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Piper and Leo together (Leo is a Whitelighter again) have Chris (15) , Wyatt (16) and Melinda (5)
Paige and Kyle (he is still a whitelighter) are together - have two twin daughters Pearl and Posy age 6
Phoebe and Jayden ( he is a witch has the power of supernatural speed and invisibility) have a daughter Prudence age 7

Chapter two - sweet dreams

A demon shimmered into a dark, dingy cave and bowed deeply to the demon standing in front of him. The demon in charge was called Vindar, and was a very powerful demon. He looked at his minion and said in a deep voice ' Is he back'
'No my lord, he was killed by the second son and the babysitter'
'Babysitter?' he asked

'Yes my lord she holds great powers of the elements, I saw the whole thing no one will be able to get the girl when she is around, she is almost as powerful as the charmed ones and she is new to the craft.
'Then maybe my focus has been on the wrong person, the power of the elements is a much better power than the force field of the child'
'And my Lord how do you expect to get the powers of the witch, without killing her first'

'By making her weak enough to steal them from her, I have made a poison which will put her into a deep sleep and put her into a nightmare world where she sees all the evil happening in the city, death, starvation, rape everything. It will make her so scared, weak all I have to do is a simple spell to steal her powers' he said with an evil sneer
'But my Lord, why don't you just do the spell' the minion said confused
'Because if she is as powerful as you said she was she will be able to fight the spell, and besides what's the fun in that?'
As Vindar said this he walked and grabbed an athame and ran his fingers along the blade before dipping it into the bubbling cauldron on the other side of the lair. The cauldron hissed as he lifted the athame which was now covered in poison.
'Take this and stab the girl with it the poison will slowly work it's way into the body and all we have to do is wait' he laughed wickedly 'Now go' he said with authority
The lower level demon bowed and shimmered out
'And let the nightmares begin' Vindar said to himself

(Inside the Manor)

Cheerful laughter could be heard all through the manor.
'Did you see his face' Paris said with tears running down her face
' What before or after you turned him into a pig' Chris replied gasping for air
'It was not my fault I dropped the potions I was making, but I will have to remember what I put in them, who would guess that there combined they can turn an annoying potion teacher into a pig' she burst out laughing again as she said it
'I know but Aunt Paige looked pissed'
'I know but she let me off with a warning and I have to baby-sit Pearl and Posy next Saturday, not that I mind, she added quickly but they always orb off. They think it's funny and I can't exactly follow them'
Chris smiled at the thought of her running around the city looking for them, 'I'll help if you want, that way we can follow them together' They smiled at each other.
But the moment was cut short as the demon shimmered in,
'Hello Witch'
'Goodbye demon' Paris replied confidently as she threw fire at the him. He dodge out the way and shimmered behind Chris.

'NO' She screamed as she pushed Chris out of the way the demon stabbed her with the athame she looked down and saw the blood and fell to the ground. Chris stood up and blew up the demon. He ran over to Paris and held her

'Paris come on don't die' he said desperately
'DAD, Wyatt, somebody help'