I don't know I seem inspired to keep writing more…I've dropped my other stories for this one it's so hard to keep away from this story. I finally finished reading Eldest, like omg how could Murtagh do that to Eragon… I changed the spell for what Erat said to the rider Knurlhien to Knurlnien in chapter 3.
Chapter 4: Battlefield Allies
His sword fell out of his hand, falling to his knees just after the Urgals fell. The rider took of his had to reveal….
Aryan was in shock and so was Pär, the rider was a girl. A human girl! Their mouths dropped open as they stared at the girl rider. "All this time, thinking that this rider was a man and we were wrong." said Pär
"She fights like a man and I haven't heard of any girl rider." said Aryan
The rider glanced over her shoulder staring at the exact spot the elves were sitting. It was if the ride new they were sitting in that exact tree. She looked down at the ground, "Isidar…" started the rider, but paused, unable to speak. "…Isidar I feel like we accomplished nothing. We tried to free a village and all we did was kill it. We left with twenty or so villagers to save my sister and-father- and we failed." The rider wiped away her tears and stood up placing her hat on back on her head. Walking over to every villager's body to see if they were alive and would require heal, no villagers lived. Then she walked around to see if any Urgals needed healing. She came across the leader of the Urgals, he was alive but barely. He had a sword slash across his gut which pierced the little armor he had. Running her hand across the slash, she had done this to him. The Urgal had lowered his defenses making it easy for the rider to penetrate his mind. She found no sign the Urgal would hurt her, "I will not hurt you!" said the rider as she withdrew herself from his mind. "I heal you! Waíse heill." Be healed. Grabbing a water skin from one of the villager's pouch, she handed it to the Urgal.
He grabbed it without hesitation and started to gulp it down. The rider moved away to allow the Urgal to stand. As the Urgal stood he stood higher than a normal Urgal, making him a Kull. Handing the water skin back to the rider he said "I thank you Rider. For you kindness and I am truly in your debt!" He raised his head high baring his throat and the rider did the same.
"No need Nar?" The rider stopped and glanced at the Kull not knowing his name.
"Nar Garzhvog." said the Kull
"No need, Nar Garzhvog for I know you were under the control by Galbatorix."
"Yes, and I am sorry for killing your kind."
"Aye, I am truly sorry for killing you kind and your wife."
"I would strike you down for killing her but I know that she was being controlled by Galbatorix and you were only saving yourself. For that I shall not kill you but I do wish we can make peace…" Nar Garzhvog paused.
"My family and friends call me Knurlnien, Heart of Stone!"
"And they are wise to call you that, Knurlnien! I wish to make peace with you, and an ally!"
"And I you!" The rider and the Kull raised their heads high showing their bare necks. Then the rider stuck out her hand and they clasped forearms and shook. The Kulls hand devoured the riders arm.
"I look forward to fight along side of you, not against you, Knurlnien." said the Kull as they released their clasp.
"And I you, Nar Garzhvog." Garzhvog unleashed a mighty roar addressing the dragon, who roared back. He picked up his weapon and slung his wife's body over his shoulder, then ran off towards the northeast.
The rider watched Garzhvog she was unable to see him anymore, turning back to the battlefield she gathered up every body and placed them in two different piles, Urgals in one pile and villagers in the other. She wiped the sweat from her forehead and sat down on the hot sand. The rider looked up at the sun that was about to set, jumping to her feet she unbuckled her dragons saddle. She pullout a giant tarp and poles, the rider stuck the poles in the sand and attached the tarp on top of the poles.
Will give the parchment to Queen Islanzadí in the morning, said the rider in her mind to Isidar.
What did you think readers? Got a question what's Galbatorix dragons name (the one he has now)?