A Strange World

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, or Hinata would have asked him out in ep. 1 XD

All ninja are 16 and are Chuunin

Naruto: YAY IM A CHUUNIN!

Me: yeah… Now shut up -.-

Naruto fine…

Me: any way… Paring is hinaXOC, HINANARU FANS PLZ DON'T KILL ME! I am one of you, I just wanted to try something new. anyways, on with the story!

Chapter 1 Rejected

Hyuuga Hinata had just gotten back from an easy mission. But she would rather go on an S-rank than face what was coming up next. Her teammates had set her up for a date with Naruto at Ichirako. Naruto, god help him, had no idea what was going on and was very confused. However, when he got there, he saw Hinata standing there waiting for him, her face as red as a neon light. She ordered a bowl of beef ramen, but by the time she finished that one Naruto had finished 10. After 2 more bowls, Hinata finally got her courage up.

"N-Naruto-kun… I-I have s-something to s-say…" she managed to stammer out.

"Huh? What is it, Hinata-chan?" he asked her

"W-Well…. I-I-I…." 'He called me chan…. He might like me!' she said in her thoughts. "I-I… I l-love you Naruto-kun!" she called out.

Naruto was shocked. When Kiba had said she wanted to tell him something, he had not expected this. "I-I'm sorry to disappoint you, Hinata… but while I was away with ero-sennin, I kinda…. found a girlfriend."

Now it was Hinata's turn to be shocked. She didn't think rejection would feel so… painful. She lost it, and ran out of the stand and out toward the village gates.

"Hey Hina…. Where do you… HEY! STOP RIGHT THERE HINATA!" yelled a guard, but she just ignored him and ran out of the village. 'This…. This wouldn't have happened… if only I had told him earlier…' she thought to her self as she ran and ran, until she could run no more. As she settled down, she noticed a fence behind her.

FLASHBACK

"Oi, Kurenai-sensei! Can we go in there?" Kiba asked, pointing at a fence.

"NO! Shinobi are to never enter there!" Kurenai practically shouted at him.

"I was just asking…sheesh" Kiba said as he huffed off."

END FLASHBACK

Hinata walked forward away from the fence until she reached a huge clearing. In the middle of the clearing, she found what looked like a portal or a vortex. "Well, there's nothing for me back there…" she sobbed as she stepped toward it.

Not bad for a first fiction, eh? I think i did pretty well... well, please review so i can know how to improve!