Is this right Ch.3

Pleasant Surprises

I woke up and found her in my arms snuggled up against my chest, I was surprised to say the least, but I didn't move at all. This was the best I think I could have been right now. I was so busy in my thoughts I didn't notice her wake up. "Well, this is a pleasant surprise" She said groggily "I know" I replied

3 Months Later ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Me and Zula we've grown so close over these last 3 months, I've grown to love her even more. We share our bed like friends, even though I wish we were more.

That Night))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

"Hello Zula" I said lying on the bed. "Hi Katara" she said laying down also

"Z-Zula can I tell you something" I said nervously "Sure Katara" She said smiling at me "Well I've known you for 3 months and over those 3 months I've came to figure out that I Lo…" I couldn't finish what I was saying because a boom came and hit the ship "I'll tell you later" I said while we were both running to see what happened. When we reached the top, my heart froze at what I saw, A flying bison. "Katara!" Aang yelled "we're here to save you" "Aang" I yelled. Happy to see him and my brother, then it dawned on me, they probably think Zula kidnapped me. "Look Out Katara, there's a fire bender behind you" Sokka said releasing his boomerang "Sokka stop" I yelled but it was too late. It hit her with a sickening thud; I let out a scream and started sobbing over her body. "lets go Katara" Sokka said Smirking "I did my job and protected you" "Do you know what you've done" I screamed "Leave now" "What" he asked "not without you" "GO" I screamed at the top of my lungs "You may have just killed the girl I loved" I whispered "What was that" Aang asked "MY IDIOTIC BROTHER JUST KILLED THE GIRL I LOVED NOW GET OFF THIS BOAT" I yelled Aang got on Appa, but sokka wouldn't move. "Go Sokka" I demanded venomously "Not without you Katara" He said. Since he wouldn't budge I decided to throw water whips at him. The first time he didn't move still but they got bigger and bigger. Finally he left, and I turned my attention to Zula. She had a nasty gash on the side of her head; I started to gather water for my healing ritual. I spread the water over the wound, and then I prayed for it to work. It did but she wasn't breathing. I bended some water out of her throat and then she coughed up some more. "Zula" I cried "yes" she replied weakly I hugged her tightly and whispered in her ear "I love you". She stiffened and pulled away, I thought she was rejecting me until she kissed me on the lips passionately, and whispered "I love you too". We went down the stairs into her room where we woke up as friends in each others arm. But, we fell asleep as lovers, we kissed passionately, and whispered I love you before falling asleep with her arms around my waist and mines around hers