OK here's chapter 8 and to let you all know I think I have solved the problem. but im not sure but I have added another part to chapter 6 so hopefull it will now make sence, hopefully. and if it doesent tell me and I will spend another day looking over all the chapters trying once again to figure out just what the problem is.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter 8: karioke: Part 1
Angel froze as soon as her eyes locked with Athrun's, she could feel her body go weak as everyone else staired at her as if she were insane.
"Angel". Cagalli asked slightly unsure.
"Yes". Angel replied looking nervous, backing up a step.
Cagalli broke into a smile as she ran forward and ingulfed Angel in a warm hug.
"Where have you been, you just left that day". Angel looked away guiltily mumbling a 'it wasent my fault'.
"What was that". Cagalli asked as tears streamed down her face.
"It wasent my choice". She said angerly, causeing everyone to look at her. She had changed to much. She had gone from being a girl to a woman in just two years.
Before anyone could comment on Angel's behavior a girl their age with a haircut almost identical to Cagalli's but shorter came running up behind Angel.
"Angel". The girl called to the other, they obviously knew each other.
"Ami".
"Sempai, shikata ga nai". Ami spoke a compleatly different language.(The commander, no way to avoid it)
"Sorry guys later". Angel spoke not looking the least bit sorry and then left with her friend, still pushing the carrage.
XXXX
"Commander". The soldiers, Josh, Ethan, Rose, Ami, and Angel said in unison.
"Pilots, I have called you here to tell you something inportant. One Angel you are relived of your duties as a 'babysitter'. Two, Angel is being promotted to 'pilot'. And Three scence we can only carry four mobile suits at a time we are transfireing Josh and Ethan off the ship and bringing in a new soldier, his name is Rusty Mackenzie. Josh, Ethan prepare to leave tommorrow, that is all".
As the five left the bridge josh spoke up
"You all want to go the the bar down town for one last night together".
"Sure".
XXXX
The music was loud, and so was everyone else. The guys wernt bad but the girls screamed at the top of their lungs to the music. The tension around the bar area was pritty bad, but only because Cagalli, Athrun, Kira, Shinn, Lacus, Miriallia, Dearka, and Shiho sat two tables away from Ami, Angel, Ethan, and Josh, and more people kept leaving giving the teens a better look at each other.
"This music sucks". Cagalli said as Athrun wrapped his arm around the blondes thin waist.
"Then do something about it". Mumbled Athrun.
"I will". Lacus said walking off.
Before they knew it there Lacus stood on the stage infront of a microphone
"Ok everyone this song is called, Who knows". The music started to play.
Yeah, yeah
Yeah-eah, yeah
Yeah-eah, yeah
Why do you look so familliar
I could swear that I, have seen your face before
I think I like that you seem sincere
I think i'd like to get to know you a little bit more.
Chorus
I think there's something more, that lifes worth living for
Who knows what could happen
Do what you do, just keep on laughing
One things true there's allways a bran new day
Im gonna live today like tis my last day.
Yeah, yeah
Yeah-eah, yeah
Yeah-eah, yeah
How do you allways have an opinion
And how do you allways find the best way to compromise
We dont need to have a reason
We dont need anything
Were just wasting time
Chorus X 2
Find your self, cause I cant find you
Be yourself, who are you
Find yourself, cause I cant find you
Be yourself, who are you
Who knows what could happen
Do what you do, just keep on laughing
Ones things true, there's allways a bran new day
So you go and make it happen
Just do you best and keep on laughing
Im telling you, there's allways a brand new day
Chorus
Lacus finished her song with a small bow, then hopped off the stage and headed back to where her friends sat.
"You have an amasing voice, Lacus".
"Thank you". She looked over to where the other teens sat and saw them glaring at them.
"I could do so much better". Ami wispered.
And not long after Ami to appeared on the stage.
"I like to call this song Imaginary".
I linger in the doorway
Of alarm clocks screaming
Monsters calling my name
Let me stay
Where the wind will wisper to me
Where the rain drops
As they're falling tell a story
Chorus
In my field of paper flowers
And candy clouds of lullaby
I lie inside myself for hours
And watch my purple fly over me
Dont say im out of touch
With this rampant and chaos- your reality
I know well what lies beyond my sleeping refuge
The nightmare i've built my own world to escape
Chorus
Swallowed up in the sound of my screaming
Can not crease for the fear of silent nights
Oh how I long for the deep sleep dreaming
The goddess of imaginary light
Chorus
Ending her song she got off the stage, only to see the burnette, Kira get on.
After four more singers, Shinn sining 'I'd do anything', Kira singing 'Let's go', Angel singing 'Over', and Shiho Singing 'perfect'. It was Angel's turn again singing 'Notice Me'
Here's a story of a girl,
Living in a lonely world,
A hidden note,
A secret crush,
A little boy who talks to much.
Well, im standing in the crowed,
And when you smile I check you out,
But you dont even know my name,
Your to busy playing games,
And I want you to know,
I you lose your way,
I wont let you go.
Chorus
If I cut my hair,
If I change my cloths,
Will you notice me?
If I bite my lip,
If I asy hello,
Will you notice me?
Whats it gonna take for you to see
I want you to notice me,
I'll get you to notice me.
Got your head up in the clouds,
Tell me when your comming down,
I dont wanna sink your ship,
Its not about the scolarship,
And all the friends that follow you,
Tell you things that just arnt true,
I'm the girl you never see,
I'm the one you realy need,
So dont you get me wrong,
You better make you move,
Before the moments gone,
Tell me.
Chorus
I'm not like the rest,
I dont care if your the best,
you see, it's all the same to me,
Ohhh dont get me wrong,
You better make your move,
Before the moments gone,
Tell me.
If I cut my hair,
If I change my clothes,
Will you notice me?
If I bite my lip,
If I say hello,
Will you notice me?
Chorus
As soon as Angel was done she jumped of the stage only to be engulfed my a pair of warm arms and to have a pair of sweet lips forced on her.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ok short chapter I know, dont kill me!. Remember that this chapter is only part one od Two the second part of this chapter will be up in the next couple days so watch for it.
PLZ R&R