What Could Go Wrong?
by: anime.addicted.2.ur.love
Summary: This is a story wherein natsume kept a secret about himself being injured. he kept this from all his classmates. he is getting worse everyday. mikan and his other friends even notices it but he is still ignoring it. then, he collapsed and was brought to the alice hospital. there, he knew that he was going to die soon because of an illness he inherited from his mother.
From the Author: I hope you like this story. its quite short cause this is just my first fic. i know that some of it wrong grammared. so, please help me. please review and add any comment and i'll except my mistake. hehehehe... tnx anyway guys! for reading my lousy story! L'
Chapter One: Mission Accomplish
It was a night that had full moon. Natsume has a mission again from persona. it was very dark and natsume was hiding in the shadows. that night, a black car passed the alice academy and stopped exactly where natsume was. the door of the car slowly opened. there, he saw three men in black suit. they were holding weapons and armors. their body was so big and strong.
Without any help, natsume was ready for his mission that night which is to guard the gate of alice academy. as natsume turned on his alice, the men noticed it and found natsume behind the tree. they immidiately used their guns and shot at natsume. natsume wasn't shot for he was very skilled, fast and strong. he showed himself to the men and balanced himself at the fence. there, he used his fire alice and made the three men stand in fire. the three men was on fire but one of them still has got the guts to shoot at natsume. "you are gonna die, you pesty kid!" said the man. with that, he luckily shot natsume with three shots. First, he was shot at his left knee and then, he was also shot at his right shoulder and at his left arm.
Even though natsume was shot, he still managed to burn the three men to ashes. He used his fire alice very quikly. "The fight is over. i should go back now. ahhhh..." said natsume and also winced from the pain. then, after that, he returned to his room without being noticed.
with a quick second, he felt his body fell to his bed. there, he quietly fell asleep...
ItZ ReAlLy ShOrT YoU kNow... But D' Nxt cHapteR wON't... L'
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