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The Killer is in the Room!
Chapter 5 Death is in the Air
The second night arrived. The air reeked of burning flesh.
One big group huddled together. Naruto couldn't help thinking about his two closest friends, dead at the bottom of a stairwell.
At least Sasuke died heroicly, and Sakura died happily in Sasuke's arms. Burning rage filled Naruto's body. The marks on his cheeks grew into large gashes, a great chakra growing out of his heart.
"KAKASHI!" He screamed in rage, "I WILL DESTROY YOU!"
Twelve rooms away, A boy lay on a spike in the cellar of the large building. As The clouds passed a small window by the scene,
the boy's skin grew darker. A red glow eminated from his neck, in the form of three intertwined ovals...
Lee rocked in a corner, thinking deeply. SAKURA.
He thought. Tears welled up in his eyes. He quickly brushed them away. Not even this would discourage him...or so he hoped. Naruto quickly stood and left their presence, without saying a word. His own aura of chakra broke a hole in his obstacle, a brick wall. "I...Is it possible to...get to the top of this house?" Kiba asked.
"Hopefully..." Lee mumbled, still thinking of his one love. "Where.
is TenTen?" "...LEE..."A voice came from the closet on the other side of the room.
"SAURA?"He asked, sure of the voice.
"...LEE..." He bolted for the closet. Kiba ran faster. He blocked Lee's way.
"NO LEE!"He commanded. Lee simply kicked Kiba in the stomach and pushed him aside, writhing in pain. Lee reached for the knob.
"...LEE..." "PLEASE, LEE, DON'T DO IT!" Hinata screamed. He turned the knob.
but fell backwards onto the floor, Breaking out in tears.
"I know Sakura is dead. But I wish it wasn't true. I would do anything to have her back..." He reached again for the doorknob, opening the door finally. "S...SAKURA!" He cried. The obvious fake reached her hand out, for Lee to take hold of. He did. The monster seemed to pull him completely away from his body, the eyes closing suddenly. Lee turned around, his eyes white. "SA...KU...RA..." He lifted his limp body with no effort at all, as if being held by a puppeteer's strings. "SA...KU...RA"
He got up and slowly limped like a true puppet towards Hinata, who was shaking on the ground.
"NO! LEE! Im Hinata! Not Sakura! NOT SAKURA"
"SA..KU...RA..." He continued foward. Back at the closet, the monster held Lee's transparent body in one hand, and had bitten its thumb, about to lay its hand on the ground, a summoning jutsu. Kiba did everything he could, still in pain, to stop the menacing hand from reaching the floor. He was clinging to the arm, nearly flat on the ground, nearly crushed by the strength of just one arm. Kiba ran out of strength. He let go of the arm, defeated. A clone of himself, Akamaru, saved the true form from immenent destruction. "SUMMONING NO JUSTU!" The monster screamed, with unhuman volume , "POWER OF FIVE" A transparent Giant rose from the floor. The form split into five,
each one forming into a recognizable shape. Shikamaru,Chouji,Ino,Sakura, and TenTen appeared.
"Then she was taken." Kiba realised, still writhing in pain. Shikamaru and Chouji approached Kiba. Akamaru growled furiously, but was no match.
Hinata screamed. Lee approached slowly.
"SA...KU...RA!" He yelled and lunged for her neck. His image shredded in a blue mist, as Naruto jumped straight through the form. Hinata's heart pounded, as the Unreal image of the Nine-Tails Fox flowed around Naruto's glowing body. "RASENGAN!" He called out, almost as loud as the beast itself. He heartlessly ripped through every former friend, finally , releasing his vicious attack on his last target, Sakura. A soft "Thank You" could be heard. The beast let go of Lee, who slowly dissapeared. "...Goodbye..."He said , unseeable. "Do not forget me"
Naruto turned to the killer. His human form was almost consumed by the infinate rage flowing out of his heart, fueling the Nine-Tails.
With a single step, a soft shockwave flowed through the room. He dashed for the monster, his fist clenched , and collided with another image. The monster had copied Naruto's form, and his every move. Much like Shikamaru's shadow jutsu, every move Naruto made was mirrored by the monster. EVERY BIT OF DAMAGE IS FELT BY BOTH... Hinata thought. OH, NO. PLEASE NOT THIS.
Naruto drew his hands, claws dangling, and plunged himself through the stomach.
The shadow of Naruto faded, as the true monster burned, screaming, into ashes.
Naruto fell to the ground, his chakra fading. Hinata could feel him dying.
DUNDUNDUNDUNDUN! What do you say to that? Most suprising chapter? MAbye.
Will Naruto join the others, leaving Kiba and Hinata to die? Find out soon.
I expect a lot of comments about this chapter.