A/N: This is my first scene close to a fight scene that I've written. Please don't flame. Instead review and tell me what you think.
Jak waited until Mar left before he pulled out his morph gun. He planned to use the peacemaker but would have to be careful because he hadn't thought to bring any extra ammo after he defeated Errol. At the moment he only had three peacemaker ammo. He hadn't anticipated to be hunting for a wasteland metalhead so soon after the defeat of the Dark Makers
Jak knew that even metalheads needed water and so the easiest place to find one would be at the Oasis.
Jak knew the way by heart and before he had a chance to think about how stupid it was to go after a wasteland metalhead with only three peacemaker ammo his feet started to walk. Although it was dangerous Jak felt no fear. To him this was home.
He walked past gnarled trees and broken rocks until he reached the large palm tree. That palm tree looked out of place but Jak didn't notice. Instead he kept walking ahead, letting his feet carry him. Suddenly he bumped into a large, ancient-looking, rock.
"What the hell," Jak said. Then he looked at his surroundings more closely. He was in the right place but nothing about it seemed right.
Jak put his hands against the rock and pushed, feeling the outer edges, just to make sure it wasn't another Precursor trick. Jak found it cold and moist and he felt that he was missing something. As he got around to the other side he found what had brought him to the Oasis in the first place and immediately forgot any uncomfortableness he had felt. Right infront of him was a giant metalhead that looked like a brontosaurus with a glowing yellow stone dented into it's head. Jak loaded the peacemaker and started to charge it. Soon the familiar buzzing sound of the gun echoed through the desert. The wasteland metalhead charged at Jak who had seconds to dive out of the way.
As Jak fell to the ground the peacemaker shot a ball of electric blue energy which flew straight towards the rock Jak had walked into a minute ago. A loud cracking noise echoed throughout the desert as the ball of energy met the rock. Bits of stone flew everywhere and one of the larger bits hit Jak.
Jak, to proud to utter a groan of pain, let the reassuring power of his dark side overcome him and he knew no more.
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