To all the people who reviewed this story,
First of all, thank you for all your review. I took your criticisms and compliments seriously and decided that maybe I should continue this story. But first I will need some help. I need an English beta-reader and of course, new ideas for the next story.
If any one can offer to help, do send me an email. Include your penname and email address. That's all.
Yours,
$corchi0