A/N OMG i love u all so much! the reviews made me very happy...and they cheered me up on my more sad days... ugh! so um yeah thanx for the reviews...especially emikae for her big ass one...u guys honestly made my day!

emikae: ha ha i love u...ur the best beta a girl could ever have! i love big reviews...i never got one...but i always try to give 'em...ive like always wanted one....um ok back to topic...the IV thing was so true...i didn't know how to desribe it to anyone but u did a good job of doing that...i dont know if its canerous yet all i know is that i have a tumor... thats what im guessing though because if u look tumor up in the thesaurus cancer is listed, but i dont know very much..and i dont like sharing where it's at publicly...

Jerichoholic-Edgehead: u rock...i need many prayers and such....ur also one of those very cool people who review all my chapters...hmm i hope others get ideas...jk im happy with all reviews...he (steve) thinks it's darren, but he thinks that it just might be he's hoping it's darren...but he just thinks its some other bloke named darren...i mean how many of them are in ireland? im guessing a lot but a could be wrong...

S-A: I've never gotten reviews from u b4, so if u dont mind me asking out of pure cureousity, have u ever read my story before? just wondering...but thanks for being sympathetic and such, u also rock...if u haven't noticed im very grateful to my reviewers....and ill try and stay away from depression, ive had it before, and it sucks...my life must sound like a soap opera, but i assure u that this is all true stuff....

JBanana:Thanks, this next one is very snifty in my opinion....(snifty is my word, and it is a combo of spiffy and nifty, and it just cliked...)

Disclaimer: If I owned this then i wouldnt get such beautiful reviews...so i like my story...

On with the Fanfic!!!!!!!!

Darren's P.O.V.

She came out of her room looking as beautiful as ever...her long hair flowing down her back, wearing the robes I suggested...

We were just leaving when Kurda came and said that he'd finally show me around the mountain...I asked if this was okay with Elle, she nodded and said it was fine...She walked sadly back to her room...

'No! Don't go! Elle!' I thought

"Elle, would you like to walk with us? Maybe we can go to the games room, like you suggested..."

"Alright, I'll go...But only I Kurda agrees not to be sissy on the 'tour'"

"I see that your just like your aunt, and uncle...and for that matter your parents...Loyal, and true to their clan, may they be triumphant even in death..."

"CAN YOU STOP TALKING ABOUT THEM!?! I KNOW THAT THEY WERE LOYAL, AND TRUE...AND I KNOW THAT THEY'LL BE TRIUMPHANT IN DEATH...I SAW THEM BEING KILLED REMEMBER?!? NOW, CAN WE JUST LEAVE?"

"Um, yes sure, sorry to hurt your feelings El...Shall we go miss?"

"First off don't call me 'el' only my friends, family, and fiance can call me that...Second off don't try and be sweet and sissy, I hate you remember?"

"Right, uh bitch, let's go!"

Smack

"Ouch! Charna's Guts!"

"Wimp, ready to go Darren, and obscene friend of Darren?"

"Sure El..."

'ha ha ha ha ha I get to say it without getting in trouble or smacked...unlike Kurda'

"Yes-" he practically growled

We walked all around the mountain, it was very nice if that's how you want to put it, but I enjoyed it a lot.

Except for the halls of death, and exeution. That was terrible, I can't believe that they drop vampires from high up, onto stakes, until they die...How Horrible! And Kurda even said that some choose to die like that! Some way to die...and imagine that sort of pain...ouch!

Elle stared at it for a long time...then she said something truely frightening...

"One will perish on these stakes, and one will beome a new our prince..."

"Well I'll obviously be prince, but I wonder who'll die..."

"Why would you say something like that?" I wondered

"I get ideas like this, and they happen...Always has, always will...I don't know any particulars on this one though..."

"freaky..."

"Yeah, and when my parents died, all I knew was that someone I loved greatly would die, nothing more...

"Wow, you have talent...I hope I'm not the one to die!"

"Oh I doubt that it'd be you, I mean your so sweet, but in a vampire-like sort of way..."

"Um, thanks, come on let's go, this room is giving me the creeps, especially that guy..."

We left the room,and soon we got to the game room (A/N sorry guys I don't know the name of this one...)

She chose her weapon, a whip, that you tied to your wrists...I have to say she looked even hotter when she was fierce...I guess Vanez noticed me gaping, and drooling...

"Hey, you there, little boy, stop staring at my neice, I don't think she'll take to you kindly...Anyways, who are you fighting?"

"Her...Elle..."

"Oh so you've met her? She's feisty, so watch out!"

Feisty? I don't remember that sort of thing from her...And I've always known her! I mean sure she is related to him, whomever he is...I chose throwing knives, but I didn't know how to use them...Not smart on my case!

We got ontothe bars, I swayed to the left, and right...Trying to gain my balence, She, however, just stood there perfectly balenced. Shifting her hips, standing there impatiently.

"Are you done yet? You look like an idiot..."

"Gee thanks..."

"Never say 'gee' ever again, it makes you sound like Kurda..."

"I like Kurda, he seems nice..."

"Now that's a diss on my behalf, guess it's time to whoop your butt Shan..." She said casually still standing there waiting for me.

I stood still finally, and she jumped onto my bar. Walking closer to me, trapping me in a corner... I thought I was done for, then she dropped her weapon.

' That's it? I've practically won...Better say something to show her how good I'am at fighting...'

"Oh too bad El, I thought you were going to win..."

"Don't get your hopes up Shan..." She had an evil grin. Then she closed her eyes, put her pointer fingers on her temples, and stood there, concentrating hard. It looked like she had a headache, I edged closer to her, she heard me and backed up a bit then.

WHAM

I fell down...But, I was still, on the bars, straddled in between them, my legs hanging down, god damnit! that hurt!

"What did you just do?"

"Are you okay? And I did this thing Vancha taught me, it's like how to fight without weapons...incredibly useful!"

"Damn El, that hurt!!!"

"Oh, I'm so sorry Darren! Here take my hand, let me help you up"

I thought she was going all soft and normal with me, being her sweet Elle self, helping me up, but then...

WHAM

She did it again, except this time she just pushed me down...and I fell through the bars, lying on my back, whining...

The others loved how she was so daring, and rude, and wise. They cheered for her, and she enjoyed in immensly. There I was, lying on the floor, embarressed, disouraged, and mad...Kurda walked over, and helped me up. Then he said...

"You shouldn't fight, anymore...Don't do anything stupid..."

IfoughtArrawiththesamesuccessasbeforenotagoodeveningonmybehalf...

A/NI'msorryaboutthespacingmy space bar wouldn't work up there it was the single weirdest thing.so bear with me and such. Today was horrible, my tumor was bugging me and I had to go home...It sucks, and I've honestly never been in this much pain...Even when I like got stitches, it wasn't even this bad...Bear with me emikae on not adding on "Love at almost first sight" I'm also writing a new one, I'll be calling it "sleeping with the devil" its good, and evil, but yet hillarious...so um yeah, please review! i love you all so much!