Something is still wrong I can feel it and see it so im Asking all of you what you find to confusing about chapter 6(Thats where everyone started to get confused). I have honestly tried to fix but I dont know how do you just need someone to explain it cause now im confused. Anyway I hope my reviewers start reviewing again cause I cant fix anything until I know what is wrong.

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Chapter 10: Found Love

Angel felt her head spinning, opening her eyes she had to blink several times to clear her vision. when she tried to push herself up she felt a pulsing pain go through her ribs and knee. Oh god she must have broken something. insted of trying to push herself up like she had planed she twisted around so she lay on her back and pulled her body out with her arms. The gundam was totaled. Removing her helmat she tossed it to the side and looked at her knee no wonder it hurt so much it was split wide open with a deep wide gash down the side, the material from her flight suit stopped the bleeding.

Falling backwards so that she lay on her back and brough her hands up to tangle themselves in her short hair. Her breathing was becoming thiner. She wondered if anyone was looking for her.

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Truth be told only the military was looking for her. Everyone was either at home or at the small coffie shop down town.

Cagalli sighed in content, snuggling deeper into Athrun's side.

"Athrun".

Cagalli spoke softly after not getting a response she manovered herseft to get a better look at her boyfriend. He was asleep. Cagalli giggled quietly slowly getting up as not to desterb his peaceful sleep and left the house.

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Shinn was paseing up and down Angel had said that she was going to be there in an hour but was late by four hours. He began to wonder if anything happened to her, deciding not to wait around he grabed his keys and got in his car and headed in the direction of the military base.

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By the time anyone arrived at the sceen Angel's breathing had become but a faint wisper and her heart rate was slowing they had to rush her a hospital. from there they notifyed all her friends they could get a hold of.

When Shinn finally arrived after picking up Kira and Athrun on the way all the girls were already there. Stopping any of them from entering the room. Cagalli, Lacus, and Miriallia were crying loud sobs escaping their lips. Athrun and Kira wrapped their arms tightly around their girlfriends and let them cry onto their shoulders. Shiho was in the room.

"Shiho". The girl wispered.

"Yes".

"Where's Shinn".

"Im not sure".

"I want him here". Tears rolled down Angel's face Shiho could tell she was scared.

"I know he should be here soon okay".

"Can you go check to see if he's here".

"Yeah".

Shiho exited the dimly lit room as she stood in the doorway she scaned the hallway at last landing on the boy she wanted to see.

Walking towards him she saw the tears on his dark curled lashes. Placing her hand on his shoulder he jumped.

"Shinn".

"What".

"Angel wants to see you, she's been waiting for you the whole time".

Shinn's eyes were wide and round like a frightened childs. He nodded.

Walking to the room he stopped at the door for a second before going in.

What he saw blew him away. The person he cared the most about was Laying an a bed with a breathing mask and a heart rate monitor hooked up to her, her face was pale. He knew what was happening.

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Their will probably be two mre chapters and thats it so please tell me what ou think I know it was a very short chapter the next one probably wont be any better.

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