Please read and review. Basically I'm going to call the precursor who is a bit trigger happy father precursor, the one who always says dude will be called surfer-dude precursor and because I can't remeber what the other precursor was like he will be called other precursor. And yes I know this is short but it's a prologue.
Prologue
"Are you ready, Jak?" asked the father precursor. "We have something to show you."
"What?" asked Jak.
"The universe!" said the father precursor.
The precursors stepped into their orange sphere shaped ship and Jak walked casually after them. Jak looked around and found that the inside of the ship was a little larger then it looked from the outside. He assumed it was because of the precursors powers. In the center of the room an orange orb, about the size of a soccer ball was floating in midair. Surrounding the orb was four armchairs which the precursors sat in. The father precursor told Jak to sit in the chair opposite him so he did. Jak was restless and started cracking his knuckles.
"Jak, it's time I told you what exactly you are here for," said the father precursor.
Jak stopped cracking his knuckles and looked into the father precursors face.
"You know how your name is Mar?"
"Yeah, yeah I know. I'm the Mar."
"Um, dude actually you're not the Mar," said the surfer-dude precursor.
"What do you mean?" Jak demanded.
"We'll explain when we get there."
"Get where?"
"To the time of Mar of course."
The father precursor raised his staff over the orange orb which emitted several blue sparks. Jak watched as those sparks flew into the walls around him. The sparks hit carvings in the walls and travelled through, lighting up each one as it went. Soon there was four carvings lit up. Jak looked at them. The one in front of him was Jak. To his right Jak saw a carving of Samos with precursor writing underneath. To his left was a carving of Daxter. Jak stood up so he could see the carving behind him but all that is there is a figure of a man with no face.
The father precursor said,"That one is incomplete. You see the real Mar died. Something happend in the timeline when you defeated the Dark Maker.Your task is to stop him from dying. We would do it ourselves but we have limited control over what happens now. If you fail, time will be rewritten and everything we have acheived will be for nothing."
Jak stared at them for a minute and then said, "So when do we get started?"
Any reviews will be much appreciated.