline: cough cough "Whe-where am I?"
The air was thick with the icicle particles she could see her own breath. She tried to opened her eyes, but she could only squint upwards a little. What little she could see she knew she was outside looking at the night sky.
Skyline: "What have I been doing…? I … I"
She laid still for a few seconds to try and give her throat some time to recover. She felt like it was burning with fire as if she had swallowed a razor blade. She laid trying to keep her mind from freaking out. Then she open her eyes wide open as a sudden flash back came to her.
-Flash Back-
A needle grew closer to her body as a dark figure drew closer, She could not see the mans face But she could tell he was laughing. Laughing at her? She struggle to get away but she was chained down. Chained down? As the man came closer she began to shake more violently, She could not remember who the man was but she knew he was going to hurt her and hurt her bad. With that thought a bight burst of icy blue flame surrounded her then it went completely black.
-Back To Normal-
In the blackness she grew more frightened. Her whole body was in a panic her arms trembled her body shook more and more violently until she could stand it no longer, she sat up quickly because she hoped the trembling would stop if she forced herself to move. With that she felt light headed and numb from the frozen air around her. Her body responded by making her puke up, Well trying to make her throw up. She had nothing in her stomach to let out. Slightly disorientated she noticed that she had been laying in a puddle of icy mud. Gasped for air to control over her body she grabbed a handful of the ice with as little mud as possible and rubbed it onto her face. As she did so, She had not noticed it before, How could she? She couldn't feel her legs nor her arms. She had a slight feeling in her fingers as she looked in the mud she could see a thin layer of ice clean enough to see her reflection. Although her vision was still fuzzy she saw her face with the reflecting light from the moon as she looked at herself.
Skyline: Light blue hair? I…I don't remember having light blue hair?
She clutched her head with her hand grinding her teeth together trying to think real hard about who she was. Her head began to ache terribly as she thought about who she was.
-Flash Back-
She was flying, flying over mountains, over waters so blue. As high as the eye could see. Flying peacefully as she felt so happy flying, She felt calm. Above the still waters she could see her reflection as she flew, She saw she was a huge Icy light blue bird. With great sparkling light blue feathers and white feathers combinations of such beautiful colors made her feel at ease. Her body stopped shaking for a few moments as the thought of such great beauty of herself. As it took over her mind and she says to herself confused...
Skyline: I had feathers, Yes feathers. No…I am human. I…Ugh…
Skyline felt as if her mind was splitting in two. She laid back down in the mud curled up in a ball whispering and moaning in grief to her self clutching tightly to her head frustrated.
Skyline: Just who am I? What am I?
-Flash Back-
She was dancing, Dancing around happily with two other children in a circle. The wind felt delightful agents her cheeks. She smiled and laughed with the other two children. Then they started singing together…
Ring a ring a roses, a pocket full of poses, A-tishoo A-tishoo we all fall down
They all fell on the floor giggling, they laid the heads together in formation like the peace sign with out a circle. One of the children sat up and held something in his hand.
Little Boy: Let us become the strongest three beybladers alive! As long as we are together, We shall help each other to become stronger. To the invisible friendship!
With that he held up a "thing in his hand." The other child sat up giggling lifted her "thing" too.
Little Girl: "Yes! To our friendships and to our blades! Most of all our greatest friends, our bit beasts!"
With that skyline looked in her hand and saw a "Blade" and a shiny thing in the middle.
Skyline: A bit beast…?
She whispered to herself. Then she noticed what it looked like inside the blade. Apart of her was horrified she screamed in despair. The blue bird that she thought was her, was right there in the middle of the "beyblade."
Skyline: I'm a BITBEAST? No Noooo I'm-I'm a girl! No…I'm a bird…I…I…
-Back To Normal-
Skyline went back to reality laying on the icy muddy ditch. Noticing starring right at her was that very same "beyblade." But something was different about the beyblade the "bit beast" in the middle was gone. Confused, screaming and crying in pain. Skyline just yelled out over and over again…
Skyline: Just what am I? What who AM I?
She slowly lost herself to darkness of the night until she was conscious.
no more.
To Be Continued.
Thank you very much for reading.
Kat/Happy/Sing