AN: Yay my first poem! All reviews appreciated (both good and bad). But please don´t tell me only that it´s a piece of but tell why as well so that I can improve. Thanks
A dark
figure slowly approaches,
under his
stare we're but little cockroaches,
his steps
are fast and sure,
he's so
fast, he's just a blur.
Well built
muscles, the symbol of strength,
long
dark hair of shoulder length,
a
few red streaks mark his head,
one
thing he inherited from his dad.
Now let's
look closer onto his face,
you
can't see much because of his pace,
yet
you might notice his lips oh so full,
his
chocolate brown eyes could never be dull.
No matter
how hot, he's still frightening,
the
passages are lit only by lightning,
the
tall figure comes to an end,
and
there stands his life's best friend.
The taller
boy's look is so haunted,
his
dad is the worst criminal wanted,
and
now he escaped his solitary prison,
his
path is marked with dried crimson.
He is
coming for his son like he always dreamed,
when
the boy's mother found out, she only screamed,
he
wants him to join his destructive plans,
and
so he ruined their homecoming dance.
The
kids then panicked, were shouting loud,
and
everyone tried from the hall to run out,
only
the tall figure stood and waited,
abandoned
by the girl he just dated.
It's
been a few years since he last saw his father,
he
needed him not, he had his mother,
and
now his father wanted to claim,
something
that could never be tame.
You can't
tame fire, it's too wild,
not
like water so soothing and mild,
fire
can save, yet it can burn,
be
prepared Barron Battle, now it's your turn.
The boy's
hands were engulfed in flames,
the
revenge he wanted, now he claims,
he
fought his father, and even won,
back
to the prison his father was gone.
And so
ended the fear of this boy,
he
always feared to become a toy,
but
now he is strong, he can fight back,
though
anyone innocent he wouldn't attack.
This is
the story of a young lad,
who
an inner battle always had,
hero
or villain which was his fate?
he
has his answer from this date.
A fight
between Battle and Peace,
but
Battle fell to his knees,
he
will follow the path of his mother,
a
hero making villains shudder,
The story of Warren Peace.