Goten Yokai!2- Toraburu O Paradaisu
Anime: Naruto
Author: Jeido the konneko-chan
Fiction Rated: T (for mild-language) i don't want to get into trouble..
Hey everyone! Sorry for the wait but, i have to study for my ACT so i had a limited time to write.. This is the sequel for Goten Yokai!. Or, more like the second chapter..
I might be wrong in the translation again.. sorry.. there are so many words translated in japanese for "Trouble in Paradise" I just didn't know which one to pick! 0.o;;
If you didn't read the first one, you have to read it to understand the story. And I wanna say thanks to the ppl who reviewed for my first story! Anyways, i gotta go! Please review! I DO NOT OWN NARUTO! Masashi Kishimoto-sama does! (All bow to him.. MUWAHHAHAHAHA!) I feel so EVIL... XD
This is why i had such a hard time.. 0.o''
Trouble (translated in japanese): yuuku, kodawari, fuwa, yakkaigoto, rou, toraburu
in (just the WORD ITSELF!) :oite, o, uchini, okeru, in
Paradise (translated in japanese): juuman'okudo, tengoku, tendou, gokuraku, paradaisu
( Author note: All characters are fictional except Naruto and Gaara who are real Naruto characters) Sorry if its long.. make sure you have enough time to read!
Where the story left off..
Naruto laughed. Naruto yelped as he dissapeared in a puff of smoke and returned in his yokai form again. Gaara looked at him in shock. " A kitsune!" Oh crap.. he saw me! " This is not what it looks like.." Naruto said as he waved his hands infront of him. "I can explain!"
"Well, there's something i have to show you too.." He dissapeared in a wave in sand. When the sand went down Naruto's eyes widden. Garra's ears were replaced by large pointed ears like naruto's but brown, and the ends were blue tipped. He had a spikey brown tail like a squirrel but, like his ears, the ends were blue tipped, with squiggling blue lines going here and there.
"You're.. a squirrel yokai!"
"Actually, a dog-raccoon yokai..."
The Nashi and the Hell Demon
Naruto snapped back to reality," A what?" "A tanuki." (a/n: i thinks thats how its spelled..) Gaara replied. "So i guess we have a lot in common then you thought, eh?" Naruto crossed his arms at his chest and gave the tanuki yokai a pout. "No," he bragged, " we don't.. and why did you save me back there! I could handle it better myself!" "Yeh," Gaara scoffed. "By running away.." "Shut up ,you squirrel wannabe!" Naruto yelled at the suna demon. Gaara just yelled back in annoyance." How many times i have to tell you. Im not a SQUIRREL! Get that through your empty head, kitsune baka!" Naruto just glared at him back. " Why you.. I should.." "Shhh.." Gaara reached over to cover the kitsune's mouth while he scanned the area. Naruto's ears pirked. There was lots of yelling from inside of the village. "I think i heard them over here" " Are you sure?" said another voice. The first voice spoke again,"Yeh, he couldn't have gone too far.. it shouldn't be that hard to find him. He was with this red haired kid." Gaara let go of the kitsune's mouth, "It seems you got the whole village in an uproar." He scanned the kitsune from head to toe. "By the way, what did you steal anyways that would upset the whole village?" Naruto reached into his pocket and brought out one of the fruits. "A PEAR!" Gaara yelled, he looked like he was going to faint. "Several.." Naruto showed him the rest. He gave the kitsune the look;like he was going to kill him. " You mean to tell me... that they are so upset about loosing a couple of freaken pears!" "Hai.." A sweatdrop dripped down from the side of the kitsune's face. "Well forget that..gimme!" Garra snatched one of the pears and took a real big bite out of it. Naruto looked stunned."Gahh! Why did you do that for!" "I was hungry.." the tanuki mumbled, his mouth full of fruit. "Great.." Naruto growled, watching him eat. "You are going to get us both killed.." Gaara swallowed the food he had in his mouth." well, woopie-doo.. but you know what? We are allready in hell.. so it doesn't matter. We are good as dead anyways and also we are the last of our kind.." Naruto glared at him."you don't know that for sure.." Gaara responded by taking another big bite out of the nashi ( japanese pear). Naruto's ears pearked, he turned, looking around the area for the source of the noise. He thought he saw a shadow zooming by as well. "Gaara.. did you hear something?" Gaara looked at the kitsune while still chewing. "Its probably the wind, rustling through the trees." " I don't think so.." the nervous kitsune replied. "I suggest we transform just in case there is someone out there." the red head tanuki scoffed, "From what? Animals? They can't hurt us." "I heard most of the village residence here are ninjas." Gaara gave him a look. " Ninjas? That should be intresting." "Im not joking Gaara.." Naruto replied in a serious voice. Gaara walked towards his companion and put his hand on his shoulder ,startling the little kitsune. Gaara sighed,"If it makes you feel better.." Naruto nodded in agreement. They faced each other where they stood, made a hand sign at the same time. "TRANSFORM!" Both yelled, dissapearing in a puff of smoke and reapearing in human form without any trace of yokai characteristics.
"Why are we doing this anyways Naruto?"
"Because, we don't want them to know that we are demons"
"Their going to find out anyways.. when we are dead."
" You don't know that for sure.. I learned that humans can be hostile creatures but some can be understanding and caring."
"Oh, and im suppose to take advise from a kitsune that transforms into a women, tricks men into suduction, and when they find out your true identity, you somehow dissapear without a trace ."
Naruto's eyes twitched, "Thats just human superstition.. humans have the habit of come up with ways of creating stupid folklores. Besides, i don't like the fact of screwing around with humans."
Evil grin,"I didn't know you go that way.."
"Shut up you ecchi(perverted) tasuki baka!"
"Who are you calling an ecchi tasuki baka, you dumb blonde!" (a/n: no offence to blondes)
While the two continued to argue, they didn't seem to notice four pairs of eyes watching them from the treetop nearby. "So those are demons in disguised.. interesting.." said one. "They are cute though.."said a female as she combed her fingers through her straight black hair. " Cute, Sachiko? I say more dangerous then cute. They are said to be man-killers." the other replied to his female companion. She turned to her companion." How would you know (1)Tsume? You never met a demon before." She watched the two yokai bicker. "Besides, they're just pups, not full grown yet.. but still very dangerous.." Tsume just chuckled. "I thought you said they were cute?" Sachiko eyed him. " Yes, under the circumstances.." Sachiko gave Miyamoto a puzzled look, their "leader". " They're pups now but wait until they get older. It is said that full grown kitsunes and tasukis were suppose to be big like they did during the ancient times.." " You know its just a myth.." Chikato managed to say with his mouth stuffed with chips. (a/n: reminds you of choji..) Sachiko grumbled, "Can't you go anywhere without stuffing your mouth!" "Sachiko keep it down.." Miyamoto commanded. "Yokais have a good sense of hearing. If they get startled and run, they are more likely to do more damage." The two were more likely to hear the sound of Chikato's bag crackling or smell the chips inside, then Sachiko's rambling. "By the way Tsume, where's your little wolf-dog (2)Kuromeru?" "Don't worry about it. He's ready at my signal" Tsume replied. Miyamoto nodded, "Good.."
"Enough arguing. It makes me hungry." The suna reached into the jacket pockets, pulling out yet another nashi, leaving the kitsune stunned. Oh, he just did not reach into my pockets.. "Hey! Give that back!" The kitsune waved his fist at him. "You already had one! You can't say your still hungry from just eating one!" "I haven't eaten anything since i met you ok? Are you happy!" Gaara closed his eyes, opening his mouth to take a bite, he bit into it but he didn't taste anything. "Huh?" He realized that the pear was no longer in his hand, his eyes blinked in confusion. " Did you take it from me?" Gaara yelled at Naruto. "Eii," Naruto had a look of uncertainty on his face. He pointed, "But he did.." Gaara looked where the kitsune pointed. There, leaning against a tree was a teenager their age with black raven hair, two large bangs coming down the side of his face, the rest spiked back like the back head feathers of a cockatoo. (a/n: (snickers) a cockatoo..) "Another one!" Sachiko said in astonishment. "Geez, those two are magnets for other demons.." Chikato bit into a candy bar. "I wonder where they are came from?" Miyamoto asked. Tsume glared at the fat ninja, "And where the hell did you get that!" Chikato looked at him. "I was saving this for later.." The two looked at the stranger, who had his eyes closed and was whistling a tune through navy blue lips. Naruto notice that the stranger looked human except for two small trangangular horns coming out of his head from behind the large bangs and a weird black shuriken tattoo on his nose, that spread in the space between his eyes, part of his cheeks, and a few inches below his nose area. He continued throwing the pear up and catching it while whistling. Gaara glared at him. "Who the hell are you?" "Should i be saying that about you?" The stranger replied with a question. Naruto shuddered when he finally opened his eyes. His pupils were black while the sclera in both eyes, (the normal white part of the eye) a blood red color. "You know, you two are quite intresting causing a lot of fuss over a small pear like children." Naruto finally realized what he was. "And we are suppose to talk to an Oni, the so called servent of (4) Emma-hoo.." Naruto smerked. "Who's Emma-hoo,Miyamoto?" Tsume whispered. " I can't believe what im hearing!That kid is suppose to be the servant of the Kami of hell.." Sachiko said while eyeing the oni. "The kami of hell!" Tsume held on the tree trunk . He looked like he was going to fall from fidgeting. " So whats the hokage's orders?" "To bring them back alive.." Miyamoto answered. Tsume looked confused. "But does she know they're demons?" "Will the other demons be angered and destroy our village if we kill them?" Chikato asked. "Look you all." Miyamoto demanded. "We follow the hokage's orders and we'll deal with them later. Got it." "Hai" the others nodded in agrement. Tsume looked down at the dog hiding in the bushes nearby. "Ready Kuromaru?" Tsume whispered to the dog. "Ruff!" The dog barked. "No, we don't want to hurt them.." Miyamoto interuped. "And what do you suggest?" Sachiko asked. She watched as Miyamoto reached up to the vest pocket, bringing out several small darts and out from inside his vest four small circular tubes made from bamboo. "Where did you get that?" Miyamoto grinned, "A ninja always come prepared."
Naruto ignored the oni and the suna tasuki, "Did you hear a dog bark?" He started to sniff the air. He could smell something, some other scents in the air as well. "I smell something.." The ninjas in the trees tensed. "You must be smelling things..'' The suna replied in an annoyed voice. Naruto cautiously followed the scent toward the tree where the ninjas were hiding. Kuromaru growled as the kitsune got closer. Naruto was let to the trunk of a tree. He started to look up and around the tree but he couldn't see anything.. I don't get it. The smell let me here.. There is something fishy going around here..Gaara's eyes narrowed. "What are you doing here.. and tell me for real.."The black haired oni gave Gaara a fanged grin. "Just out of curiousity.." Gaara opened his mouth to speak when he got interupted , "The name's Sasuke.. and by the way.. your blonde friend is over there by the tree.." Gaara looked over to Naruto, "He's not my friend." Sasuke smiled slightly. "I thought he was.." Naruto continuously looked over the tree for some sort of clue. A falling bag of chips fell down where the kitsune stood making Naruto jump back in surprise. A bag of chips! Where the hell did that come from! "Naruto! You kitsune baka, get back over here!" He looked up, several leaves fell as the tree bush started to shake. " You stupid idiot! You gave away our positon!" He heard a female's voice. Naruto gasp, his eyes widden as he finally realized what was going on.. We were watched this whole time! " Gaara!" Naruto yelled. Gaara watched as the blonde kitsune ran towards him but didn't make it far as a small shadow flew from the tree and hit him on his back. Naruto felt his body shuting down, he started to fall to his knees. Gaara caught him from behind before he fell foward, he was lucky that Naruto was still in consciousness. "Are you alright?" Gaara asked, looking down at the kitsune who's eyes were getting heavy. "Hai.." Naruto said quietly before his eyes fully closed. Gaara shook his body."Naruto? Naruto!" "Forget about it.. they got him with a tranquilizer dart.." He looked up, Sasuke was standing behind him. They were surrounded by four ninjas, Sachiko the only kunoichi( female ninja). One had a black dog beside his leg, snarling at them. "You won't be able to run.." Miyamoto said to them. "Really.." Gaara grinned, looking up at the ninja wearing black , thin, sunglasses with his shoulder length brown hair tied back into a ponytail. "Try us.. we are chunin ninjas.." Sasuke made a several hand signs, "Tiger..horse.." before cupping his hand over his mouth, "Katon: Gokakyu no Justu! (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique)" A giant flame shot out the small hole in his hand, searing anything it touched. Miyamoto, Tsume, and Kuromaru jumped out the way before the flame touched them. Sasuke saw the kunoichi jump, floating above them, and threw daggers at them. "Watch out!" Sasuke yelled, he jumped out of the way. Gaara still had the unconscious Naruto in his lap.Gaara managed to use his sand from his gourd as a sheld to protect them as the black daggers shot down. "Are you two allright?" Sasuke ran to Gaara's side. "Miyamoto.. we better hurry up before the kitsune wakes up.." Sachiko yelled. " Got any ideas?"Miyamoto asked. "One.." She pulled a small tube one of the pockets of her vest, popped the cork out with her teeth, and put her thumb in the hole so it wouldn't spill. "Cover me!" She ran towards the demons. Gaara saw her running towards them, using the sand, he tried to prevent her from attacking. She dissapeared, leaving the oni and tasuki stunned, she was too fast for them to see. A leg shot out and Gaara blocked it with his sand. "Yeeeeeaaaaahhhh!" Tsume yelled, the dog followed. Tsume threw a punch at Sasuke but ended up having it blocked. He raised his other fist up, it barely scratched the surface of Sasuke's cheek, leaving a long scratch mark. While the oni was distracted , Kuromaru went for Sasuke's legs, biting and chewing, trying not to let go. "Why you mangy little mutt.." Sasuke grollen. Kuromaru yelped as the oni grabbed him from the scruff his neck and sent him flying. "Kuromaru!" Tsume cried out, as he watched his precious companion fly over some trees and land in the bushes below. Sasuke snickered, he didn't notice a rather large ball speeding towards him, sending him slamming into Gaara and Naruto. "Ouch.." Gaara grumbled. "Nice going, Oni baka.." "Shut up.." The only words the oni could come up with,his head hurt... Gaara and Sasuke struggled to get up, rubbing their heads. This is my chance! Sachiko let go of the opening and threw the containter up, letting the white substance fall over the yokais like snow. The two yokais got up. Gaara and Sasuke was standing back to back, Naruto starting to stir from the effect of the dart. Gaara reached his hand out, catching the white powder in his hand. "Sasuke what is this?" He started to feel heavy. Oh no..suddenly i feel drowzy and I...can't...breath... Sasuke quickly tried to cover his mouth and nose. "Gaara! Whatever you do, don't breath it in! Its sleeping.. powder.." Sasuke fell on the soft green grass fast asleep. "OI!" Gaara yelled. He too fell into deep sleep.. Both of them turned back to their yokai side. "Yeah we got em' !" Tsume yelled in relief. "Ruff, ruff!" Tsume looked down. " Hey buddy.." He picked up the little black dog up. He notice he was limping, he moved Kuromaru's right paw slightly to hear the little dog give a quick yelp and whimpered. "Uh-oh.. it seems you broke your right paw.. we are going to have someone see to that." "Yep, they sure caused us a lot of trouble.." Sachiko said in an concerned voice. " I'll say.." Chikato agreed. They heard a moan and looked down to see the kitsune starting to get up. Kuromaru jumped down despite his injury; growled and snarled at the kitsune. Naruto, who was on all fours, hissed back, showing his fangs with his kitsune ears against his head in aggression. " Easy boy.." Tsume grabbed the dog by the scruff of his neck and held him by his chest. " Why did you bother to get up?" Miyamoto asked in a sharp tone. Naruto struggled to keep his balance without falling. He looked down at Sasuke and Gaara who layed deep in sleep. "I..will..never..be..beaten..by..you.." His vision was blurry. "I..shall..have..my..revenge..for..for..your..kind..who..killed all of my people..from..my village." Naruto fell unconscious, falling face first in the grass. His words had a shocking impact on the ninjas. "His people..killed by..human hands!" Sachiko studdered. Miyamoto looked down at the kitsune with a serious look on his face.. "We have to alert the hokage..now.."
Where am I? Eveything is black..."Lord Hokage.." He heard a voice. " Hai.." A female voice replied.
"We have brough them to you.."
"Demons! What the hell are demons doing here?"
" Miss.." It was that female ninja they fought before. "The blonde kitsune one here said something about humans destroying his village.. i guess thats why they are here.."
" So they are the last of their kind.. its true then."
"What?" Naruto reconized that voice, it was that ninja with the glasses,Miyamoto..
"I heard rumors of a forest being burned in the North."
" So what are we going to do about it then.."
" Alert the other chunin and joinin in the village. I want them to be taken care of until we can settle this matter."
Both, "hai!"
"And i don't want them to be seen by the villagers or any rumors going around. The one thing i need is villagers panicing about demons in their village."
" This is strictly confendentional.."
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So how did you like it? I know its long! Its the longest chapter yet! Hopefully i can finish writing and you can find out what happens to our little yokai companions. Oh, i forgot.. Tsume's and Kuromaru's names are "Claw" and "Black" in japanese. That's right! Tsume is part of the Inu Clan like Kiba and Akamaru! The author review after this is a little intresting information that you didn't know about kitsunes, onis, and tusukis. Please Review!
