OK, Hi guys! Me and cioabella have decided to write a fan fic together as we are both quite busy and this way will mean that we can share out the work! So there will be more regular posts- hopefully! Anyway this is my first fan fic so don't be too harsh! But please review honestly! Constructive criticism as well as compliments are welcome! You've probably already read some of cioabella's fan fics and their great so there definitely won't be any problems with her bits! First bit is written by cioabella.
PART 1
Martha climbed into her elaborately beaded wedding dress. It looked fantastic on her, even if she didnt think so. Today was probably the most important day in Martha's life, she just wanted it all to go well...
"Martha you look absolutely fantastic" a voice whispered in her ear.
"Jack! We're not supposed to see each other before the wedding!" she giggled
"I couldnt resist" Jack smiled at her that smile he nearly always had on, the smile she knew and loved. Martha kissed him passionately, and then suddenly she stopped.
"What's the matter ?" asked Jack.
"Did you invite dad?"
"Yea I did, he is your father."
"Oh no I wish you hadn't, I can't face seeing him"
"I'm so sorry Mac but I'm sure you'll be ok with each other."
"Jack I hate my dad. Remember when we went to Alf's funeral all he said to me was I cant take you in, I've got enough on my hands and then when I introduced him to you and you held out your hand he didn't even shake it."
"He might have changed. Firstly, he's probably sorted his debts out and secondly if he comes to this wedding he obviously cares about you."
"Mmm I dont know" Martha sounded unsure.
Tasha came in.
"Jack you're not supposed to be here!" she said disapprovingly
"You caught me red handed!" Jack laughed
"Bye sweetie" said Martha
"I love you" they kissed passionately
When jack had left Tasha said
"God you really are in love."
Please tell us what you think!